SHAMMA - E - HUSN KA PARWAANA ....................HASAN

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«Reply #15 on: December 18, 2012, 04:13:29 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 17, 2012, 05:56:57 AM
mashaa allhaa maaskaa allah aaj to poore mood men hain bhaai jaan ghaal ko syaah color men rang do kaheen nazar n lag jaaye bahut khoob dheron daad bhaai jaan aap khush rahen
Saini  saheb  ,  bahut  bahut  shukriya  .  Aap  ki  duaaein  sath  rahein to  nazar  nahin  lag  sakti .
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«Reply #16 on: December 18, 2012, 06:00:00 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 17, 2012, 06:17:33 AM
Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne jee behad pyaari kalaam kahi hai janab...
Bade hi dilkash aur umdaa ahsaas O khayaal se buni hai aapki
yeH kalaam ... Usual Smile


Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe par yeH qouted ashaar hume behad khoob
lage... Usual Smile

Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

PARWAAZ   SAHEB ,  GHAZAL  PASAND  KARNE  AUR  HAUSLA AFZAI 
KE  LIYE  BAHUT  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA  .  KHUSH  RAHYE . HASAN
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«Reply #17 on: December 18, 2012, 09:25:04 AM »
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Thanks , M B  saheb . Khush  rahye .


Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on December 17, 2012, 06:37:36 AM
gr8888888 ghazal ,sir
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«Reply #18 on: December 18, 2012, 09:35:40 AM »
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bohut umda hasan sir bohut acha likha hai aapne
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«Reply #19 on: December 18, 2012, 09:50:47 AM »
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«Reply #20 on: December 18, 2012, 10:12:01 AM »
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Quote from: Kaushal Sharma on December 17, 2012, 07:13:51 AM
Zabardast Zabardast Zabardast Creation Sir Ji...
Thanks , Thanks , Thanks  Kaushal  ji .  Khush  rahye  ,  Hasan
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«Reply #21 on: December 18, 2012, 11:28:26 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on December 17, 2012, 08:07:04 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoobsurat andaaz me likhi hui khoobsurat ghazal.. bahut bahut khoob Sirji....!!!
BAHUT  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA , HRIDAY  JI . DUAAEIN .
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«Reply #22 on: December 18, 2012, 11:58:20 AM »
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Bahot khoob Hasan badi hi khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. Bahut daad pesh karta hun lekin dusra sher samajh nahi aaya ke sheikh sahab islaah ke shauq mein maikhane ke aadi kaise ho gaye. Agar wazahat kar dein to mehrbani hogi. Shukriya.
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«Reply #23 on: December 18, 2012, 01:09:48 PM »
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«Reply #24 on: December 18, 2012, 02:12:52 PM »
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Quote from: Riyaz Ashna on December 18, 2012, 11:58:20 AM
Bahot khoob Hasan badi hi khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne. Bahut daad pesh karta hun lekin dusra sher samajh nahi aaya ke sheikh sahab islaah ke shauq mein maikhane ke aadi kaise ho gaye. Agar wazahat kar dein to mehrbani hogi. Shukriya.

Bahut shukriya Riyaz Ashna . Aapki qabliyat aur baareekbeen naqqaad nazron ka main qaail hoon ki aap har laghzish pakad lete hain.Is web par main sab se anaadi shakh hoon jo ghalti per ghalti karta rahta hai magar mutashairi se baaz nahi aata . Yeh bhi usi ki eik misaal hai.Bhai jahaan tak main samajhta hoon Shaikh ji shayeron ki nazar main hamesha mazaq ka nishaana bane hain aur unhein rindon ki islaah ki koshish se khaas taur se mansoob kiya gaya hai . Main samajhta hoon ki is lihaaz se unki khaas nazar maikashon aur maikada per rahti hai aur woh isi mahoul mein khoye rahte hain. Bus isi soch ke tanaazir mein yeh sher kaha hai.Is se zyada bhai mere aql nahi hai jo mazeed wazahat  kar sakoon . Abhi thora thora seekhne ki koshish kar raha hoon.Aap ki aur deegar achhe likhne waalon ke kalaam se bhi istafaada karta rahta hoon . Aapki duaaon ka talib hoon aur guzarish karta hoon ki aapki nazr e karam is web per aam taur per bhi ho jaaye shaayed kuchh aur learners ko bhi faayeda pahunch jaaye. Duaon ke sath , Hasan
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«Reply #25 on: December 18, 2012, 02:22:39 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 17, 2012, 05:27:52 AM

Shamma - e - Husn    ka   Parwaana   hua   jaata   hai ,
Mera   dil    aap    ka   deewana    hua   jaata   hai


Shouq - Islaaah    meiN    deewana     hua   jaata   hai ,
Sheikh   abb   Aadi - e - Mayekhaana   hua   jaata   hai


Phir  kisi  Shokh  ne  iss  dil  meiN  qadam  rakkha  hai,
Phir   se    aabaad   yeh    Veeraana   hua   jaata   hai


Unn se  tanhaai  meiN  do  baateiN  zara  kar  lee  thheeN ,
Itni   see    baat    ka    Afsaana    hua    jaata    hai
 

Zikr - e - Mahboob   zara    yaar   se   kya   kar   daala ,
Uss   ka    Andaaz     Raqeebaana     hua    jaata     hai
 

Aaj   pee   kar   teri    Makhmoor   nigaahoN   se   'Hasan' ,
Aashiq - e - Nargis - e - Mastaana     hua    jaata    hai
be had khubsurat ghazal ,......bohat bohat bohat c daad ,.....
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«Reply #26 on: December 18, 2012, 04:55:33 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 17, 2012, 05:27:52 AM

Shamma - e - Husn    ka   Parwaana   hua   jaata   hai ,
Mera   dil    aap    ka   deewana    hua   jaata   hai
pahli baar aaj mujh pe diwaane hue jaa rahe ho.baat kya hai koi kaam aan pada hai jo maskebaazi chall rahi hai icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek icon_geek

Shouq - Islaaah    meiN    deewana     hua   jaata   hai ,
Sheikh   abb   Aadi - e - Mayekhaana   hua   jaata   hai
ishq aur mushq chhupaye nahin chhupte .tumhaari khata nahin hai ji
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Phir  kisi  Shokh  ne  iss  dil  meiN  qadam  rakkha  hai,
Phir   se    aabaad   yeh    Veeraana   hua   jaata   hai
main shokh-vokh nahin hoon samjhe. ab tum ne dekh liya hoga aur dil mein basaa liya to meri kya ghalti hai ismein. acha ab tak kisi ne tumhein dastak nahin diya tha...oh my god icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent

Unn se  tanhaai  meiN  do  baateiN  zara  kar  lee  thheeN ,
Itni   see    baat    ka    Afsaana    hua    jaata    hai
tumhaare shahr wale bilkul achche nahin hain ji. main ne to buss itna hi pucha tha bhool bhulaiya ke liye kaun si bus jaati hai aur busssss Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased

Zikr - e - Mahboob   zara    yaar   se   kya   kar   daala ,
Uss   ka    Andaaz     Raqeebaana     hua    jaata     hai
dil ki baat dil mein rakho to musibat nahin aati hai,samjhe
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Aaj   pee   kar   teri    Makhmoor   nigaahoN   se   'Hasan' ,
Aashiq - e - Nargis - e - Mastaana     hua    jaata    hai

to tum baaz nahin aaye niqaab chhupe chehre mein bhi jhaakne ki qabliyat rakhte ho.mujhe to pata hi na chala.ALLAH khair kare. Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased Embarrased


fazal sahab kya kahoon........!
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«Reply #27 on: December 18, 2012, 05:30:24 PM »
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beautiful ghazal. bahut bahut badiya likha hai hasan jee  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #28 on: December 19, 2012, 02:02:50 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 17, 2012, 05:27:52 AM

Shamma - e - Husn    ka   Parwaana   hua   jaata   hai ,
Mera   dil    aap    ka   deewana    hua   jaata   hai


Shouq - Islaaah    meiN    deewana     hua   jaata   hai ,
Sheikh   abb   Aadi - e - Mayekhaana   hua   jaata   hai


Phir  kisi  Shokh  ne  iss  dil  meiN  qadam  rakkha  hai,
Phir   se    aabaad   yeh    Veeraana   hua   jaata   hai


Unn se  tanhaai  meiN  do  baateiN  zara  kar  lee  thheeN ,
Itni   see    baat    ka    Afsaana    hua    jaata    hai
 

Zikr - e - Mahboob   zara    yaar   se   kya   kar   daala ,
Uss   ka    Andaaz     Raqeebaana     hua    jaata     hai
 

Aaj   pee   kar   teri    Makhmoor   nigaahoN   se   'Hasan' ,
Aashiq - e - Nargis - e - Mastaana     hua    jaata    hai


wah wah wah wah kya baat hai sir, umda ashaarooN se saji ghazal hai, hasil E ghazal shair batana mushkil hai. dheroon daaad qubool karen aur ek rau bhi. aur haaN mujhe nahi lagta ki is ghazal ke kisi bhi shair ko kisi bhi tarha ki wazahat ki zaroorat hai...sabhi ashaar aaine ki tarha saaf aur shaffaf haiN...
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«Reply #29 on: December 19, 2012, 03:55:44 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on December 17, 2012, 10:35:37 AM

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        ADIL  SAHEB  ,  BAHUT  SHUKRIYA  AUR  AADAAB  ,  HASAN
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