Taish- aansu KHAREED laaya hooN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on July 16, 2013, 06:52:44 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 17, 2013, 05:07:57 AM »
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khalish ghazal Taish saaab
hats off
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«Reply #16 on: July 17, 2013, 08:27:55 AM »
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bahut achhi ghazal hai taish ji ,
anokhe aur khubsurat  ashaar se
aarasta.bahut mubarakbad
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«Reply #17 on: July 17, 2013, 11:27:54 AM »
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mashaa allah waah waah kyaa kahne
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«Reply #18 on: July 17, 2013, 11:55:10 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on July 16, 2013, 10:56:50 PM
waah waah bahut hi khoob Bhushan jee, kaafi achhi lagi ye ghazal.

iftakhar saaheb bahut bahut shukriya is kosish ko apni tareef se nawaazne ke liye, umeed karta hun aapka saath hume aage bhi yuNhi milta rahegaa...
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«Reply #19 on: July 17, 2013, 02:01:03 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on July 16, 2013, 11:29:31 PM
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waah waah waah waah Taish ji, kyaa kehne , bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!!

hriday ji bahut bahut shukraguzaar hun aapka, jo aapne kalaam ko pasand kiya aur saraaha, umeed karta huN ki aapka saath aur pyar yuNhi barkaraar rahegaaa...
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«Reply #20 on: July 17, 2013, 02:16:55 PM »
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tumne bhi gham diye haiN tohfe meN,
maiN bhi aaNsu khareed laaya hooN...

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bahut khoob taish ji.. bahut umda likha hai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: July 17, 2013, 03:02:34 PM »
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Waaaaaaaah taish ji bahut bahut bahut khoob. mushkil qaafiyon ko bahut khoobi ke saath nibhaya hai aapne. sabhi ashaar ek dam dil ko chooooooo gaye. par in teen ashaar ke kya kehne. bahut gehri soch se saje hue hai. tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi.

tumne bhi gham diye haiN tohfe meN,
maiN bhi aaNsu khareed laaya hooN...

ishq ka sab saboot maaNgte haiN,
dastkhat ko raseed laaya hooN...

ab to ehsaash bhi naye nahiN haiN,
ho chuke jo shaheed laaya hooN...

Simply superbbbbbbb. dil se hazaron daaaaaaaaaaaaad.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #22 on: July 17, 2013, 03:04:02 PM »
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main bure ahche deed* laaya hooN,
aaj fir kuch umeed laaya hooN...

mastttttttttttttt start taish ..... Applause Applause Applause Applause

tumne bhi gham diye haiN tohfe meN,
maiN bhi aaNsu khareed laaya hooN...

bht khubsurat sher taish miyan.... love4 love4

qatl kar dena aaj sabka tum,
apne saare mureed* laaya hooN...

lagta hai sabse pehle mera hi qatl hona hai ab to....  Winking Winking Winking

ishq ka sab saboot maaNgte haiN,
dastkhat ko raseed laaya hooN...

waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kya istyle hai taana maarne ka ... badhiya ji badhiya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ab to ehsaash bhi naye nahiN haiN,
ho chuke jo shaheed laaya hooN...

ufffffffffffffff ye hui na baat mare hue ehsaason ko shaheed ka naam dekar unki izzat badha di yaara  notworthy notworthy

todte waqt dil haNsi thi tum,
aur ik dil khareed laaya hooN...

wowwww ek dil aur milega todne... bht khub tanz  ..  love4 love4

'taish' ka ishq haarne se haiN khush,
jinki khaatir maiN eid laaya hooN...

mastam mast sher dear ...  notworthy notworthy notworthy

behtareennnn gazal pesh ki hai tumne... aur kya khuub adaygee hai.. sach mithi chhuri se ho tum...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley NaNaNa NaNaNa
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«Reply #23 on: July 17, 2013, 03:18:52 PM »
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Quote from: lovely_charan on July 17, 2013, 01:05:07 AM
ultimate.. superb taish ji Usual Smile definitely awesome.. plus rau Usual Smile

charan dear, its a pleasure to know that u liked my attempt, and wuold juz thank u a tonne for ur praises, support, love and the rau, juz keep reading the same way dear....!!
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«Reply #24 on: July 17, 2013, 07:11:21 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on July 17, 2013, 05:07:57 AM
khalish ghazal Taish saaab
hats off


sarfira ji humari khusnaseebi jo aapko kosish pasand aayi, bas aage bhi yunhi hausla afzaayi karte rahiyegaa... Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: July 17, 2013, 07:14:40 PM »
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waa bohat khoob taish ji,.....bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #26 on: July 17, 2013, 07:18:43 PM »
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taish sir bahut khub bahut umda lajawab gazal ....bar bar padh rahe hai aapki isi ek gazal ko... hazaron daad ke sath
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«Reply #27 on: July 17, 2013, 11:24:37 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on July 17, 2013, 08:27:55 AM
bahut achhi ghazal hai taish ji ,
anokhe aur khubsurat  ashaar se
aarasta.bahut mubarakbad

hasan sir bade waqt baad koi ghazal aapko pasand aayi hai, ab yakeen ho gaya ki kuch ahcha likha hoga, bahut hausla milta hai janaab, jab bhi aap peeth thapthapaate haiN, bas yuNhi hausla dete raheN...!!
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«Reply #28 on: July 18, 2013, 12:57:32 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on July 17, 2013, 03:00:38 AM
khoobsoorat ghazal hai janaab tumhaari aur maine ek rau ek sher pe diya hai....!jo ki aisa sher padhne mein bahut kamm milta hai......... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

are hum to kab se aapke mureed bane baithe haiN, par aap hain ki palat kar dekhti tak nahiN haiN, waise sheba ji aapke tah-e-dil se shukraguzaar huN, jo aapne itne gaur se padhte hue har sher pe tanqeed ki, umeed karta hun aapse ye hausla afzaayi hume aage bhi yuNhi milti rahegi....!!
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«Reply #29 on: July 18, 2013, 02:00:40 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 17, 2013, 11:27:54 AM
mashaa allah waah waah kyaa kahne

shukriya sir ji, aapki hausla afzaayi se humesha hi bal milta hai, bas yuNhi aage bhi aashirwaad dete rahiye...
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