SUDHAR JAO!

by mazHur on September 19, 2009, 01:26:50 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 20, 2009, 03:36:59 AM »
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Wah! Wah!

Kitna mushkil he un ko samjhana
jo samajhte hein hum ko anjaana
dil kee ainak se iss ko pehchano
Jan de day ga warna diwaana!
maz
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«Reply #16 on: September 20, 2009, 03:43:39 AM »
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Bahut khoob mazhur ji and Pooja di .. Nice going Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #17 on: September 20, 2009, 04:24:27 AM »
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Quote from: mazHur on September 20, 2009, 03:36:59 AM
Wah! Wah!

Kitna mushkil he un ko samjhana
jo samajhte hein hum ko anjaana
dil kee ainak se iss ko pehchano
Jan de day ga warna diwaana!
maz

WO KAH KAR KHUD KO DEEWANA
KAHTE HAI KI NAHI AB SAMJHANA
KON SE AAINE MAIN DEKHEIN POOJA
her ek aaina dikhata hai, apno ko jaise ho koi Anjaana
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«Reply #18 on: September 20, 2009, 04:24:50 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on September 20, 2009, 03:43:39 AM
Bahut khoob mazhur ji and Pooja di .. Nice going Clapping Smiley

Thanks Roja
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«Reply #19 on: September 20, 2009, 04:30:13 AM »
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mazHur jee aur Poojaa jee aap donoN ne bahot hi Khoob liKhaa haii !! daad qabUl keejiye!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval
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«Reply #20 on: September 20, 2009, 04:31:43 AM »
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Quote from: Dhaval on September 20, 2009, 04:30:13 AM
mazHur jee aur Poojaa jee aap donoN ne bahot hi Khoob liKhaa haii !! daad qabUl keejiye!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval

Bahoot bahoot shukaria Dhaval ji.... Hamesha khush rahe!!!!
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«Reply #21 on: September 20, 2009, 05:04:22 AM »
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Quote from: Dhaval on September 20, 2009, 04:30:13 AM
mazHur jee aur Poojaa jee aap donoN ne bahot hi Khoob liKhaa haii !! daad qabUl keejiye!

KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~ Dhaval


Shukriya Dhaval..Roja and all.


Teri aankhon se behtay hein  aansoo
tum bhi maare hu ay ho furqat ke!
 
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«Reply #22 on: September 20, 2009, 05:13:37 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 20, 2009, 04:24:27 AM
WO KAH KAR KHUD KO DEEWANA
KAHTE HAI KI NAHI AB SAMJHANA
KON SE AAINE MAIN DEKHEIN POOJA
her ek aaina dikhata hai, apno ko jaise ho koi Anjaana


mein deewana na tha laikin
tumhein dekha toe kuch ho gaya
tujh ko kia malloom tu kia janay
piyaar hota he kia beWafa!
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«Reply #23 on: September 20, 2009, 05:14:54 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on September 20, 2009, 03:43:39 AM
Bahut khoob mazhur ji and Pooja di .. Nice going Clapping Smiley

Roja jee aapka bahut bahut dhanevad!
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«Reply #24 on: September 25, 2009, 07:09:45 PM »
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Quote from: mazHur on September 20, 2009, 05:13:37 AM

mein deewana na tha laikin
tumhein dekha toe kuch ho gaya
tujh ko kia malloom tu kia janay
piyaar hota he kia beWafa!



parr kar BeWafa shabd
kahne ko kaya rah gaya
abhi abhi to hue the Hum-kalam
per ab likhne ko kaya rah gaya...
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«Reply #25 on: September 25, 2009, 07:48:35 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 25, 2009, 07:09:45 PM
parr kar BeWafa shabd
kahne ko kaya rah gaya
abhi abhi to hue the Hum-kalam
per ab likhne ko kaya rah gaya...


Ay haseena Bewafai chorr de
tootay dil ko aa ke ab too jorr de

apni aankhon se pila madhosh kar
saagar o meena suhaahi torr de!


aa ke mit jaaye andhera raat ka
chaand sa chehra idhar bhi morr de!

josh me husn-e-karishma saaz he
'baj raha he aur be aawaaz he!'
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«Reply #26 on: September 25, 2009, 07:53:43 PM »
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Quote from: mazHur on September 25, 2009, 07:48:35 PM

Ay haseena Bewafai chorr de
tootay dil ko aa ke ab too jorr de

apni aankhon se pila madhosh kar
saagar o meena suhaahi torr de!


aa ke mit jaaye andhera raat ka
chaand sa chehra idhar bhi morr de!

josh me husn-e-karishma saaz he
'baj raha he aur be aawaaz he!'

LAST LINE SUPERBB... BAHOOT KHOOB!!

Bewafa kah kar itani umeend lagate ho
kis yug ke ashiq ho, kalam khoob chalte ho

Ankhon mai bhar kar angaare, payar ki jyot chahte ho
sagar ko kah khara paani, Amrit ki aass lagate ho

Chand ko dikhla uske daag, roshani ki umeend lagate ho
Bula kar hume bewafa, phir kyun ahsaas jagate ho...
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«Reply #27 on: September 25, 2009, 08:11:40 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 25, 2009, 07:53:43 PM
LAST LINE SUPERBB... BAHOOT KHOOB!!

Bewafa kah kar itani umeend lagate ho
kis yug ke ashiq ho, kalam khoob chalte ho

Ankhon mai bhar kar angaare, payar ki jyot chahte ho
sagar ko kah khara paani, Amrit ki aass lagate ho

Chand ko dikhla uske daag, roshani ki umeend lagate ho
Bula kar hume bewafa, phir kyun ahsaas jagate ho...


superb! You are fit for Pooja!! lol


kia karoon majboor hoon dil se
tum mili ho kitnee  mushkil se

tum na bolo gi muhabbat he
pooch loonga me tere dil se


lagta he sone na do gee tum
lagta he chorro gee mushkil se!
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«Reply #28 on: September 25, 2009, 08:18:58 PM »
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Ode to Pooja ji

Jab se aa ee he saamnay pooja
meri nazroan ko na jacha dooja
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«Reply #29 on: September 25, 2009, 09:07:13 PM »
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Quote from: mazHur on September 25, 2009, 08:11:40 PM

superb! You are fit for Pooja!! lol

kia karoon majboor hoon dil se
tum mili ho kitnee  mushkil se

tum na bolo gi muhabbat he
pooch loonga me tere dil se

lagta he sone na do gee tum
lagta he chorro gee mushkil se!


shukari shukaria janab!!


Mushkil se mili, asaani se gawa diya
wah re Murakh Insaan, apne hatho he sab tabah kiya

jo hota hai dil main wo he to juban per hota hai
per yah kis tarah ki muhobbat se tumne milwa diya

shabdo mai bewafa, shabdo main muhobbat ka jaadu
yeh kis kis raste se, apne, khud ke dil ka sur mila diya

So jaaye ab ki na jaage aor yaha yoindia per
phir kahege ki Pooja ne humko sari raat jaga diya

Note: Murkh Insaan shabd ek dostana lehze main istemaal kiya hai, agar boora lage to PM KIJIYEGA.. DELETE HO JAYEGA Usual Smile
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