SUDHAR JAO!

by mazHur on September 19, 2009, 01:26:50 PM
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«Reply #30 on: September 25, 2009, 10:04:04 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Pooja ji,kamaal ke jawab diya aapne,really touching n mindblowing creation,excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #31 on: September 26, 2009, 07:59:18 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on September 25, 2009, 09:07:13 PM

shukari shukaria janab!!


Mushkil se mili, asaani se gawa diya
wah re Murakh Insaan, apne hatho he sab tabah kiya

jo hota hai dil main wo he to juban per hota hai
per yah kis tarah ki muhobbat se tumne milwa diya

shabdo mai bewafa, shabdo main muhobbat ka jaadu
yeh kis kis raste se, apne, khud ke dil ka sur mila diya

So jaaye ab ki na jaage aor yaha yoindia per
phir kahege ki Pooja ne humko sari raat jaga diya

Note: Murkh Insaan shabd ek dostana lehze main istemaal kiya hai, agar boora lage to PM KIJIYEGA.. DELETE HO JAYEGA Usual Smile


Taray ginte rahe aur phir so gaye
ay meray chaand tum toe kaheen kho gaye

phool mujh se na maango meri jan-e-man
fasl-e-gham kion mere dil me tum bo gaye.


tujh se milne ka itna asar toe hua
hum diwane the moorakh bhi ab ho gaye!

 
 
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«Reply #32 on: March 21, 2010, 08:25:31 PM »
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Ajj bahoot waqat baad Yoindia per anna hua hai.. ek ek likhi kavita is thread ki parri.. bahoot acha laga....

Mai nahi janati ki app abhi bhi Yo per atte hai ya nahi... magar jawab likhne ja rahi hu...

Suraj ki roshini mai shayad hum najar nahi ayye
chaha bahoot magar wapis jawab likh nahi paaye

aye hai ajj to dekho likh rahe hai hum
fasal-e-gum ko khatam karne hai ayye

murkh kaha tha pyar se, kyun afsaana bana diya
hum likh chale, ab na kahna, ki hum lout kar nahi ayye 
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«Reply #33 on: March 21, 2010, 08:29:07 PM »
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tum kaho aur hum na aayein?
Jaaen jaaen jaaen jaaen!!
Winking
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«Reply #34 on: March 21, 2010, 09:10:39 PM »
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Quote from: mazHur on September 19, 2009, 01:26:50 PM
Sudhar Jao!
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Pass ho kar na door jao--sudhar jao
dil hamara na tum jalao---sudhar jao

chupke chupke na muskarao--sudhar jao
 raaz dil ka na yoon chupao---sudhar jao.

piyaar hum se bhi ghair se bhi he rasm-o-rah
 yoon na ahmaq hamein banao--sudhar jao

husn waalon ka kia bharosa muhabbat mein
aashiqo! jan-o-dil bachao---sudhar jao.

piyar bhi hum se karte ho aur chupte ho
ab ye andaaz na dikhao --sudhar jao.

dil toe tum le chuke ho jaan bhi tumhari he
ab ziada na aazmao ---sudhar jao.

zulf bikhri huee tunay huay hein abroo
jhoota ghussa toe na dikhao---sudhar jao.

kab milan ho ga phool dil ke khilein gay kab?
jaan-e-janana sach batao---sudhar jao.

baat bay baat roothnay waalo rootho magar
piyar se haath toe  milao---sudhar jao.
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Wah Wah MazHur Sahab
Kya Khoob Kalaam Nazar Kiya Hai Aapne
Har Ashaar Da'd Ka Mustahiq Hai.

Waqai Mein Parhke Tabiyat Mast Ho Gayi
Bahut Hi Umda Janaab.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Dil Se Nikli Da'd Kabul Karen...!
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«Reply #35 on: March 21, 2010, 09:18:52 PM »
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aap kehtay ho toe hum muskaaye laite hein
apni qismet ko zara chamkaye laite hein!
dhanebad!   
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«Reply #36 on: March 22, 2010, 03:31:26 AM »
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Quote from: mazHur on March 21, 2010, 08:29:07 PM
tum kaho aur hum na aayein?
Jaaen jaaen jaaen jaaen!!
Winking

Oh My God!!!! Magar Do lines to likh dete app.....
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«Reply #37 on: March 22, 2010, 12:10:11 PM »
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tum kaho toe likh ke daftar bhej doo'n?
dil ki  barbadi ka manzar bhej doo'n.

tum kaho to sur ke bal aa jaaoon mein
tum kaho to bosay bhar bhar bhej doo'n??

thank you, Pooja. Nice to hear from you after long time.
I hope you will be able to frequent your visits to the group and tickle our hearts with your sexy comments.
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«Reply #38 on: December 04, 2012, 02:09:29 AM »
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Quote from: mazHur on September 19, 2009, 01:26:50 PM
Sudhar Jao!
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Pass ho kar na door jao--sudhar jao
dil hamara na tum jalao---sudhar jao

chupke chupke na muskarao--sudhar jao
 raaz dil ka na yoon chupao---sudhar jao.

piyaar hum se bhi ghair se bhi he rasm-o-rah
 yoon na ahmaq hamein banao--sudhar jao

husn waalon ka kia bharosa muhabbat mein
aashiqo! jan-o-dil bachao---sudhar jao.

piyar bhi hum se karte ho aur chupte ho
ab ye andaaz na dikhao --sudhar jao.

dil toe tum le chuke ho jaan bhi tumhari he
ab ziada na aazmao ---sudhar jao.

zulf bikhri huee tunay huay hein abroo
jhoota ghussa toe na dikhao---sudhar jao.

kab milan ho ga phool dil ke khilein gay kab?
jaan-e-janana sach batao---sudhar jao.

baat bay baat roothnay waalo rootho magar
piyar se haath toe  milao---sudhar jao.
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