shukria aap ka ke aap aayay:Ghazals

mazHur

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aasteenoan mein paal rakhay hein
saamp hum ne sambhaal rakhe hein!

kia kisi gul se lar gayeen aankhein?
surkh doray jo daal rakhe hien.

yoon bhi karte hein zulf ko qaboo
cheer aarhay nikaal rakhe hein!

aik ho gham toe mein bataoon bhi
sur pe lakhoan vabaal rakhe hein.

baadaloan kee tarah garajte hein?
dil mein naahaq woh baal rakhe hein.

haan batayein ke vasl ho ga kab?
ya yoonhi naqsh-e-faal rakhe hein.

shukria aap ka ke aap aayay
Hum bhi Qismet kamal rakhe hein!

dosti ka bharam kharaab na kar
dost dost ka khayal rakhe hein.

gehre paani mein mut utar ay dost
waa'n shikari hein jaal rakhe hein!


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Anshumali

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Re: shukria aap ka ke aap aayay

«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2010, 12:14:46 AM »

Quote from: mazHur on September 15, 2010, 10:50:04 PM

aasteenoan mein paal rakhay hein
saamp hum ne sambhaal rakhe hein!

kia kisi gul se lar gayeen aankhein?
surkh doray jo daal rakhe hien.

yoon bhi karte hein zulf ko qaboo
cheer aarhay nikaal rakhe hein!

aik ho gham toe mein bataoon bhi
sur pe lakhoan vabaal rakhe hein.

baadaloan kee tarah garajte hein?
dil mein naahaq ubaal rakhtay hein.

haan batayein ke vasl ho ga kab?
woh agar mashq-e-faal rakhte hein.

shukria aap ka ke aap aayay
Hum bhi Qismet kamal rakhte hein!

dosti ka bharam kharaab na ka
dost dost ka khayal rakhte hein.

gehre paani mein mut utar ay dost
waa'n shikari hein jaal rakhte hein!

Very Impressive ! Very Nice Creation ... dil se daad !


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ParwaaZ

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Re: shukria aap ka ke aap aayay

«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2010, 02:04:48 AM »

MazHur Saheb Aadaab!

Aapki kalaam nazar nawaaz huyi .... kafi achchi kalaam se nawaza hai aapne daad....

Qouted ashaar hume behad achche lage daad...
Likhate rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.....

Quote from: mazHur on September 15, 2010, 10:50:04 PM

kia kisi gul se lar gayeen aankhein?
surkh doray jo daal rakhe hien.

aik ho gham toe mein bataoon bhi
sur pe lakhoan vabaal rakhe hein.

shukria aap ka ke aap aayay
Hum bhi Qismet kamal rakhte hein!

dosti ka bharam kharaab na ka
dost dost ka khayal rakhte hein.

gehre paani mein mut utar ay dost
waa'n shikari hein jaal rakhte hein!


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mazHur

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Re: shukria aap ka ke aap aayay

«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2010, 07:19:16 AM »

thank you very much, friends


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AbhiTamrakar

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Re: shukria aap ka ke aap aayay

«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2010, 07:24:03 AM »

bahut khoob sahab bas likhte rahiye!~


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: shukria aap ka ke aap aayay

«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2010, 07:30:45 AM »

Mahut achchha likha hai aap ne Mazhur Ji
Bas yun hi likhte rahiye


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Sajid_Ghayel

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Re: shukria aap ka ke aap aayay

«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2010, 09:56:05 AM »

Peshkash yaqeenan khoobsurat hai bas ek shikayat hai aapse......."Rakhe hai" aur "Rakhtey hai" do mukhtalif Radeef kalam ko kamzor kar gaya.


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mazHur

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Re: shukria aap ka ke aap aayay

«Reply #7 on: September 16, 2010, 10:05:36 AM »

Quote from: Sajid_Ghayel on September 16, 2010, 09:56:05 AM

Peshkash yaqeenan khoobsurat hai bas ek shikayat hai aapse......."Rakhe hai" aur "Rakhtey hai" do mukhtalif Radeef kalam ko kamzor kar gaya.

your complaint is warranted... actually I was carried away and forgot to tow the radeef!!
anyway i will mend it....ultay haath ka kaam he!!
thank you
Maz


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mazHur

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Re: shukria aap ka ke aap aayay

«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2010, 10:12:07 AM »

Quote from: mazHur on September 16, 2010, 10:05:36 AM

your complaint is warranted... actually I was carried away and forgot to tow the radeef!!
anyway i will mend it....ultay haath ka kaam he!!
thank you
Maz

Done!!


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tamanna.pt

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Re: shukria aap ka ke aap aayay

«Reply #9 on: September 16, 2010, 12:58:49 PM »

Bahut khoob ,bahut pyara likha hai aapne Mazhur ji. Applause


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mazHur

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Re: shukria aap ka ke aap aayay

«Reply #10 on: September 16, 2010, 04:16:42 PM »

thank you all again!


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