Taare Dekhta Hoon,.

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As Salaam Walaikum,.
Pehli Baar Ghazal Section Mein Kuch Likhne Ki Koshish Kar Raha Hoon,.

Allah Kamyaab Kare,.




Tim Timaate Charaag Saare Dekhta Hoon,.
Ab Raat Hote Hi Main Taare Dekhta Hoon,.

Wo Bichda Mujhse, Dariya Ke Sahil Ki Tarah,.
Main Maujon Mein Doobkar Kinaare Dekhta Hoon,.

Kehte Hain Sab "Ye Andheron Mein Kahan Khojaata Hai,.
Inhe Kya Khabar Kaise Dilkash Nazaare Dekhta Hoon,.

Hain Paas Hoke Bhi, Hum Bohat Door Aakhir,.
Jo Milne Nahi Dete Wo Naseeb Hamaare Dekhta Hoon,.

Kaash Banjaaye Haqeeqat, Mere Khwaabon Ki Tarah,.
Ke Aksar Main Khwaab Bade Pyaare Dekhta Hoon,.

Tim Timaate Charaag Saare Dekhta Hoon,.
Ab Raat Hote Hi Main Taare Dekhta Hoon,.

Ab Raat Hote Hi Main Taare Dekhta Hoon,.

-Azeem-
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«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2010, 03:04:54 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem Bhai..

Bahut hi khoobsurat Ehsaas..Masuniyat se bhari ghazal pesh ki hai aapne..

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«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2010, 03:06:20 PM »
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Wah! Kya baat hai Chote Bhai
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«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2010, 03:42:10 PM »
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AZEEM JI!BAHUT KHOOB LIKHTE HAIN AAP.VAQAI KISI PAHADI NADI KI TARAH LAFZON KI RAWANGI EK ROOMANIYAT KO PAIDA KAR RAHI HAI.US PAR AAP KE JAZBAAT KO BAYAN KARTI TASVEER !SUBAHANALLAH!!!OLD HINDI FILM KA EK GEET MUJHE YAAD AA GAYA.......

YE RAATEN YE MOUSAM NADI KA KINARA YE CHANCHAL HAWA........
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«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2010, 04:38:05 PM »
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Daer saal huwa aaj, humaari muhabbat ko rang chadre, sanam
bin mille ye kaisa saroor hai? Kaise khwaabon me mill rahe hum...

Tum meri zindigi banngaye, main tumhaari qul qayanat.
Tum na bolo, tho b samhaj jaun dil ki baat.

Aisi hai ye kashish, do dil k taar k beech, meri jaan.
Taaraen dehko tum, din ki fiza me b... Ye hai muhabbat ka karwaan.

Kadrwataen badalta rehta hai mera dil, aur teri ye "dharkan"
Mubarak ho tumhe, ye saahil aur asmaan ka milan.

I love you ji. I love u darling. I love you.

Thank u for being a part of my every day. For supporting me every second of these past eighteen months. I wish there weee words enough to tell u, what you have becone for me.

Happy Eighteenth Month Anniversary to the one man in my life.
I love you ajju darling
 
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2010, 04:45:44 PM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on June 20, 2010, 04:38:05 PM
Daer saal huwa aaj, humaari muhabbat ko rang chadre, sanam
bin mille ye kaisa saroor hai? Kaise khwaabon me mill rahe hum...

Tum meri zindigi banngaye, main tumhaari qul qayanat.
Tum na bolo, tho b samhaj jaun dil ki baat.

Aisi hai ye kashish, do dil k taar k beech, meri jaan.
Taaraen dehko tum, din ki fiza me b... Ye hai muhabbat ka karwaan.

Kadrwataen badalta rehta hai mera dil, aur teri ye "dharkan"
Mubarak ho tumhe, ye saahil aur asmaan ka milan.

I love you ji. I love u darling. I love you.

Thank u for being a part of my every day. For supporting me every second of these past eighteen months. I wish there weee words enough to tell u, what you have becone for me.

Happy Eighteenth Month Anniversary to the one man in my life.
I love you ajju darling
 


Ye Ghazal, Ye Kalaam Tumhaare Liye Hain,.
Mera Din Meri Shaam Tumhaare Liye Hain,.

Meri Hasratein Tamaam, Tumhaare Liye Hain,.
Meri Hasti Mera Naam, Tumhaare Liye Hain,.

Love You Too, Happy Anniversary Too,.

Allah Hamaari Khwaaishein Zarooratein Poori Karein,.

Rab Khair Kare,.
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«Reply #6 on: June 20, 2010, 08:43:08 PM »
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bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne Azeem ji.... bahut khoob... jaadu se bhare huye hain aapke ek ek shabd...  mohabbat me jab kuch likha jaata hai to uski khoobsurti aur bhi badh jaati hai.... Lajawaab likha hai aapne... bahut bahut khoob...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 20, 2010, 08:46:17 PM »
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Haardik shubhkaamnaayein Anjaan ji aur Azeem ji...!!! Aur bahut khoob likha hai aapne Anjaan ji...!!!

Quote from: anjaan dharkan on June 20, 2010, 04:38:05 PM
Daer saal huwa aaj, humaari muhabbat ko rang chadre, sanam
bin mille ye kaisa saroor hai? Kaise khwaabon me mill rahe hum...

Tum meri zindigi banngaye, main tumhaari qul qayanat.
Tum na bolo, tho b samhaj jaun dil ki baat.

Aisi hai ye kashish, do dil k taar k beech, meri jaan.
Taaraen dehko tum, din ki fiza me b... Ye hai muhabbat ka karwaan.

Kadrwataen badalta rehta hai mera dil, aur teri ye "dharkan"
Mubarak ho tumhe, ye saahil aur asmaan ka milan.

I love you ji. I love u darling. I love you.

Thank u for being a part of my every day. For supporting me every second of these past eighteen months. I wish there weee words enough to tell u, what you have becone for me.

Happy Eighteenth Month Anniversary to the one man in my life.
I love you ajju darling
 
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«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2010, 12:25:45 AM »
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    Bahut khoobsurat likha hai Azeem ji. Aur mubarak ho aap dono ko, Rab aap dono par apni meher banay rakhe.
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«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2010, 09:53:59 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on June 20, 2010, 02:56:50 PM
As Salaam Walaikum,.
Pehli Baar Ghazal Section Mein Kuch Likhne Ki Koshish Kar Raha Hoon,.

Allah Kamyaab Kare,.




Tim Timaate Charaag Saare Dekhta Hoon,.
Ab Raat Hote Hi Main Taare Dekhta Hoon,.

Wo Bichda Mujhse, Dariya Ke Sahil Ki Tarah,.
Main Maujon Mein Doobkar Kinaare Dekhta Hoon,.

Kehte Hain Sab "Ye Andheron Mein Kahan Khojaata Hai,.
Inhe Kya Khabar Kaise Dilkash Nazaare Dekhta Hoon,.

Hain Paas Hoke Bhi, Hum Bohat Door Aakhir,.
Jo Milne Nahi Dete Wo Naseeb Hamaare Dekhta Hoon,.

Kaash Banjaaye Haqeeqat, Mere Khwaabon Ki Tarah,.
Ke Aksar Main Khwaab Bade Pyaare Dekhta Hoon,.

Tim Timaate Charaag Saare Dekhta Hoon,.
Ab Raat Hote Hi Main Taare Dekhta Hoon,.

Ab Raat Hote Hi Main Taare Dekhta Hoon,.

-Azeem-

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause BEhad Khubsoorat likha hai Bhai apne..Hamesha ki tarha..MAza agay padkar...
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«Reply #10 on: June 21, 2010, 09:56:45 PM »
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Quote from: anjaan dharkan on June 20, 2010, 04:38:05 PM
Daer saal huwa aaj, humaari muhabbat ko rang chadre, sanam
bin mille ye kaisa saroor hai? Kaise khwaabon me mill rahe hum...

Tum meri zindigi banngaye, main tumhaari qul qayanat.
Tum na bolo, tho b samhaj jaun dil ki baat.

Aisi hai ye kashish, do dil k taar k beech, meri jaan.
Taaraen dehko tum, din ki fiza me b... Ye hai muhabbat ka karwaan.

Kadrwataen badalta rehta hai mera dil, aur teri ye "dharkan"
Mubarak ho tumhe, ye saahil aur asmaan ka milan.

I love you ji. I love u darling. I love you.

Thank u for being a part of my every day. For supporting me every second of these past eighteen months. I wish there weee words enough to tell u, what you have becone for me.

Happy Eighteenth Month Anniversary to the one man in my life.
I love you ajju darling
 
Hmm bahaut bahaut mubarak ho aap dono ko yeh anniversary...yeh 18 months se saal aur saal se decades aur decades se centuries aur centuries se janam janam tak tabdil hojaye yeh dua hai aap dono ke liye humari...Yeh ehsaas-e-mohobat bada khubsoorat hai aur main janta hoon ke kitni khushi milti hai mashAllah se..dua hai hamesha saath rahe...Kabhi juda na ho...Ameen!

Allah Khair kare...
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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2010, 01:12:12 AM »
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bahot khoob azeem saheb bahot achhe ...umda paishkash hai janab ..wah wah
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«Reply #12 on: June 23, 2010, 03:42:02 PM »
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Dear Azeem bhut khoob mashallah

Yun hi chlati rahi din raat kahani meri
jiska har baab tere naam se mansoob rahe
jiska har lafz teri khushboo mai moa'attar hi rahe 
jiski satron mai tera aks ubhr kar aaye
jiski pakeezgi mansoob ho tere daaman se
mein chaha hai yahi ey meri jaan e hayaat
ab ke tu kahaani ka meri unwaan huii jaati hai.............



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«Reply #13 on: June 27, 2010, 02:32:33 AM »
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Janab Azeem sahab bhot achi takhliq hai ye apki aur mehnat bhi kafi ki ise likhne me. Ek bat kahna chahta hu ke ye beher me nahi hai isliey ise gazal nahi kaha ja sakta. Beher gazal ki ek zaruri shart hoti hai. So jab tak aap beher me na likhne lagen  usse gazal section me post na karen.

Kuch aur members bhi aisa kar rahe unse bhi yahi request hai.
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«Reply #14 on: August 17, 2010, 07:19:03 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 20, 2010, 03:04:54 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Azeem Bhai..

Bahut hi khoobsurat Ehsaas..Masuniyat se bhari ghazal pesh ki hai aapne..

shukriya Khwaaish bhai,.



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