SUDHAR JAO!

by mazHur on September 19, 2009, 01:26:50 PM
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Sudhar Jao!
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Pass ho kar na door jao--sudhar jao
dil hamara na tum jalao---sudhar jao

chupke chupke na muskarao--sudhar jao
 raaz dil ka na yoon chupao---sudhar jao.

piyaar hum se bhi ghair se bhi he rasm-o-rah
 yoon na ahmaq hamein banao--sudhar jao

husn waalon ka kia bharosa muhabbat mein
aashiqo! jan-o-dil bachao---sudhar jao.

piyar bhi hum se karte ho aur chupte ho
ab ye andaaz na dikhao --sudhar jao.

dil toe tum le chuke ho jaan bhi tumhari he
ab ziada na aazmao ---sudhar jao.

zulf bikhri huee tunay huay hein abroo
jhoota ghussa toe na dikhao---sudhar jao.

kab milan ho ga phool dil ke khilein gay kab?
jaan-e-janana sach batao---sudhar jao.

baat bay baat roothnay waalo rootho magar
piyar se haath toe  milao---sudhar jao.
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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2009, 01:38:45 PM »
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Bohut Khooooooob janab
Bohut Hi Acha ...

Aap Ka Tu Jawab Nahi yara...
Lagey Raho Janab
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2009, 02:04:48 PM »
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hahahaha .. yea tho sareaam warning de rahe ho apni Mehbooba ko

Bahoot Khoob Mazhur ji..
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2009, 02:05:17 PM »
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kya baat hai -  bahut hi khoob -  manzur ji.....

PYAAR KARTI HO TOH PAAS AAKAR JATAAO,
CHUPKE-CHUPKE NA MUSKARAO............SUDHAR JAO..

PYAAR MEIN ITNA INTEZAAR NA KARAO,
YUNHI BECHAINI NA BADAO..............SUDHAR JAO..

AAG LAGI HAI TOH AAJAAO,HAMSE BUJAAO,
YUN NA TADFON AUR TADFAAO............SUDHAR JAO..
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2009, 02:05:58 PM »
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Quote from: mazHur on September 19, 2009, 01:26:50 PM
Sudhar Jao!
by mazHur


Pass ho kar na door jao--sudhar jao
dil hamara na tum jalao---sudhar jao

chupke chupke na muskarao--sudhar jao
 raaz dil ka na yoon chupao---sudhar jao.

piyaar hum se bhi ghair se bhi he rasm-o-rah
 yoon na ahmaq hamein banao--sudhar jao

husn waalon ka kia bharosa muhabbat mein
aashiqo! jan-o-dil bachao---sudhar jao.

piyar bhi hum se karte ho aur chupte ho
ab ye andaaz na dikhao --sudhar jao.

dil toe tum le chuke ho jaan bhi tumhari he
ab ziada na aazmao ---sudhar jao.

zulf bikhri huee tunay huay hein abroo
jhoota ghussa toe na dikhao---sudhar jao.

kab milan ho ga phool dil ke khilein gay kab?
jaan-e-janana sach batao---sudhar jao.

baat bay baat roothnay waalo rootho magar
piyar se haath toe  milao---sudhar jao.
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah kaya sudhar ka elaan hua hai... bahoot he pyari Hazal likhi hai apne mazHur ji...
kuch lines aa rahi hai man main, likhne ja rahi hu... shabdo ka jawab sirf shabdo main hai...

Her waqat rah ejo pass, to ishaq ki wo agan na hogi
jala kar jo samjhaye muhobat ki tadap, wo kasak na hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

humari chup ke muskaan se, milati hai tumhe jo bekarari
wo bekarari ke raj mai phir wo dhadakan na hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

sataate ho jab dekh kar aoro ko, kyun na hum bhi tadpaaye
bin is tadap ke, Ishaq ke agg rawan na hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

Pyar kar ke na batlaana, Husan ki ada purani hai
Husan ki ada se he to teri deewangi hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

dil bhi humara hai, yah jaan bhi humari hai
bane ho jo tum deewane, to her pal azmaaish bhi hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

bikhari hai zulaf tumhe behkaane ko
dikhaya hai yah gussa tumhe pass bulaane ko
na socha tha kabhi yah, deewane mai itani nasamjhi bhi hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...


hummm ... jo soch kar shuru ki thi wo baat nahi bani... DOH
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2009, 02:13:51 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 19, 2009, 02:05:58 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah kaya sudhar ka elaan hua hai... bahoot he pyari Hazal likhi hai apne mazHur ji...
kuch lines aa rahi hai man main, likhne ja rahi hu... shabdo ka jawab sirf shabdo main hai...

Her waqat rah ejo pass, to ishaq ki wo agan na hogi
jala kar jo samjhaye muhobat ki tadap, wo kasak na hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

humari chup ke muskaan se, milati hai tumhe jo bekarari
wo bekarari ke raj mai phir wo dhadakan na hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

sataate ho jab dekh kar aoro ko, kyun na hum bhi tadpaaye
bin is tadap ke, Ishaq ke agg rawan na hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

Pyar kar ke na batlaana, Husan ki ada purani hai
Husan ki ada se he to teri deewangi hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

dil bhi humara hai, yah jaan bhi humari hai
bane ho jo tum deewane, to her pal azmaaish bhi hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

bikhari hai zulaf tumhe behkaane ko
dikhaya hai yah gussa tumhe pass bulaane ko
na socha tha kabhi yah, deewane mai itani nasamjhi bhi hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...


hummm ... jo soch kar shuru ki thi wo baat nahi bani... DOH

Waaah Waah Kya baat hai Pooja di.. bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2009, 02:24:03 PM »
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Thanks Sophi... jis soch se shuru ki thi wo nahi ban paai... but thanks apko yah bhi pasand aii
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: September 19, 2009, 02:27:03 PM »
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Quote from: cara on September 19, 2009, 02:05:17 PM
kya baat hai -  bahut hi khoob -  manzur ji.....

PYAAR KARTI HO TOH PAAS AAKAR JATAAO,
CHUPKE-CHUPKE NA MUSKARAO............SUDHAR JAO..

PYAAR MEIN ITNA INTEZAAR NA KARAO,
YUNHI BECHAINI NA BADAO..............SUDHAR JAO..

AAG LAGI HAI TOH AAJAAO,HAMSE BUJAAO,
YUN NA TADFON AUR TADFAAO............SUDHAR JAO..


Nice lines Cara ji
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mazHur
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«Reply #8 on: September 19, 2009, 04:57:07 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 19, 2009, 02:05:58 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah kaya sudhar ka elaan hua hai... bahoot he pyari Hazal likhi hai apne mazHur ji...
kuch lines aa rahi hai man main, likhne ja rahi hu... shabdo ka jawab sirf shabdo main hai...

Her waqat rah ejo pass, to ishaq ki wo agan na hogi
jala kar jo samjhaye muhobat ki tadap, wo kasak na hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

humari chup ke muskaan se, milati hai tumhe jo bekarari
wo bekarari ke raj mai phir wo dhadakan na hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

sataate ho jab dekh kar aoro ko, kyun na hum bhi tadpaaye
bin is tadap ke, Ishaq ke agg rawan na hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

Pyar kar ke na batlaana, Husan ki ada purani hai
Husan ki ada se he to teri deewangi hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

dil bhi humara hai, yah jaan bhi humari hai
bane ho jo tum deewane, to her pal azmaaish bhi hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

bikhari hai zulaf tumhe behkaane ko
dikhaya hai yah gussa tumhe pass bulaane ko
na socha tha kabhi yah, deewane mai itani nasamjhi bhi hogi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...


hummm ... jo soch kar shuru ki thi wo baat nahi bani... DOH

bahut bahut shukria aapka!
in haseen khayaloan ke saath aap ghar me akeli  bethi kia kar rahi hein??

Na kehte huay bhi woh sub kuch kaha
muhabbat me kehte hein sab jo sada!
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«Reply #9 on: September 19, 2009, 04:58:02 PM »
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aap sab ka bahut bahooooot shukriya!
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«Reply #10 on: September 19, 2009, 07:20:38 PM »
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Wah wah Mazhur ji,Cara ji, Pooja ji,wonderful gazal,bahut acha likha aap sabne.
excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: September 19, 2009, 07:36:16 PM »
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Quote from: mazHur on September 19, 2009, 04:57:07 PM
bahut bahut shukria aapka!
in haseen khayaloan ke saath aap ghar me akeli  bethi kia kar rahi hein??

Na kehte huay bhi woh sub kuch kaha
muhabbat me kehte hein sab jo sada!



ghar mai baithe hai tabhi to khayal haseen lagte hai
niakl gaye jo dunia main, Haqiqat Rula degi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

Kahane ko armaan kahlwa jaate hai dil ki baatein
soch kar shayad shabdo ki garmi, kuch pal ko behla degi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

Muhobat main jo kahte hai sab, kitabi baatein lagti hai
Dunia ki muhobbat ek din, khoon ke ansoo rula degi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...
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«Reply #12 on: September 19, 2009, 07:37:16 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on September 19, 2009, 07:20:38 PM
Wah wah Mazhur ji,Cara ji, Pooja ji,wonderful gazal,bahut acha likha aap sabne.
excellent Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks Madhu ji!!!
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«Reply #13 on: September 19, 2009, 07:49:37 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 19, 2009, 07:36:16 PM
ghar mai baithe hai tabhi to khayal haseen lagte hai
niakl gaye jo dunia main, Haqiqat Rula degi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

Kahane ko armaan kahlwa jaate hai dil ki baatein
soch kar shayad shabdo ki garmi, kuch pal ko behla dehi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...

Muhobat main jo kahte hai sab, kitabi baatein lagti hai
Dunia ki muhobbat ek din, khoon ke ansoo rula degi
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...
kahe jo app ab to lo hum sudhar jaaye...


gham kee batein na keejeeye pooja
leejeeay gar na dil deejeeye pooja

itna dar kar raho na dunya say
sair gulshan ki keejeeay pooja
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«Reply #14 on: September 20, 2009, 03:28:31 AM »
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Quote from: mazHur on September 19, 2009, 07:49:37 PM

gham kee batein na keejeeye pooja
leejeeay gar na dil deejeeye pooja

itna dar kar raho na dunya say
sair gulshan ki keejeeay pooja



kaha se kaha le gaye shayri
ab pada kahna hume ki Sudhar jao

Dil humara dukhana, dunia ki boori bimari
bas itna he kahege hum ki Sudhar jao

Ajnabi chehro ke liche hai kon hai jan.ne wala
yah chupana nahi achi baat ki sudhar jao

sair kare kaise is kaanto bhare gulistaan ki
her baar chot kha kar dil kahta hai Pooja ab to Sudhar jao...
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