Subah Likhti Rahi

by suman59 on February 05, 2013, 04:01:02 PM

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«Reply #15 on: February 06, 2013, 12:05:38 PM »

Waah waah waah suman jee bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh kalaam. dil ko choo gayi. padhkar maza aa gaya. hamari dili mubarakbad qubool kare


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Re: Subah Likhti Rahi

«Reply #16 on: February 07, 2013, 01:29:28 AM »

wah wah wah


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Re: Subah Likhti Rahi

«Reply #17 on: February 07, 2013, 08:25:37 AM »

fabulous!

really nice,especially the following inspiring optimistic couplet...
Bahut bechain rehta tha khula aakash choone ko
Bahut khush laga vo kal ek parinde ki rihayi par


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Re: Subah Likhti Rahi

«Reply #18 on: March 09, 2013, 06:53:44 PM »

Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on February 05, 2013, 04:19:47 PM

बहुत खूब.. युही ही लिखते रहे.. और हमेशा खुश रहे

shukriya Rishi Agrawal jee


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Re: Subah Likhti Rahi

«Reply #19 on: March 09, 2013, 06:54:13 PM »

Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on February 05, 2013, 04:27:33 PM

Zabardast........ Bahut bahut bahut khooooooobsurat.
Mujhe aesi poetry bahut pasand aatii hai.
Aesii poetry dil ko chho jaatii hai.
Kuch sher wakai daad ke kaabil hai

thank you beta


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Re: Subah Likhti Rahi

«Reply #20 on: March 09, 2013, 06:54:54 PM »

Quote from: saahill on February 05, 2013, 04:05:02 PM

boht acha likha hai suman ji

thank you saahill jee


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Re: Subah Likhti Rahi

«Reply #21 on: March 09, 2013, 06:56:12 PM »

Quote from: vimmi singh on February 05, 2013, 04:31:35 PM


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suman59

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Re: Subah Likhti Rahi

«Reply #22 on: March 09, 2013, 07:00:15 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on February 05, 2013, 04:45:26 PM

Behtarrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeen, superb aur excellent, bahut khoob, maza aa gaya padh kar Suman jee, aur khaastaur pe "Behayaai" aur "Muh Dikhaai" waale she'r bahut pasand aaye.

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Ahmad jee