Taish- aansu KHAREED laaya hooN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on July 16, 2013, 06:52:44 PM
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Ek alag aur mushkil qaafiya ko nibhaate hue ahl-e-bazm ke saamne ek taaza ghazal pesh kar raha huN... Umeed karta huN jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga...!!



main bure ahche deed* laaya hooN,
aaj fir kuch umeed laaya hooN...

*Karam

tumne bhi gham diye haiN tohfe meN,
maiN bhi aaNsu khareed laaya hooN...

qatl kar dena aaj sabka tum,
apne saare mureed* laaya hooN...

*prashanshak

ishq ka sab saboot maaNgte haiN,
dastkhat ko raseed laaya hooN...

ab to ehsaash bhi naye nahiN haiN,
ho chuke jo shaheed laaya hooN...

todte waqt dil haNsi thi tum,
aur ik dil khareed laaya hooN...

'taish' ka ishq haarne se haiN khush,
jinki khaatir maiN eid laaya hooN...
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2013, 06:56:45 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2013, 07:22:36 PM »
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Wooooooow
ishq ka sab saboot maaNgte haiN,
dastkhat ko raseed laaya hooN...
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2013, 08:39:27 PM »
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Good One Taish Jee.
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2013, 10:04:26 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on July 16, 2013, 06:52:44 PM
Ek alag aur mushkil qaafiya ko nibhaate hue ahl-e-bazm ke saamne ek taaza ghazal pesh kar raha huN... Umeed karta huN jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga...!!



main bure ahche deed* laaya hooN,
aaj fir kuch umeed laaya hooN...

*Karam

tumne bhi gham diye haiN tohfe meN,
maiN bhi aaNsu khareed laaya hooN...

qatl kar dena aaj sabka tum,
apne saare mureed* laaya hooN...

*prashanshak

ishq ka sab saboot maaNgte haiN,
dastkhat ko raseed laaya hooN...

ab to ehsaash bhi naye nahiN haiN,
ho chuke jo shaheed laaya hooN...

todte waqt dil haNsi thi tum,
aur ik dil khareed laaya hooN...

'taish' ka ishq haarne se haiN khush,
jinki khaatir maiN eid laaya hooN...

waaaaaaaaaaaah 3rd sher khaas raha janab Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2013, 10:22:29 PM »
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tumne bhi gham diye haiN tohfe meN,
maiN bhi aaNsu khareed laaya hooN...

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Waah Bahut Khoob
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2013, 10:56:50 PM »
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waah waah bahut hi khoob Bhushan jee, kaafi achhi lagi ye ghazal.
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«Reply #7 on: July 16, 2013, 11:29:31 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Taish ji, kyaa kehne , bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 16, 2013, 11:51:47 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on July 16, 2013, 06:56:45 PM
very nice

bahukhandi saaheb hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab...!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 17, 2013, 01:01:39 AM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on July 16, 2013, 07:22:36 PM
Wooooooow
ishq ka sab saboot maaNgte haiN,
dastkhat ko raseed laaya hooN...
 Applause Clapping Smiley Applause

iqtedaar saaheb hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab...!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2013, 01:05:07 AM »
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ultimate.. superb taish ji Usual Smile definitely awesome.. plus rau Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: July 17, 2013, 01:48:55 AM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 16, 2013, 08:39:27 PM
Good One Taish Jee.

pasand karne ka shukriya janaab....!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 17, 2013, 02:57:14 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on July 16, 2013, 10:04:26 PM
waaaaaaaaaaaah 3rd sher khaas raha janab Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

adil saaheb hausla afzaayi ka shukriya janaab, jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko kosish pasand aayi, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath dete raheN...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 17, 2013, 03:00:38 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on July 16, 2013, 06:52:44 PM
Ek alag aur mushkil qaafiya ko nibhaate hue ahl-e-bazm ke saamne ek taaza ghazal pesh kar raha huN... Umeed karta huN jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga...!!



main bure ahche deed* laaya hooN,
aaj fir kuch umeed laaya hooN...

insaan gunah ka putla hai per jab bhi khuda se muafi mage ga khuda muaaf kar de ga ye ek sachchai hai aur sabhi jante hain icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

*Karam

tumne bhi gham diye haiN tohfe meN,
maiN bhi aaNsu khareed laaya hooN...
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))aaj kal ghum jamaa karne ka shauq chad gaya hai janab ko acha hi hai. ghum se khogar hua insaan to jaata raha ghum aur mushkilein itna padi mujh pe ki asaan ho gai
qatl kar dena aaj sabka tum,
apne saare mureed* laaya hooN...
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hardmere liye yahi kafi hai tum mere mureed ban jaao
*prashanshak

ishq ka sab saboot maaNgte haiN,
dastkhat ko raseed laaya hooN...
ishq ko bhi aaj-kal bade official tariqe se deal kar rahe ho mere modern ashiq Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
ab to ehsaash bhi naye nahiN haiN,
ho chuke jo shaheed laaya hooN...
kya kahne ji bahut khoob is sher pe ek rau deti hoon Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
todte waqt dil haNsi thi tum,
aur ik dil khareed laaya hooN...
kya market mein dil bikna shuru ho gaya hai ...haan bahi naya zamaana hai aage aage deko kya kay hota hai icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
'taish' ka ishq haarne se haiN khush,
jinki khaatir maiN eid laaya hooN...

kya kahne haan ji ishaq mein haarne mein zayada maza hai banisbat ke jeetne ke aisa main ne suna hai mujhe tajurba nahin hai aap khate ho to sahi hoga. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

khoobsoorat ghazal hai janaab tumhaari aur maine ek rau ek sher pe diya hai....!jo ki aisa sher padhne mein bahut kamm milta hai......... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #14 on: July 17, 2013, 04:24:29 AM »
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on July 16, 2013, 10:22:29 PM
tumne bhi gham diye haiN tohfe meN,
maiN bhi aaNsu khareed laaya hooN...


Waah Bahut Khoob

saraswat saaheb humari khushnaseebi ki aapko kosish pasand aayi, umeed karta hun aage bhi aapka saath yunhi milta rahegaa...!!
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