Shukriyah hai: diye jaa rahaa huun tumhain!

by abdbundeli on January 31, 2013, 09:39:09 AM
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Dil key nazdeek hee paa rahaa huun tumhain!
Isliye baarahaa gaa rahaa huun tumhain!!

Din nikaltey hi suntaa huun teyree sadaa:
Khaas pahloo mein jyoun paa rahaa huun tumhain!

Haay, alfaaz-o-sur kee yeh naakaafiyat:
Har lamheyn sirf duhraa rahaa huun tumhain!

Kyaa bataauun mujhey ho gayaa hai yeh kyaa:
Ashk-e-afshaan sey nahlaa rahaa huun tumhain?

Khoob tumney ‘abd’ ko kiya hai ataa;
Shukriyah hai: diye jaa rahaa huun tumhain!

                       - abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2013, 09:48:55 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 31, 2013, 09:39:09 AM

Dil key nazdeek hee paa rahaa huun tumhain!
Isliye baarahaa gaa rahaa huun tumhain!!

Din nikaltey hi suntaa huun teyree sadaa:
Khaas pahloo mein jyoun paa rahaa huun tumhain!

Haay, alfaaz-o-sur kee yeh naakaafiyat:
Har lamheyn sirf duhraa rahaa huun tumhain!

Kyaa bataauun mujhey ho gayaa hai yeh kyaa:
Ashk-e-afshaan sey nahlaa rahaa huun tumhain?

Khoob tumney ‘abd’ ko kiya hai ataa;
Shukriyah hai: diye jaa rahaa huun tumhain!

                       - abd bundeli



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Bahut bahut badiya gazhal likha hai aapne abdbundeli jee... shukriyaaa is shandar peshkash k liye...deron daad

bahut bahut shandar
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«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2013, 09:52:02 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2013, 10:32:34 AM »
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Quote from: suman59 on January 31, 2013, 09:48:55 AM
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Bahut bahut badiya gazhal likha hai aapne abdbundeli jee... shukriyaaa is shandar peshkash k liye...deron daad

bahut bahut shandar

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2013, 10:34:15 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 31, 2013, 09:52:02 AM
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Shukriyah, Dr. Saini ji!
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2013, 10:48:20 AM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on January 31, 2013, 09:39:09 AM

Dil key nazdeek hee paa rahaa huun tumhain!
Isliye baarahaa gaa rahaa huun tumhain!!

Din nikaltey hi suntaa huun teyree sadaa:
Khaas pahloo mein jyoun paa rahaa huun tumhain!

Haay, alfaaz-o-sur kee yeh naakaafiyat:
Har lamheyn sirf duhraa rahaa huun tumhain!

Kyaa bataauun mujhey ho gayaa hai yeh kyaa:
Ashk-e-afshaan sey nahlaa rahaa huun tumhain?

Khoob tumney ‘abd’ ko kiya hai ataa;
Shukriyah hai: diye jaa rahaa huun tumhain!

                       - abd bundeli


waah waah lajawab kalaam,............bohat c daad,......
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«Reply #6 on: January 31, 2013, 10:56:10 AM »
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bhut he khub ji
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«Reply #7 on: January 31, 2013, 10:58:33 AM »
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bahut hi khooob ghazal.....
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Quote from: laaiba on January 31, 2013, 10:48:20 AM
waah waah lajawab kalaam,............bohat c daad,......

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'Laaiba' ji!
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bhut he khub ji

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Rajan ji!
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bahut hi khooob ghazal.....
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Vimmi ji!
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waah waah waah! bahut khoob abdbundeli saab. Badi hi pyaari ghazal thi.dheron daad qubool kare
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #13 on: January 31, 2013, 04:09:59 PM »
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Aadaab ABD sahab
behad umda ghazal hai..aur maqta..dil ko choo gaya..

Khoob tumney ‘abd’ ko kiya hai ataa;
Shukriyah hai: diye jaa rahaa huun tumhain!

phir se mubarakbaad ..likhte rahiye
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