Shahr me hain bahut mautabar dar ba dar ( Qadeertoopchi )

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Manzile’n bhi gaai’n aur safar dar ba dar
Ho gaye hum tumhe choorkar dar ba dar

Eak mai hi nahi hun idhar dar ba dar
Shahr me hain bahut mautabar dar ba dar

Ho gaai chandni kya khafa chand se
Chand phirta hai kyun raat bhar dar ba dar

Mil na paaye kabhi khud se khud hi miyan
Jab ke khud me rahe umr bhar dar ba dar

Ghar ke aangan ka budha shajar kya gira
Ho gaya pal me dekho ye ghar dar ba dar

Kya kahen ab ghazal hum yahan par qadeer
Fun ki nagri me hai ab hunar dar ba dar

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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2012, 10:33:34 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut umdaa peshkash dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: September 20, 2012, 10:37:06 AM »
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v nice...
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«Reply #3 on: September 20, 2012, 11:59:39 AM »
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Qadeer Bhaijaan Aadaab!


bade dinoN baad aapko mehfil meiN dekhkar badi khushi
ho rahi hai... behad dilko lagne wali gazal kahi hai
sabhi ashaar behad dilfareb rahe... Usual Smile
Waise puri kalaam hi behad umda hai par hume
khususan chaNdni aur chaNd wala aur Shajar wala
Ashaar behad khoob laga... Usual Smile

IS dilfareb kalaam par humari hazaaron dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
 
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«Reply #4 on: September 20, 2012, 06:00:42 PM »
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Bahut  khoob , Qadeer  saheb . Bahut  intazaar  karaya.
Lekin  khubsurat  ghazal  ke  liye  dheron  daad.
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«Reply #5 on: September 20, 2012, 06:39:45 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on September 20, 2012, 10:08:18 AM
Manzile’n bhi gaai’n aur safar dar ba dar
Ho gaye hum tumhe choorkar dar ba dar

Eak mai hi nahi hun idhar dar ba dar
Shahr me hain bahut mautabar dar ba dar

Ho gaai chandni kya khafa chand se
Chand phirta hai kyun raat bhar dar ba dar

Mil na paaye kabhi khud se khud hi miyan
Jab ke khud me rahe umr bhar dar ba dar

Ghar ke aangan ka budha shajar kya gira
Ho gaya pal me dekho ye ghar dar ba dar

Kya kahen ab ghazal hum yahan par qadeer
Fun ki nagri me hai ab hunar dar ba dar

Qadeertoopchi

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaa Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ek rau iss pe
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«Reply #6 on: September 21, 2012, 01:34:13 AM »
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bohut khoob Qadeer sahab, pehli baar aap ka kalaam padha, aur sach kahuN to is noiyyat ki shayri kam hi padhne ko milti hai yoindia par. lajwab ghazal kahi hai apne. har shair ghazal ka shair hai, dheeroon daaad qubool kijiye...
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2012, 10:17:10 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 20, 2012, 10:33:34 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahut umdaa peshkash dheron daad

Dr.Saini Saheb ,,,Karam Farmai ke liye shukriyah .>Allah apko khuch rakhe ..

Dua go

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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2012, 10:18:31 AM »
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Quote from: gaytri gupta on September 20, 2012, 10:37:06 AM
v nice...

Mahutrama Gaytri Gupta Sahibah ...Shukriyah >>khush rahe'n
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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2012, 10:21:18 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 20, 2012, 11:59:39 AM
Qadeer Bhaijaan Aadaab!


bade dinoN baad aapko mehfil meiN dekhkar badi khushi
ho rahi hai... behad dilko lagne wali gazal kahi hai
sabhi ashaar behad dilfareb rahe... Usual Smile
Waise puri kalaam hi behad umda hai par hume
khususan chaNdni aur chaNd wala aur Shajar wala
Ashaar behad khoob laga... Usual Smile

IS dilfareb kalaam par humari hazaaron dili daad O
mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
 


Mere Dost mere Mohsin ,,bhai Parwaz Sahib ,,,Ghazal pe apka tabsera mahubbat ka pata deta hai ...apka huzne nazar hai ....aap mere karam farma hai'n ..Apke husne zaan ko salam ...Allah apko ek taweel umr se nawaze ...

APka bhai
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«Reply #10 on: September 21, 2012, 10:24:07 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 20, 2012, 06:00:42 PM
Bahut  khoob , Qadeer  saheb . Bahut  intazaar  karaya.
Lekin  khubsurat  ghazal  ke  liye  dheron  daad.

Mahutram Hassan Siddiuee Sahib ,,,Taakhir ke liye mazrat khaw bhi hun aur sharmindah bhi ,,,ghazal ki pazirai ke liye apke huzoor sarapa sipaas hun ..Allah apko umre nuh ata kare..

Khadim

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Quote from: adil bechain on September 20, 2012, 06:39:45 PM
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ek rau iss pe

Bhai aadil saheb ..Salam Alaikum ,,,,Apki wahhhhh ne is faqeer-o-haqeer insaan ka dil loot liya ...Allah apko do jahan ki barkato'n se nawaze ....Ye RAU ka uqda mujhe pe nahi khula ?..rahenumai farmaye'n ...

Apka bhai

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«Reply #12 on: September 21, 2012, 10:30:06 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on September 21, 2012, 01:34:13 AM
bohut khoob Qadeer sahab, pehli baar aap ka kalaam padha, aur sach kahuN to is noiyyat ki shayri kam hi padhne ko milti hai yoindia par. lajwab ghazal kahi hai apne. har shair ghazal ka shair hai, dheeroon daaad qubool kijiye...

Mahutram Aarish Sahib ....Ghazal pe apka tabsera faqr ka baaic bana ..Ache sher o achi ghazal ke liye ache qari ka hona zarori hota hai ...Apse Ahle ilm o sukhan fahm hazraat ki dad mere liye aabe hayat hai ....Allah apko umre khizr ata kare'

Dua go

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«Reply #13 on: September 21, 2012, 10:38:50 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on September 20, 2012, 10:08:18 AM
Manzile’n bhi gaai’n aur safar dar ba dar
Ho gaye hum tumhe choorkar dar ba dar

Eak mai hi nahi hun idhar dar ba dar
Shahr me hain bahut mautabar dar ba dar

Ho gaai chandni kya khafa chand se
Chand phirta hai kyun raat bhar dar ba dar

Mil na paaye kabhi khud se khud hi miyan
Jab ke khud me rahe umr bhar dar ba dar

Ghar ke aangan ka budha shajar kya gira
Ho gaya pal me dekho ye ghar dar ba dar

Kya kahen ab ghazal hum yahan par qadeer
Fun ki nagri me hai ab hunar dar ba dar

Qadeertoopchi


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«Reply #14 on: September 21, 2012, 02:00:37 PM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on September 20, 2012, 10:08:18 AM
Manzile’n bhi gaai’n aur safar dar ba dar
Ho gaye hum tumhe choorkar dar ba dar

Eak mai hi nahi hun idhar dar ba dar
Shahr me hain bahut mautabar dar ba dar

Ho gaai chandni kya khafa chand se
Chand phirta hai kyun raat bhar dar ba dar

Mil na paaye kabhi khud se khud hi miyan
Jab ke khud me rahe umr bhar dar ba dar

Ghar ke aangan ka budha shajar kya gira
Ho gaya pal me dekho ye ghar dar ba dar

Kya kahen ab ghazal hum yahan par qadeer
Fun ki nagri me hai ab hunar dar ba dar

Qadeertoopchi

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