Taish- BEHLAA raha huN khud ko ya TADPAA raha hooN maiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on March 27, 2013, 02:07:42 AM
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«Reply #15 on: March 27, 2013, 01:31:43 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #16 on: March 27, 2013, 03:48:19 PM »
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Quote from: aahnaa on March 27, 2013, 02:19:36 AM
waahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh taish ji kya kehne janaab behad khubsurat gazal bani hai iss bar to.... kuch ashaar to bas khanjar se lage dil par....... behad umdaah adaaygee ....... mashaallah kya kahene ........
tu shokh ek ghazal, tiraa maqtaa raha hooN maiN,
tere baghair taish adhooraa raha hooN maiN...

ik taar sa hayaat ka toota abhi-abhi.....
ab kabr me padaa huya sustaa rahaa hu main

charche hamaare ishq ke phaile haiN har jagah,
sharmaa raha hun is pe ke itraa raha huN main...

 

aahna ji shukraguzaar hun aapka ki aapne is kosish ko saraaaha, aasha karta hun ki aapka sneh, saath aur hausla afzaayi hume aage v yuNhi milta rahegaa...
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«Reply #17 on: March 27, 2013, 09:54:48 PM »
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Waaaaaah taish ji. kya khoob likha hai aapne. koi ek sher do sher nahi poori ki poori ghazal hi khoob rahi. sabhi ashaar ke ehsaas dil ko choo gaye. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho. aap isi tarah likhiye hame bahut khushi hoti hai.
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«Reply #18 on: March 27, 2013, 11:50:48 PM »
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Quote from: janumanu on March 27, 2013, 02:39:03 AM

yaar saani bahut badhiyaa haiN saare... baaaki baad maiN matla check kato
apni takhti se

"har" lafz ... zakhm se pahle...

shukriya bhai ise pasand karne ke liye, bas aage v aap yuNhi saath dete raheN...
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«Reply #19 on: March 28, 2013, 03:19:47 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 27, 2013, 02:46:15 AM

Bhai aap jante hoN maiN bher meiN kamzor huN...

aap toH aage chale gaye hume bhi sikha kar apne barabar laa lijiye..
HaaN aap aap toH jante haiN indian folks rules and regulation ko aage jaate huye ki taNg khiNchne ka haq toH banta hai uske kareebi kaa.. tongue3 tongue3 tongue3




are bhai aapka poora haq banta hai, aur main beh'r mention karta hi isiliye hun, ki agar kisi ko koi bhi confusion ho to pooch sakeN... Usual Smile
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«Reply #20 on: March 28, 2013, 05:23:59 AM »
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«Reply #21 on: March 28, 2013, 11:46:38 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on March 27, 2013, 04:15:52 AM
So Cute

thanks mate...
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«Reply #22 on: March 29, 2013, 12:19:53 AM »
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boht khub taish ji
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«Reply #23 on: March 29, 2013, 01:46:11 AM »
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Quote from: Miru;;;; on March 27, 2013, 06:25:46 AM
KYA BAAT HAI..!!
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miru ji bahut bahut shukriya tareef ka, umeed karta huN ki aage bhi aapka saath hume yuNhi milta rahegaa....
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«Reply #24 on: March 29, 2013, 01:51:06 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on March 27, 2013, 02:07:42 AM
Bazm ko is nacheez ka aadaab ek nayi ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai bazm ke...


Beh'r- 221/ 2121/ 1221/ 212


Naakhoon se yuN zakhm ko sahlaa raha hoon main
Kuch aise ishq dard se farmaa rahaa hoon main

tu shokh ek ghazal, tiraa maqtaa raha hooN maiN,
tere baghair taish adhooraa raha hooN maiN...

Us waqt intezaar me haalat na puchiye,
Jab bhi vo baar baar kahe, aa raha hoon main..

ik taar sa hayaat ka toota abhi-abhi.....
ab kabr me padaa huya sustaa rahaa hu main

charche hamaare ishq ke phaile haiN har jagah,
sharmaa raha hun is pe ke itraa raha huN main...

manjil ki raah se na mulaakaat ho saki,,
lo karke pyaar sach kahu pachhhta raha hu main...

furkat me taish saath hai meena-o-shaayri,
behla raha huN khud ko ya tadpa raha hu main...


waaaaaaaaaaaah 2nd sher khaas rahaa taish sahab Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: March 29, 2013, 07:50:14 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on March 27, 2013, 01:22:11 PM
furkat me taish saath hai meena-o-shaayri,
behla raha huN khud ko ya tadpa raha hu main...

fantastic.
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aapka shukraguzaar hun sahal bhai ki aapne is kosish ko padhne ka waqt nikaala aur ise saraaha, umeed karta huN ki aapka saath aage v yuNhi bana rahegaa...
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«Reply #26 on: March 29, 2013, 08:02:18 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on March 27, 2013, 02:07:42 AM
Bazm ko is nacheez ka aadaab ek nayi ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai bazm ke...


Beh'r- 221/ 2121/ 1221/ 212


Naakhoon se yuN zakhm ko sahlaa raha hoon main
Kuch aise ishq dard se farmaa rahaa hoon main

tu shokh ek ghazal, tiraa maqtaa raha hooN maiN,
tere baghair taish adhooraa raha hooN maiN...

Us waqt intezaar me haalat na puchiye,
Jab bhi vo baar baar kahe, aa raha hoon main..

ik taar sa hayaat ka toota abhi-abhi.....
ab kabr me padaa huya sustaa rahaa hu main

charche hamaare ishq ke phaile haiN har jagah,
sharmaa raha hun is pe ke itraa raha huN main...

manjil ki raah se na mulaakaat ho saki,,
lo karke pyaar sach kahu pachhhta raha hu main...

furkat me taish saath hai meena-o-shaayri,
behla raha huN khud ko ya tadpa raha hu main...

Waah Waah Waah....

Bahut Bahut Khooooob Taish Ji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Andaaz-e-Bayaan

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«Reply #27 on: March 29, 2013, 11:49:19 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on March 27, 2013, 01:31:43 PM
waah waah bahut khoob

saini sir than a tonne, ur admiration always matters... Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: March 31, 2013, 01:10:40 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on March 27, 2013, 09:54:48 PM
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Waaaaaah taish ji. kya khoob likha hai aapne. koi ek sher do sher nahi poori ki poori ghazal hi khoob rahi. sabhi ashaar ke ehsaas dil ko choo gaye. aapko bahut bahut mubarak ho. aap isi tarah likhiye hame bahut khushi hoti hai.

ye to allah ka rehum hai aur aapki nazron ki inayat ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya... bas aage v aap yuNhi humara saath dete raheN...
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«Reply #29 on: March 31, 2013, 11:01:33 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on March 27, 2013, 02:42:31 AM
bhai haan matle meN vo ghalti ho gayi thi 'har' lafz ki, uske liye main sharminda hun, kyunki jaldibaazi meN kayi baar rough wala misra hi type ho jata hai, isiliye maiN ba-qaayeda beh'r likh deta huN taaki kisi ko bhi kuch khaami dikhe to bata de, bahut bahut shukriya mere bhai, bas yuNhi humesha saath dete raho....

Taish jee is mein sharminda ki kya baat hai. Aapne ghazal bahut umda likha hai.

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ik taar sa hayaat ka toota abhi-abhi.....
ab kabr me padaa huya sustaa rahaa hu main

charche hamaare ishq ke phaile haiN har jagah,
sharmaa raha hun is pe ke itraa raha huN main...

manjil ki raah se na mulaakaat ho saki,,
lo karke pyaar sach kahu pachhhta raha hu main...


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