Sisak kar is zamaanay men (by vb)

by vb on March 02, 2013, 12:03:50 AM
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Sisak kar is zamaanay main, guzaara kon karta hay?
Bharay dariya main tinkay ko sahaara kon karta hay?

Bhula dala hamen aisa, k jaisay mar chukay hen hum
Jahan say jaanay walon ko, pukaara kon karta hay?

Na-jaanay kitnay Eesa chore kar aayay ho rastay men
Salebon say masihaai, utaaraa kon karta hay?

Main gul hota to fitrat ka takaza thay teray gesoo
Nishat-e-khaar-e-barg-e-gul, gavaara kon karta hay?

Suna kartay thay logon say, mohabbat ake ghalti hay
Chalo ik baar kar bethay, dobaaraa kon karta hay?

Bharosa un pay hota hay, jo khud ko kho nahi detay
Tumhara kar bhe lay koi, hamaara kon karta hay?




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Beautiful ghazal vb ji. aise hi likhte rahiye. dheron daad.
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shukriya aap sub ka....
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VB Jee Aadaab!



WallaaH janab kia kahne waaH badi hi gehri aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne..
Yaqeenan behad gehre aur khoobsurat khayaaloN ko umdaa ashaaroN meiN dhala
hai... Usual Smile


Is khoosurat kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye..
And realy you are a unique poet at here.. Jinki kalaam mukammal taur par shuru
se aakher talak aik hi khayaal meiN baNdhe rakhti hai... Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahye...


Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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shukriya aap ka... ParwaaZ sahab
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