Sunaa hai, kabhee mujh par sanam meyrey, meyhrbaan bhee they!

by abdbundeli on September 05, 2010, 11:49:49 AM
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Rawaan hai aaj beyshak reyg, lamahey khushnumaan bhee they!
Bhaley hee aaj hon maayuus, par ham shaadmaan bhee they!!

Kabhee hansnaa, kabhee ronaa, kabhee 'athhkheyliyaan' karnaa;
Qayaam-e-zeest mein tab tifl they, phir noujawaan bhee they!

Talab kee raah mein aaye na jaaney kitney chouraahey:
Yeh muttahidah anaasir dost, tab dour-e-rawaan bhee they!

Ameeree yaa gareebee rooh-e-insaan bhee badaltee hai?
Khadey hain kaarkhaaney ab, waheen tab aashiyaan bhee they!

Kahaan, yah aashiyaanaa chhod, bulbul ud gayee hai ab?
Yaheen thaa baag tab gulzaar, achchhey baagbaan bhee they!

Hamaarey saath chalnaa chaahtey ho? Hamnasheen aaou!
Abhee yeh raah soonee hai: yaheen, tab, rahnumaan bhee they!!

Kahaan jaayengey: kyaa maalum: thhikaanaa ho to batlaayen?
Kabhee zarkheyz they manzar, zira'at key nishaan bhee they!

Thhithhaktey yom-o-shab har qadam par: katey nahin katatey:
Tumhaaraa saath thaa jab, tab yahee dour-e-dawaan bhee they!

Tujhey pahichaananey ko noor zeyhnee hai, 'abd', mouzoon:
Sunaa hai, kabhee mujh par, sanam meyrey meyhrbaan bhee they!


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«Reply #1 on: September 05, 2010, 12:49:10 PM »
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wah waah waaaah bahut khoob abd ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
kamaal kar diya aapki kalam ne.
Rawaan hai aaj beyshak reyg, lamahey khushnumaan bhee they!
Bhaley hee aaj hon maayuus, par ham shaadmaan bhee they!!

Kabhee hansnaa, kabhee ronaa, kabhee 'athhkheyliyaan' karnaa;
Qayaam-e-zeest mein tab tifl they, phir noujawaan bhee they!

Talab kee raah mein aaye na jaaney kitney chouraahey:
Yeh muttahidah anaasir dost, tab dour-e-rawaan bhee they!

Ameeree yaa gareebee rooh-e-insaan bhee badaltee hai?
Khadey hain kaarkhaaney ab, waheen tab aashiyaan bhee they!

Kahaan, yah aashiyaanaa chhod, bulbul ud gayee hai ab?
Yaheen thaa baag tab gulzaar, achchhey baagbaan bhee they!

Hamaarey saath chalnaa chaahtey ho? Hamnasheen aaou!
Abhee yeh raah soonee hai: yaheen, tab, rahnumaan bhee they!!

Kahaan jaayengey: kyaa maalum: thhikaanaa ho to batlaayen?
Kabhee zarkheyz they manzar, zira'at key nishaan bhee they!

Thhithhaktey yom-o-shab har qadam par: katey nahin katatey:
Tumhaaraa saath thaa jab, tab yahee dour-e-dawaan bhee they!

Tujhey pahichaananey ko noor zeyhnee hai, 'abd', mouzoon:
Sunaa hai, kabhee mujh par, sanam meyrey meyhrbaan bhee they!


                                      - abd bundeli


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«Reply #2 on: September 05, 2010, 01:08:09 PM »
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wah waah waaaah bahut khoob abd ji. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
kamaal kar diya aapki kalam ne.


Aapki duaa hai, Suresh ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #3 on: September 05, 2010, 05:40:06 PM »
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Ab Budeli Sahab Aadaab O Tasleemat

Waah kia Gazal se nawaazaa hai Sahab..... Be IntehaaN khoobsurat pur asar, pur latf ..... Is gazal ki tareef ke liye humare paas alfaaz hi nahi hai....

Jee realy Im speechless now...... Dil ki geharai se nikali daad ko kabool kijiye Sahab.... Is murrasa Gazal ki tareef hum waqai nahi kar sakte humari abtak ki favorite GazaloN meiN hum aapki is gazal ka shumaar karte hai....

Aisi umdaa KhayaloN se aur beshkimti lafzoN meiN jadi is gazal par hazaaroN daad .....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aisi hi GazaloN se bazm ko nawaazte rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye...... Allah aapki kalam meiN aur zor bakhshe... aameen

Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2010, 05:50:29 AM »
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Ab Budeli Sahab Aadaab O Tasleemat

Waah kia Gazal se nawaazaa hai Sahab..... Be IntehaaN khoobsurat pur asar, pur latf ..... Is gazal ki tareef ke liye humare paas alfaaz hi nahi hai....

Jee realy Im speechless now...... Dil ki geharai se nikali daad ko kabool kijiye Sahab.... Is murrasa Gazal ki tareef hum waqai nahi kar sakte humari abtak ki favorite GazaloN meiN hum aapki is gazal ka shumaar karte hai....

Aisi umdaa KhayaloN se aur beshkimti lafzoN meiN jadi is gazal par hazaaroN daad .....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Aisi hi GazaloN se bazm ko nawaazte rahiye.....
Khush O aabaad rahiye...... Allah aapki kalam meiN aur zor bakhshe... aameen

Khuda Hafez..... Usual Smile         



Bahut-bahut shukriyah, ParwaaZ ji!

Aap meyrey kalaam ko itnee gahraayee sey deykh raheyn hain, aur, wah bhi itnee 'sahrudaytaa' key saath: jaankar bahut achchhaa lagtaa hai!

                  - abd bundeli
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