Shokh aankhoun mein kyaa hamney deykhaa wahaan?

by abdbundeli on June 25, 2010, 11:05:06 AM
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Ab kee parwaaz kaisee hai: kyaa boliye?
Urh, lamhey bhar mein ham aapkey ho liye!

Shokh aankhoun mein kyaa hamney deykhaa wahaan?
Lag rahaa ab hamain, bas waheen doliye!

Ham bhi deykheyn kahaan husn gulzaar hai?
Band dar baatinee zeyhn key kholiye!

Maykadey fir na jaauungaa! Toubaa!! Sanam,
Ab tabassum sey chashmoun mein may gholiye!

Aaj naaseh sab bazm-e-saaqee mein hain,
Jin ney may sey sabhee mail-o-gam dho liye!

Un kee nazroun mein khushiyaan hain bharpoor, jo,
Saaqiyah sey milaakar nazar ro liye!

Ab 'abd' jigar-o-dil us key pahloo mein hain:
Jaam dey eik, tahzeeb sey, do liye?

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«Reply #1 on: June 25, 2010, 11:19:25 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Abd ji !!!!
kya hi khoob shayerana khayaal hain. taghazzul se bharpoor kalaam pesh kiya hai.
Meri taraf se dili daad haazir hai.
Khush rahiye
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«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2010, 04:00:31 PM »
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Quote from: Ghulam Haider on June 25, 2010, 11:19:25 AM
Bohot Khoob Abd ji !!!!
kya hi khoob shayerana khayaal hain. taghazzul se bharpoor kalaam pesh kiya hai.
Meri taraf se dili daad haazir hai.
Khush rahiye

Shukriyah Ghulam Haider ji!
Gazal aapko achchhee lagee: yah jaan kar khushee huyee!
Khudaa paak aapko barkateyn ataa karey!

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«Reply #3 on: June 26, 2010, 06:19:14 AM »
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Bahut khoob Abd Ji
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«Reply #4 on: June 26, 2010, 09:40:19 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on June 26, 2010, 06:19:14 AM
Bahut khoob Abd Ji

Thanks Rajesh ji!

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«Reply #5 on: June 26, 2010, 01:26:05 PM »
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  Very nice Abd ji, bahut achha likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #6 on: June 26, 2010, 02:22:59 PM »
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Quote from: tamanna.pt on June 26, 2010, 01:26:05 PM
  Very nice Abd ji, bahut achha likha hai aapne.

Shukriyah Tamanna ji! Khush rahiye!

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