Subah Likhti Rahi

by suman59 on February 05, 2013, 04:01:02 PM
Pages: [1] 2 3  All
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 2027 times)
suman59
Guest
Reply with quote
Subah likhti rahi slok sa gori kalayi par
Dhoop leti rahi chup-chap tooti charpayi par

Vo behtar jante hain chot kya hoti hathoude ki
Mili taqdeer lohe ki, pade hain jo nihayi par

Bahut bechain rehta tha khula aakash choone ko
Bahut khush laga vo kal ek parinde ki rihayi par

Yahan kuch log is umeed mein khamosh bhaite hain
Kabhi to sharm aayegi hii usko behayee(nirlazzata) par

Vo jiske haat mein khanjar tha, ab bhola kabutar hai
Sabhi ki aankh diwani hai haathon ki safayi par

Neeli odni par roshni ka ek dariya sa
Sitare de gaya hai chandni ki muh dikhayi par

Syah(kala) the lafz inmein motiyon ki chamak hai kaise
Ye kisne rakh diye hain ashq tere roshnayi(syahi)par
Logged
saahill
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 86
Offline Offline

Waqt Bitaya:
147 days, 17 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 18610
Member Since: Jun 2009


View Profile
«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2013, 04:05:02 PM »
Reply with quote
boht acha likha hai suman ji
Logged
Rishi Agarwal
Guest
«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2013, 04:19:47 PM »
Reply with quote
बहुत खूब.. युही ही लिखते रहे.. और हमेशा खुश रहे
Logged
masoom shahjada
Guest
«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2013, 04:27:33 PM »
Reply with quote
Zabardast........ Bahut bahut bahut khooooooobsurat.
Mujhe aesi poetry bahut pasand aatii hai.
Aesii poetry dil ko chho jaatii hai.
Kuch sher wakai daad ke kaabil hai
Logged
vimmi singh
Guest
«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2013, 04:31:35 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Iftakhar Ahmad
Guest
«Reply #5 on: February 05, 2013, 04:45:26 PM »
Reply with quote
Behtarrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeen, superb aur excellent, bahut khoob, maza aa gaya padh kar Suman jee, aur khaastaur pe "Behayaai" aur "Muh Dikhaai" waale she'r bahut pasand aaye.
Logged
F.H.SIDDIQUI
Guest
«Reply #6 on: February 05, 2013, 04:46:24 PM »
Reply with quote
bht khoob,suman ji. 3rd sher bht pasand aaya.
Logged
sanjayudas
Guest
«Reply #7 on: February 05, 2013, 04:55:16 PM »
Reply with quote
 icon_salut dil ko chhu gayi.................
Logged
lovely_charan
Guest
«Reply #8 on: February 05, 2013, 05:09:45 PM »
Reply with quote
wow wow wow.. bahut hi acha laga mujhe.,. awesome..
please accept a rau .. Usual Smile
Logged
mkv
Guest
«Reply #9 on: February 05, 2013, 05:39:40 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: suman59 on February 05, 2013, 04:01:02 PM
Subah likhti rahi slok sa gori kalayi par
Dhoop leti rahi chup-chap tooti charpayi par  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Vo behtar jante hain chot kya hoti hathoude ki
Mili taqdeer lohe ki, pade hain jo nihayi par
Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Bahut bechain rehta tha khula aakash choone ko
Bahut khush laga vo kal ek parinde ki rihayi par  Applause Applause Applause Applause

Yahan kuch log is umeed mein khamosh bhaite hain
Kabhi to sharm aayegi hii usko behayee(nirlazzata) par
 wah wah wah kya khoob kaha hai..
Vo jiske haat mein khanjar tha, ab bhola kabutar hai
Sabhi ki aankh diwani hai haathon ki safayi par Bahut khoob

Neeli odni par roshni ka ek dariya sa
Sitare de gaya hai chandni ki muh dikhayi par is ghazal ka sabse masoom sher..bahut umda khayaal

Syah(kala) the lafz inmein motiyon ki chamak hai kaise
Ye kisne rakh diye hain ashq tere roshnayi(syahi)par Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP





Bahut hi rawaan ghazal kahee hai aapne..
philhaal bandhe haathoN se tareef.. Applause Applause Applause
Logged
RAJAN KONDAL
Guest
«Reply #10 on: February 05, 2013, 05:43:16 PM »
Reply with quote
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Logged
laaiba
Guest
«Reply #11 on: February 05, 2013, 05:43:54 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: suman59 on February 05, 2013, 04:01:02 PM
Subah likhti rahi slok sa gori kalayi par
Dhoop leti rahi chup-chap tooti charpayi par

Vo behtar jante hain chot kya hoti hathoude ki
Mili taqdeer lohe ki, pade hain jo nihayi par

Bahut bechain rehta tha khula aakash choone ko
Bahut khush laga vo kal ek parinde ki rihayi par

Yahan kuch log is umeed mein khamosh bhaite hain
Kabhi to sharm aayegi hii usko behayee(nirlazzata) par

Vo jiske haat mein khanjar tha, ab bhola kabutar hai
Sabhi ki aankh diwani hai haathon ki safayi par

Neeli odni par roshni ka ek dariya sa
Sitare de gaya hai chandni ki muh dikhayi par

Syah(kala) the lafz inmein motiyon ki chamak hai kaise
Ye kisne rakh diye hain ashq tere roshnayi(syahi)par





kamal ho suman aap ,...atti sundar Usual Smile,............bohat c daad,..........
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 115
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 51 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16243
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2013, 07:46:43 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Logged
Aarish
Guest
«Reply #13 on: February 06, 2013, 03:33:27 AM »
Reply with quote
Neeli odni par roshni ka ek dariya sa,

Sitare de gaya hai chandni ki muh dikhayi par.


Syah(kala) the lafz inmein motiyon ki chamak hai kaise,

Ye kisne rakh diye hain ashq tere roshnayi(syahi)par


 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

wah wah wah maam bohut khoob umda peshkash rahi khas taur se ye ashaar to lajwab rahe..
Logged
sksaini4
Ustaad ae Shayari
*****

Rau: 853
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
112 days, 8 hours and 51 minutes.
Posts: 36414
Member Since: Apr 2011


View Profile
«Reply #14 on: February 06, 2013, 03:59:13 AM »
Reply with quote
Beautiful
Logged
Pages: [1] 2 3  All
ReplyPrint
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Ghazals > Topic: Subah Likhti Rahi
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
November 21, 2024, 04:22:34 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
KITNA BECHAIN ,,,, SAAHIL...
by saahill
[November 16, 2024, 11:44:41 AM]
HUME KAHAN ,,,,, SAAHILL
by Michaelraw
[November 13, 2024, 12:59:11 PM]
woh muj se mere khamoshi ...
by saahill
[November 08, 2024, 09:59:54 AM]
savaaloN ke hal kya javaa...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:56:50 PM]
Kal halki halki barish th...
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:55:03 PM]
कवि और कविता
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:52:40 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by zarraa
[November 07, 2024, 01:51:59 PM]
mere lafzh kabhi,,,, saah...
by saahill
[October 30, 2024, 05:13:27 AM]
Geraft - (Sequel to "Beda...
by ASIF
[October 29, 2024, 07:57:46 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.102 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8506 Real Poets and poetry admirer