socha nahi achha bura

by nishita on July 23, 2004, 06:56:12 PM
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Socha nahi achha bura dekha suna kuch bhi nahi
maanga khuda se raat din tere siwa aur kuch bhi nahi
dekha tujhe socha tujhe chaha tujhe puja tujhe
meri khata meri wafa teri khata kuch bhi nahi

jis par humari ankh ne moti bichaye the raat bhar
bheja wahi kagaz unhe likha magar kuch bhi nahi
manga khuda se raat din tere siwa aur kuch bhi nahi

ek shaam ki dehleej par baithe rahe wo der tak
ankhon se ki baatein bohat muh se kaha kuch bhi nahi
maanga khuda se raat din tere siwa aur kuch bhi nahi
socha nahi achha bura dekha suna aur kuch bhi nahi... !!


this is my fav.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2004, 07:20:56 AM »
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Socha nahi achha bura dekha suna kuch bhi nahi
maanga khuda se raat din tere siwa aur kuch bhi nahi
dekha tujhe socha tujhe chaha tujhe puja tujhe
meri khata meri wafa teri khata kuch bhi nahi

jis par humari ankh ne moti bichaye the raat bhar
bheja wahi kagaz unhe likha magar kuch bhi nahi
manga khuda se raat din tere siwa aur kuch bhi nahi

ek shaam ki dehleej par baithe rahe wo der tak
ankhon se ki baatein bohat muh se kaha kuch bhi nahi
maanga khuda se raat din tere siwa aur kuch bhi nahi
socha nahi achha bura dekha suna aur kuch bhi nahi... !!

Hi, i m ashwin.ur ghazal is wonderful.Just,wat's the meaning of the word 'Dahleej'?
this is my fav.... :)
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nishita
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2004, 10:15:36 AM »
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dahleez... means door
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yammy
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«Reply #3 on: July 27, 2004, 10:25:24 AM »
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its really great dear,
maine tumhe chaha shiwaalon ki tarah
tum door hi rahi khayalon ki tarah,
hum to tumhare ho gaye hote "nishita" kabse,
aapne chaha hi nahi chahne walon ki tarah
. :wink:
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«Reply #4 on: July 27, 2004, 12:56:02 PM »
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my my... ye kya hua , tum to serious hogaye,
humne to ghazal ksii aur ka likha ..aur aap hai ki khayalon mein kho gaye...!
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«Reply #5 on: July 27, 2004, 04:08:00 PM »
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Btw.. that ghazal was vey good..

@ashwin29j2000

yaar 3-3 baar quote karney ki zaroorat kya.. ? If you like that then tell .. otherwise it was not good.. just was disturbance..
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nishita
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«Reply #6 on: July 28, 2004, 01:55:12 PM »
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yup its a wonderful ghazal..
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2004, 08:13:48 PM »
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socha nahi accha bura. dekha  suna kuch bhi nahi.........
 well nishita ji .......... gr8 1 .......keep it up...
 with love tanha dil
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2004, 09:01:51 PM »
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Bahoot khub nishita ji,


Tum ney apni chahatoon ka Iqrar manga hai to suno.
dil ke sachchey jazbey izhar ke mohtaj nahi hotey
yeh to woh jazbey hain jo jugnu ban ker aankhon main chamaktey hain.
honton keh narm gosho main reh ker dil main bastey hain
tum mujh main is terhan samaee ho keh jesey.
phool main khushboo taroon main chamak
mera tumhara rishta atoot hai jism-o-jaan ka hai
jo jura rahey to zindagi jo toot jae to mout. (not mine)
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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2004, 04:31:45 PM »
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very touching nishita :lol:
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nishita
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«Reply #10 on: August 01, 2004, 08:11:27 AM »
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thank u tanha
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it_waaznt_me
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2004, 08:21:38 AM »
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Hmmm...At least I found one Chitra Singh's fan here ...
How about Mera Dil bhi shauk se toro ..
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nishita
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«Reply #12 on: August 01, 2004, 08:40:27 AM »
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thank u pooja, neelam and wasnt me
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Pooja
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«Reply #13 on: August 02, 2004, 10:28:48 PM »
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achi gazal hai "mera dil bhi shok se toro" I like jagjit and chitra both.
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«Reply #14 on: August 09, 2004, 05:50:32 AM »
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Bahoot khub nishita ji,
Tum ney apni chahatoon ka Iqrar manga hai to suno.
dil ke sachchey jazbey izhar ke mohtaj nahi hotey
yeh to woh jazbey hain jo jugnu ban ker aankhon main chamaktey hain.
honton keh narm gosho main reh ker dil main bastey hain
tum mujh main is terhan samaee ho keh jesey.
phool main khushboo taroon main chamak
mera tumhara rishta atoot hai jism-o-jaan ka hai
jo jura rahey to zindagi jo toot jae to mout. (not mine)


chahat ko duniya ki parwah nahi hoti
aur ishq kabhi duniya ka mohtaz nahi hota
aur ishq ke liye duniya ko ai chodne wale
bewkoofo  ke sir pe koi taz nahi hota
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