Taish- dard PARESHAAN jaauN kidhar...??

by ghayal_shayar on December 10, 2012, 11:15:41 PM
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Ek baar fir mefl ko is nacheez ka aadaab, kuch likha hai kaafi waqt baad, umeed karta huN ki aap sabko jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga, galtiyoN ke liye maafi ka talabgar rahuNgaa...!!


Jeene ko sochte rahe, aur uthaa le gayi kazaa(maut) hume,, lakh ki thi kosisheN, par na mili jeene ki vajah hume,, jab maut ki khwaish hi ho chali, to dagaa de gayi nazaa(aakhii saans) hume,, ab to aadat si ho chali hai zakhm khaane ki, to dard lagne lage davaa hume,, kuch is kadar chalni hua hai dil, ki nashtar ki tarah chubhe ye hawaa hume,, charagar bhi dooba hua is soch me, ki aakhir kya hai hua hume…??

HaaN sach hua hai kya hume………..




AshqoN ka ye chota sa safar,
Khatm na hua zindagi bhar.

Kuch yuN hua mujh pe tera asar,
Aagaaz-o-anjaam-e-jeest, sifar*.

*zero, shoonya.

Zakhm itne ho chale badan pe,
Dard pareshaaN jaauN kidhar…

Na hoti nazmeN, na hoti ghazal,
Dard-o-mohabbat na hote agar.

Kabristaan me itni khamoshi kyuN,
BahutoN ka hai ye ek akela ghar.

Khud bhi rona aur rulana kalam ko,
Eh“Taish”hai ye tera kaisa hunar.

Ye aakhiri sher bas yuNhi add kar diya tha....

sirf ehsaas se bhi banti hai Ghazal
is Ghazal meN dekho radif na behar!
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2012, 11:19:57 PM »
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Bahut khoob bahut badhiya janaab, laajawaab. DheroN daad aur ek Rau bhi.
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2012, 12:34:51 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2012, 02:14:44 AM »
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bahut khub . achhi ghazal hai taish ji . mubarakbad pesh hai.
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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2012, 03:07:32 AM »
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bohut khoob taish jee umda ghazal hai, aur is shair ke liye khusoosi daad qubool kareN



Zakhm itne ho chale badan pe,

Dard pareshaaN jaauN kidhar…
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«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2012, 03:58:36 AM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2012, 05:57:57 AM »
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wa wa waa bhot ache .

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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2012, 06:30:47 AM »
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Bahut khoob Taish jee
mubaarakbaad qubool kareN
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«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2012, 06:52:05 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
is khoobsurat kalam par dheron mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #9 on: December 11, 2012, 06:54:51 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on December 10, 2012, 11:19:57 PM
Bahut khoob bahut badhiya janaab, laajawaab. DheroN daad aur ek Rau bhi.



Iftakhar sahab aapka bahut bahut shukraguzaar hun jo aapne itni izzat bakshi, saath hi rau ka bhi bahut bahut shukriya, aap jaise logon se tareef milne pe badi tasalli milti hai, duaa karuNga ki aapka saath aaiNda bhi yuNhi milta rahe...
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«Reply #10 on: December 11, 2012, 08:06:07 AM »
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wah wah
wah wah wah
wah wah
kya baat kya baat
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«Reply #11 on: December 11, 2012, 08:21:06 AM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab bade hi dilfareb khayaaloN ko kasaa hai aapne..
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik aur umdaa rahe... Usual Smile

Kisi aik ki tareef ki jaaye toH waqai na insaafi hoNgi is umdaa
kalaam ke saath... Usual Smile

Is khoob aur dilfareb kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Aise hi umdaa kalaam kahte rahiye...
Aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: December 11, 2012, 08:34:01 AM »
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superb
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«Reply #13 on: December 11, 2012, 11:05:14 AM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 11, 2012, 12:34:51 AM
bahut khoob, dhero dad

Bahukhandi sahab aakpki areef sar aaNkhon pe, bas dua karunga ki aap aage v yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...
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«Reply #14 on: December 11, 2012, 11:40:13 AM »
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waah kya bat hai kya bat hai
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