Taish- aansu KHAREED laaya hooN...!!

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«Reply #30 on: July 18, 2013, 02:42:45 AM »
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main bure ahche deed* laaya hooN,
aaj fir kuch umeed laaya hooN...


Bahut Khub Saheb Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #31 on: July 18, 2013, 03:07:13 AM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on July 17, 2013, 02:16:55 PM
tumne bhi gham diye haiN tohfe meN,
maiN bhi aaNsu khareed laaya hooN...

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob taish ji.. bahut umda likha hai.. Usual Smile


touhid saaheb shukraguzaar huN aapka, jo aapne itni hausla afzayai ki, umeed karta hun aapka pyar aage bhi yuNhi bana rahegaa...
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«Reply #32 on: July 18, 2013, 11:23:07 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on July 17, 2013, 03:02:34 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Waaaaaaaah taish ji bahut bahut bahut khoob. mushkil qaafiyon ko bahut khoobi ke saath nibhaya hai aapne. sabhi ashaar ek dam dil ko chooooooo gaye. par in teen ashaar ke kya kehne. bahut gehri soch se saje hue hai. tareef ke liye alfaaz nahi.

tumne bhi gham diye haiN tohfe meN,
maiN bhi aaNsu khareed laaya hooN...

ishq ka sab saboot maaNgte haiN,
dastkhat ko raseed laaya hooN...

ab to ehsaash bhi naye nahiN haiN,
ho chuke jo shaheed laaya hooN...

Simply superbbbbbbb. dil se hazaron daaaaaaaaaaaaad.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


aapko ye league se hatkar ki gayi kosish pasand aayi, jaan kar bahut sukoon mila, aaj kal kuch atpati kosishon meN huN shayad kahin in anjaane raastoN par mujhe mera pata mil jaaye, waise aapke saath se bahut bal milta hai, umeed karta hun ki aage bhi aapka saath hume yuNhi milta rahegaa....!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #33 on: July 18, 2013, 04:59:37 PM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 17, 2013, 03:04:02 PM
main bure ahche deed* laaya hooN,
aaj fir kuch umeed laaya hooN...

mastttttttttttttt start taish ..... Applause Applause Applause Applause

tumne bhi gham diye haiN tohfe meN,
maiN bhi aaNsu khareed laaya hooN...

bht khubsurat sher taish miyan.... love4 love4

qatl kar dena aaj sabka tum,
apne saare mureed* laaya hooN...

lagta hai sabse pehle mera hi qatl hona hai ab to....  Winking Winking Winking

ishq ka sab saboot maaNgte haiN,
dastkhat ko raseed laaya hooN...

waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kya istyle hai taana maarne ka ... badhiya ji badhiya  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

ab to ehsaash bhi naye nahiN haiN,
ho chuke jo shaheed laaya hooN...

ufffffffffffffff ye hui na baat mare hue ehsaason ko shaheed ka naam dekar unki izzat badha di yaara  notworthy notworthy

todte waqt dil haNsi thi tum,
aur ik dil khareed laaya hooN...

wowwww ek dil aur milega todne... bht khub tanz  ..  love4 love4

'taish' ka ishq haarne se haiN khush,
jinki khaatir maiN eid laaya hooN...

mastam mast sher dear ...  notworthy notworthy notworthy

behtareennnn gazal pesh ki hai tumne... aur kya khuub adaygee hai.. sach mithi chhuri se ho tum...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley NaNaNa NaNaNa


meethi churri with namak, mirch, masala hun maiN... hehehe waise pata hai aapka ye har sher pe comment kar ke jawaab dene ka andaaz hi niraala hai, bas yuNhi hausla deti rahiye aap likhne ki, aur hum bhi yuNhi paraspar kosish karte raheNge...
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«Reply #34 on: July 18, 2013, 06:47:40 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on July 17, 2013, 07:14:40 PM
waa bohat khoob taish ji,.....bohat c daad,..........

laaiba ji pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya, aapki daad humare sar aaNkhon pe...
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«Reply #35 on: July 18, 2013, 11:34:47 PM »
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Quote from: soudagar on July 17, 2013, 07:18:43 PM
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taish sir bahut khub bahut umda lajawab gazal ....bar bar padh rahe hai aapki isi ek gazal ko... hazaron daad ke sath

soudagar saaheb ye aapki nazron ka karam hai jo aapko kalaam itna pasand aa raha hai, nahiN to humari kya bisaat, waise umeed karta hun aap aage bhi hume itna hi pyar dete raheNge...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #36 on: July 19, 2013, 12:59:50 AM »
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lucky bro..,.kamaal kee ghajal hui hai...ek ek aashaar dil ko chu gaye.......ek rau plus karta hun..
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«Reply #37 on: July 19, 2013, 01:40:52 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on July 18, 2013, 02:42:45 AM
main bure ahche deed* laaya hooN,
aaj fir kuch umeed laaya hooN...


Bahut Khub Saheb Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


Shihab

shihab saaheb hausla afzaayi ka shukriya janaab, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath dete rahiye...!!
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«Reply #38 on: July 19, 2013, 01:42:03 PM »
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Quote from: aru12 on July 19, 2013, 12:59:50 AM
lucky bro..,.kamaal kee ghajal hui hai...ek ek aashaar dil ko chu gaye.......ek rau plus karta hun..

aru bhaiya, humari khusnaseebi jo aapko ghazal pasand aa saki, umeed karta huN ki aapka saath aage bhi yuNhi milta rahega, aur rau ke saath taareeef dono hi ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #39 on: August 27, 2013, 01:16:40 PM »
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