suraj

by suman59 on July 05, 2012, 09:33:16 PM
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din bahut beete nikalte is tarah suraj
de sake toh de nayee ab ek subah suraj

ghoomta-firta shehar ki tang galiyon mein
us jagah hota agar mai jis tara suraj

late jaata hai lagakar dhoop ka takiya
sochta hai fir andhere ki wajah suraj

laut aayegi ghata khud ek-do din mein
ker musafir se nahi itni jirah suraj

lad gaye woh din tujhe maata jhukane ke
ab kisi bi galatfahmi mein na reh suraj

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«Reply #1 on: July 05, 2012, 11:38:26 PM »
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nice
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«Reply #2 on: July 06, 2012, 01:05:16 AM »
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Ma'm very good , what a nice creation , and these lines are awesome,

late jaata hai lagakar dhoop ka takiya
sochta hai fir andhere ki wajah suraj...........    Applause    Applause   Applause
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«Reply #3 on: July 06, 2012, 01:14:47 AM »
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BAHUT KHUB SWEET AUNTY REALLY GREAT CREATION............ BAHUT BADHIYA LAGA PADHKAR.....

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«Reply #4 on: July 06, 2012, 02:08:18 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hain aapne, padhkar mazaa aa gaya
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«Reply #5 on: July 06, 2012, 03:54:58 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob dili daad qubool karen
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«Reply #6 on: July 06, 2012, 07:17:54 AM »
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bohat khooob
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«Reply #7 on: July 06, 2012, 09:47:15 AM »
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wao, this is so nice, aapki har peom ek se badhkar ek hai..abhi abhi devotional section me ek padhi thi aur ab ye...very very nice
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«Reply #8 on: July 13, 2012, 01:22:21 PM »
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nice
thanks jee
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«Reply #9 on: July 13, 2012, 01:23:33 PM »
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Ma'm very good , what a nice creation , and these lines are awesome,

late jaata hai lagakar dhoop ka takiya
sochta hai fir andhere ki wajah suraj...........    Applause    Applause   Applause

bahut bahut shukriya aarish jee aapne tarif ki. tks again  Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: July 13, 2012, 01:25:13 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob dili daad qubool karen

mujhe bahut accha laga aapne yeh ghazal ko pada aur tarif ki. guru aap hai aap se kuch kuch seek rahi hu saini jee.
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«Reply #11 on: July 13, 2012, 01:25:44 PM »
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bohat khooob

thanks beta
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«Reply #12 on: July 13, 2012, 01:28:29 PM »
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wao, this is so nice, aapki har peom ek se badhkar ek hai..abhi abhi devotional section me ek padhi thi aur ab ye...very very nice

shukriya sps jee. devotional sec mein maine kuch likha jaisa yad nahi aa raha hai. shayad aap ne kisi our ka pada hoga. shukriya for appreciating this ghazal
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