silsile chalne dijiye,,,,,,,,,ghazal,,,,,,jeet jainam

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mohhobat ke silsile chalne dijiye,
niganho sey zajbaat kahne dijiye,

dil me hui hai ajeeb see dastak,
ye kaisa hai ehsaas samjhne dijiye,

badha liye kadam humne bhi aaj,
dhoond lenge manjil chalne dijiye,

apni yaado se uske sapne sajayenge,
dekho ek baar nazro me basne dijiye,

mere khiyaal se tum soye muskuraoge,
khushi hogi bohut lamhe banane dijiye,

ek phool se tumri aankhe chamak uthi,
ho ger izaazat gulshan khilane dijiye,

tamnna hai tumahri roshan hoga jahaan,
ruk jaa,o tufaano chiraag jalane dijiye,

hoga ek din naam meraa bhi mashhoor[jeet]
zara ruk jao hawa ghazal likhne dijiye,

             jj saini
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mohhobat ke silsile chalne dijiye,
niganho sey zajbaat kahne dijiye,

dil me hui hai ajeeb see dastak,
ye kaisa hai ehsaas samjhne dijiye,

badha liye kadam humne bhi aaj,
dhoond lenge manjil chalne dijiye,

apni yaado se uske sapne sajayenge,
dekho ek baar nazro me basne dijiye,

mere khiyaal se tum soye muskuraoge,
khushi hogi bohut lamhe banane dijiye,

ek phool se tumri aankhe chamak uthi,
ho ger izaazat gulshan khilane dijiye,

tamnna hai tumahri roshan hoga jahaan,
ruk jaa,o tufaano chiraag jalane dijiye,

hoga ek din naam meraa bhi mashhoor[jeet]
zara ruk jao hawa ghazal likhne dijiye,

             jj saini



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Quote from: jeet jainam on June 23, 2014, 01:31:00 AM
mohhobat ke silsile chalne dijiye,
niganho sey zajbaat kahne dijiye,

dil me hui hai ajeeb see dastak,
ye kaisa hai ehsaas samjhne dijiye,

badha liye kadam humne bhi aaj,
dhoond lenge manjil chalne dijiye,

apni yaado se uske sapne sajayenge,
dekho ek baar nazro me basne dijiye,

mere khiyaal se tum soye muskuraoge,
khushi hogi bohut lamhe banane dijiye,

ek phool se tumri aankhe chamak uthi,
ho ger izaazat gulshan khilane dijiye,

tamnna hai tumahri roshan hoga jahaan,
ruk jaa,o tufaano chiraag jalane dijiye,

hoga ek din naam meraa bhi mashhoor[jeet]
zara ruk jao hawa ghazal likhne dijiye,

            jj saini




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