sochta hoon........kabhi samajhta hoon

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on May 12, 2015, 06:21:17 AM
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Aaye muflis ke bhi.. ……jo chehre per
Hai wo asli ……khushi samajhta hoon

Aaj phir……. tumne pukara hai mujhe
Sochta hoon …..kabhi samajhta hoon

Maine sadyo’n ki ……..pyaas jheli hai
Shiddat e tasnagi …….samajhta hoon

Ho na takleef ………...rab ki khilqat ko
Hai yahi ……..bandagi samajhta hoon

Is me tera …………….koi qussor nahi
Kuch thi meri …..kami samajhta hoon
 
meri ghazlein ko …..daad kayse mile
Mukhtasar ……..shayri samajhta hoon

             ......Syed Mohd Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: May 12, 2015, 03:56:59 PM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on May 12, 2015, 06:21:17 AM
Aaye muflis ke bhi.. ……jo chehre per
Hai wo asli ……khushi samajhta hoon

Aaj phir……. tumne pukara hai mujhe
Sochta hoon …..kabhi samajhta hoon

Maine sadyo’n ki ……..pyaas jheli hai
Shiddat e tasnagi …….samajhta hoon

Ho na takleef ………...rab ki khilqat ko
Hai yahi ……..bandagi samajhta hoon

Is me tera …………….koi qussor nahi
Kuch thi meri …..kami samajhta hoon
 
meri ghazlein ko …..daad kayse mile
Mukhtasar ……..shayri samajhta hoon

             ......Syed Mohd Mahzar

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«Reply #2 on: May 12, 2015, 05:02:04 PM »
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Mohtaram janab Syed Mohd Mazhar Sahab! salam

aap ka kalaam hamesha wazan men hota hay.. ye ghazal bhi halki phulki, likn buhat khoob hay... daad qabool kijay..

pehli bar ek misra pr hamen, khwah ma khwah ka taradud sa mehsoos hua. is misra ko aisay parh ker dikhiyay.. shayad kuch farq mehsoos ho..

Aaj phir……. tumne pukara hai mujhe

tumne aawaaz di hai phir mujhko ..

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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2015, 05:20:40 PM »
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kya kehne bahut bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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Wah Wah, Bhut Khub...... Vb shab ap ka Misrah zaida behter hy.....
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2015, 07:54:51 PM »
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waah kyaa baat hai, bahut bahut khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: May 13, 2015, 01:55:59 AM »
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Really good!  Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 13, 2015, 08:01:40 AM »
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Quote from: uzma waqar on May 12, 2015, 07:47:11 PM
Wah Wah, Bhut Khub...... Vb shab ap ka Misrah zaida behter hy.....

Mohtarma Uzma Waqar Sahiba! salam

aap ko buhat arsay baad yahaN dekh kr khushi hui...

hum ne sirf wazan ko nazar main rakh kar tajveez di hay... misra tu sahab-e-ghazal ka hi behter hay... farq sirf ye ko un ka misra kisi aur beher say hay, jo yahaN mozooN nahi..

aap ki tavaju ka shukria...

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«Reply #8 on: May 13, 2015, 11:36:03 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

bahut khub syedji
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«Reply #9 on: May 13, 2015, 01:29:50 PM »
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waaah waaah bahoot khoob
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«Reply #10 on: May 13, 2015, 06:01:54 PM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on May 12, 2015, 06:21:17 AM
Aaye muflis ke bhi.. ……jo chehre per
Hai wo asli ……khushi samajhta hoon

Aaj phir……. tumne pukara hai mujhe
Sochta hoon …..kabhi samajhta hoon

Maine sadyo’n ki ……..pyaas jheli hai
Shiddat e tasnagi …….samajhta hoon

Ho na takleef ………...rab ki khilqat ko
Hai yahi ……..bandagi samajhta hoon

Is me tera …………….koi qussor nahi
Kuch thi meri …..kami samajhta hoon
 
meri ghazlein ko …..daad kayse mile
Mukhtasar ……..shayri samajhta hoon

             ......Syed Mohd Mahzar


waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah behteeeeeeeeeeeen Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 14, 2015, 05:39:12 PM »
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Quote from: vb on May 12, 2015, 05:02:04 PM
Mohtaram janab Syed Mohd Mazhar Sahab! salam

aap ka kalaam hamesha wazan men hota hay.. ye ghazal bhi halki phulki, likn buhat khoob hay... daad qabool kijay..

pehli bar ek misra pr hamen, khwah ma khwah ka taradud sa mehsoos hua. is misra ko aisay parh ker dikhiyay.. shayad kuch farq mehsoos ho..

Aaj phir……. tumne pukara hai mujhe

tumne aawaaz di hai phir mujhko ..

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Mohtaram vb saheb,
                bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaa. aapki islaah ne sher me maujood khami bhi door ki hai aur sher ko mazeed behtar bana diya hai............

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«Reply #12 on: May 14, 2015, 08:06:41 PM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on May 12, 2015, 06:21:17 AM
Aaye muflis ke bhi.. ……jo chehre per
Hai wo asli ……khushi samajhta hoon

apni shakhsiyat hi kuch aisi hai ji ke halaat ka maraa bhi mujhe dekh ke khush ho jataa hai .....aap bhi khush ho jaao ge jab mujh se milo ge  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Aaj phir……. tumne pukara hai mujhe
Sochta hoon …..kabhi samajhta hoon

mat socho zayadaa ...kuch haasil nahin hota aur dimaag bhi kamzor ho jataa hai main bahut khudgarz hoon ji sirf apne mufaad ke sabab hi aawaaz deti hoon bus aur kuch nahin icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Maine sadyo’n ki ……..pyaas jheli hai
Shiddat e tasnagi …….samajhta hoon

sehra mein bhi main dig kar ke pepsi nikaal leti hoon isliye main pyaas ke hawaale se kabhi nahin sochti hoon .....per aap kis tarah ki pyaas ki baat karte ho ye to ALLAH hi jaane khair ....rozaa rakh kar hi ghareeb ke bhook ka ehsaas hotaa hai  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flowericon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Ho na takleef ………...rab ki khilqat ko
Hai yahi ……..bandagi samajhta hoon

haan ji ALLAH ne hum sab ko jis maqsad ke tahat paidaa kiya hai aur mokhtalif hawaale se bataayaa hai wahi haq hai jise humein pooraa karna hai waraa wo to beneyaaz hai ...humein apni karni kaa khud hi bhoogatna hogaa icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Is me tera …………….koi qussor nahi
Kuch thi meri …..kami samajhta hoon

nahin ji kisi ka qasoor nahin ye to bus qismat ki baat thi aap kashti se gir gaye main bachh gayi Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!
meri ghazlein ko …..daad kayse mile
Mukhtasar ……..shayri samajhta hoon

mujhe samjh lo phir to daad hi daad mile ge Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

             ......Syed Mohd Mahzar


waah waah ek -ek sher paaye ka sher hai alag hi andaaz-e-bayaa.n nazar aayaa to rau inshaallah due rahaa is khoob kalaam ko icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #13 on: May 15, 2015, 05:12:23 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on May 14, 2015, 08:06:41 PM

waah waah ek -ek sher paaye ka sher hai alag hi andaaz-e-bayaa.n nazar aayaa to rau inshaallah due rahaa is khoob kalaam ko icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Sheba ji,
         aapka her eyk sher per sher ki munasbat se comment karne ka andaaz mujhe hamesha pasand aata hai.......darasl eyk feelbadi on line mushaire ke dauran ye chand ashaar kahe the, baharhaal behad shukguzar hoon ki aapko pasand aaye, kuch arse se aapka koi kalaam shayad post nahi hua, mujhe intezar hai, "rau" se kahi'n zyada  aapki daad ahamiyat rakhti hai......
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Quote from: Sheba on May 14, 2015, 08:06:41 PM

waah waah ek -ek sher paaye ka sher hai alag hi andaaz-e-bayaa.n nazar aayaa to rau inshaallah due rahaa is khoob kalaam ko icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!


rau de diya maine icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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