Taish- baat teri ab karuN PARCHAAIYON se main sanam...!!

by ghayal_shayar on May 03, 2013, 06:55:58 PM
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Zara hatt ke qaafiya chuna hai maine is baar, aur flavor bhi thoda alag daalne ki kosish ki hai, umeed karta huN ki aap logoN ko jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga maine...


ghoom aaya yaad ki gehraiiyoN se main sanam,
baat teri ab karuN parchaaiyon se maiN sanam...

haazma kyuN aql ka bigdaa hua hai aaj-kal,
thak gaya huN yaad ki in ultiyoN se main sanam...

dekhte hi teri surat fir mohabbat jaagi hai,
kab hooN seekha ishq ki in galtiyoN se maiN sanam...

dekh leta huN jo kabhi in dairy ke pannoN ko,
kaaNp jata yaadoN ki in sardiyoN se maiN sanam...

tu hai sabse khoobsurat gul khuda ke baagh ki,
haal tera jaan leta titliyon se main sanam...

kaudiyoN ke bhaav aashiq bikte haiN baazaar meN,
dekhuN ulfat ka tamaasha khidkiyoN se maiN sanam...

khat mere sab laut aaye, jo bhi tujhko the likhe,
poochta tera pata ab panchiyoN se main sanam...

soch kar us bewafa ko raat din ab is kadar,
saans uski rok dooN yuN hichkiyoN se maiN sanam...

roz karti baat jaane ki magar jaati nahiN,
jeest ko ab cheddta bedardiyoN se maiN sanam...
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«Reply #1 on: May 03, 2013, 07:33:43 PM »
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Waah taish ji. kya baat hai. bahut hi umda peshkash rahi. har sher khoob rahe. aapki yeh peshkash mujhe bahut jyaada pasand aayi.meri dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare...
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«Reply #2 on: May 03, 2013, 07:50:35 PM »
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bahut khoob....
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2013, 08:50:44 PM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab...!



WaaH waaH janab waaH kya kahne, behad umdaa khayaaloN ko kalam baNd kiya hai.. sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab.... Usual Smile

Gazab ke ashaar rahe aik se badhkar aik.... Usual Smile

Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda hafez... Usual Smile




Quote from: Taish on May 03, 2013, 06:55:58 PM
Zara hatt ke qaafiya chuna hai maine is baar, aur flavor bhi thoda alag daalne ki kosish ki hai, umeed karta huN ki aap logoN ko jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga maine...


ghoom aaya yaad ki gehraiiyoN se main sanam,
baat teri ab karuN parchaaiyon se maiN sanam...


Achcha matla hai janab daad.... Usual Smile


haazma kyuN aql ka bigdaa hua hai aaj-kal,
thak gaya huN yaad ki in ultiyoN se main sanam...


WaaH Taish Sahaab kafiyaa jitna bekaar tha use kayiN zyaadaa khoob bayaaN kiya hai aapne daad daad daad... Usual Smile


dekhte hi teri surat fir mohabbat jaagi hai,
kab hooN seekha ishq ki in galtiyoN se maiN sanam...


Achcha sher hai janab... aik surat humare zahen se khayaal juda hai..


DEkhte hi teri surat phir mohobbat jaagi hai
Kab sikhuNga ishq! aisi galtiyoN se maiN sanam


dekh leta huN jo kabhi in dairy ke pannoN ko,
kaaNp jata yaadoN ki in sardiyoN se maiN sanam...


Achcha hai janab daad...


tu hai sabse khoobsurat gul khuda ke baagh ki,
haal tera jaan leta titliyon se main sanam...


WaaH waaH bada hi pyaara sher arz kiya hai daad daad...


kaudiyoN ke bhaav aashiq bikte haiN baazaar meN,
dekhuN ulfat ka tamaasha khidkiyoN se maiN sanam...


YeH baat kuch hazam nahi huyi janab.... kuch atpata sa sher laga..  icon_scratch


khat mere sab laut aaye, jo bhi tujhko the likhe,
poochta tera pata ab panchiyoN se main sanam...


Bahut khoob daad...


soch kar us bewafa ko raat din ab is kadar,
saans uski rok dooN yuN hichkiyoN se maiN sanam...


Wah waaH waaH bahut umdaa daad daad daad..


roz karti baat jaane ki magar jaati nahiN,
jeest ko ab cheddta bedardiyoN se maiN sanam...


Achcha hai janab daad...

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«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2013, 10:29:38 PM »
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qaafiye bhee umdaa aur radeef bhee behatreen dheron daad
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2013, 12:15:08 AM »
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Waah taish ji. kya baat hai. bahut hi umda peshkash rahi. har sher khoob rahe. aapki yeh peshkash mujhe bahut jyaada pasand aayi.meri dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare...

aqsh ji meri khuskismati ki aapko ye pasand aayi, par aapne ye bataaya nahi ki aapko kya pasand aaya hai, waise umeed karta hun ki aapka saath mujhe aage bhi yunhi milta rahegaa...
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«Reply #6 on: May 04, 2013, 02:35:09 AM »
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Unique & Nice Like Sugar & Spice....
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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2013, 04:53:20 AM »
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Bahut Khoob,Waah!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2013, 06:57:43 AM »
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waah waah waah Bhushan jee, kamaal ki ghazal kahi aapne, maza aa gaya padh ke, 3rd aur 5th she'r khususann bahut pasand aae, aur 8th she'r to dangerous hai- hichkiyaaN dila ke hi sahi, aapne saaNs hi rok di apne X mehboob ki  Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile. DheroN daad aur ayk Rau qubool kareiN meri taraf se.
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«Reply #9 on: May 04, 2013, 09:58:35 AM »
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Quote from: royal_jeet on May 03, 2013, 07:50:35 PM
bahut khoob....

Jeet saaheb ye jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko kalaam pasand aaya, umeed karta huN ki aage v aapka saath hume yuNhi milta rahegaa....
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«Reply #10 on: May 04, 2013, 01:47:40 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on May 04, 2013, 04:53:20 AM
Bahut Khoob,Waah!!!!!!!!!!!!

tareef ka shukriya ravinder saaheb...
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«Reply #11 on: May 04, 2013, 02:34:06 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob .taishji.bahut c daad.
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ji jnaab ab to aapke satth hee hai hum sab..bas aap yuhi likhte rahiye or hum aapko daad dete rhe... Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2013, 01:25:54 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on May 03, 2013, 08:50:44 PM
Taish Sahaab Aadaab...!



WaaH waaH janab waaH kya kahne, behad umdaa khayaaloN ko kalam baNd kiya hai.. sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab.... Usual Smile

Gazab ke ashaar rahe aik se badhkar aik.... Usual Smile

Is umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda hafez... Usual Smile





sach meN bhai jaan, poore yo pe sabsee itminaan ke saath har cheez ko baareeqi se padh ke sabse umda jawaab aap hi dete haiN, ab umeed karta huN ki aapka ye saath aage bhi yuNhi milta rahega.... Usual Smile
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Quote from: sksaini4 on May 03, 2013, 10:29:38 PM
qaafiye bhee umdaa aur radeef bhee behatreen dheron daad

saini sir, always a pleasure to recieve some positive comments from ur end... Usual Smile
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