Taish- dard PARESHAAN jaauN kidhar...??

by ghayal_shayar on December 10, 2012, 11:15:41 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 11, 2012, 02:58:58 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 11, 2012, 02:14:44 AM
bahut khub . achhi ghazal hai taish ji . mubarakbad pesh hai.

Hasan saahab, aapki daad sar aaNkhon pe, bas yahi duaa rahegi ki aap aage bhi yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: December 11, 2012, 03:29:31 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on December 10, 2012, 11:15:41 PM
Ek baar fir mefl ko is nacheez ka aadaab, kuch likha hai kaafi waqt baad, umeed karta huN ki aap sabko jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga, galtiyoN ke liye maafi ka talabgar rahuNgaa...!!


Jeene ko sochte rahe, aur uthaa le gayi kazaa(maut) hume,, lakh ki thi kosisheN, par na mili jeene ki vajah hume,, jab maut ki khwaish hi ho chali, to dagaa de gayi nazaa(aakhii saans) hume,, ab to aadat si ho chali hai zakhm khaane ki, to dard lagne lage davaa hume,, kuch is kadar chalni hua hai dil, ki nashtar ki tarah chubhe ye hawaa hume,, charagar bhi dooba hua is soch me, ki aakhir kya hai hua hume…??

HaaN sach hua hai kya hume………..




AshqoN ka ye chota sa safar,
Khatm na hua zindagi bhar.
kyon bhalaa kya pareshani aan padi ji icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Kuch yuN hua mujh pe tera asar,
Aagaaz-o-anjaam-e-jeest, sifar*.
acha meri shaksiyast havi ho gayi tum pe icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
*zero, shoonya.

Zakhm itne ho chale badan pe,
Dard pareshaaN jaauN kidhar…
ye to khatarnaak bimari hai dr ko dikhaya ya nahin icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch
Na hoti nazmeN, na hoti ghazal,
Dard-o-mohabbat na hote agar.
kyon ye cheeze.n dard -o-ghum se banti hain icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent
Kabristaan me itni khamoshi kyuN,
BahutoN ka hai ye ek akela ghar.
arry kaisi baat karte ho ji. icon_geek icon_geek
Khud bhi rona aur rulana kalam ko,
Eh“Taish”hai ye tera kaisa hunar.
tumhara kaam tum hi jaano. mujhe kya pata drunken_smilie drunken_smilie
Ye aakhiri sher bas yuNhi add kar diya tha....

sirf ehsaas se bhi banti hai Ghazal
is Ghazal meN dekho radif na behar!

dik raha hai Usual Smile Usual Smile


bahut khoob.....!!
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«Reply #17 on: December 12, 2012, 10:47:53 AM »
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Quote from: Aarish on December 11, 2012, 03:07:32 AM
bohut khoob taish jee umda ghazal hai, aur is shair ke liye khusoosi daad qubool kareN

aarish bhai bahut bahut shukriya ise pasand karne ka, umeed karta hun aage v aapka saath yuNhi bana rahega.... Usual Smile


Zakhm itne ho chale badan pe,

Dard pareshaaN jaauN kidhar…
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«Reply #18 on: December 13, 2012, 01:26:14 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 11, 2012, 03:58:36 AM
waah waah bahut khoob


sir ji bahut bahut shukriya, bas yuNhi aap aage v aashirwaad dete rahiye....!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: December 13, 2012, 04:41:29 PM »
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Quote from: ~Aatish~ on December 11, 2012, 05:57:57 AM
wa wa waa bhot ache .

 icon_salut icon_salut

 Applause Applause Applause

aatish saahab, tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya, bas aage v aap yuNhi humari hausla afzaayi karte raheN...
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«Reply #20 on: December 14, 2012, 11:00:09 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on December 11, 2012, 06:30:47 AM
Bahut khoob Taish jee
mubaarakbaad qubool kareN

mukesh sir, bas aage v aap yunhi dua aur aashirwaad dete raheN.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: December 15, 2012, 01:24:36 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 11, 2012, 06:52:05 AM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
is khoobsurat kalam par dheron mubarakbad qubool kare

aqsh saaheeba, aapki daad humare sar aaNkhoN pe, bas yuNhi aage v aap humara saath deti raheN....
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«Reply #22 on: December 15, 2012, 02:07:53 PM »
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Quote from: Ritesh Modi on December 11, 2012, 08:06:07 AM
wah wah
wah wah wah
wah wah
kya baat kya baat


Ritesh sahab tareef ka shukriya, bas aage v aap humara yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...
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«Reply #23 on: December 16, 2012, 03:51:47 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on December 11, 2012, 08:21:06 AM
Taish Sahaab Aadaab!


Kia baat hai janab bade hi dilfareb khayaaloN ko kasaa hai aapne..
Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik aur umdaa rahe... Usual Smile

Kisi aik ki tareef ki jaaye toH waqai na insaafi hoNgi is umdaa
kalaam ke saath... Usual Smile

Is khoob aur dilfareb kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile
Aise hi umdaa kalaam kahte rahiye...
Aate rahiye...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile

salaam saahab,

ye to aapk logoN ki dariya dili hai, jo aapne in chand jazbaaton ko izzat bakshi, umeed karta huN ki aage v aapka saath hume yuNhi milta rahegaa...
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«Reply #24 on: December 17, 2012, 04:57:47 PM »
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waah waah, bahut khoob
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«Reply #25 on: December 19, 2012, 02:39:10 AM »
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Quote from: prashad on December 11, 2012, 08:34:01 AM
superb

prashad saahab, bahut bahut shukriya is hausla afzaayi ke liye, bas aage v aap yuNhi saath dete raheN...
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«Reply #26 on: December 21, 2012, 06:19:21 PM »
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Quote from: anmolarora on December 11, 2012, 11:40:13 AM
waah kya bat hai kya bat hai

anmol saahab shukriya....
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«Reply #27 on: December 23, 2012, 08:16:10 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on December 11, 2012, 03:29:31 PM

bahut khoob.....!!


bahut bahut shukriya tareef ka sheeba ji, bas aage v yunhi saath deti raheN...!!
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«Reply #28 on: December 23, 2012, 08:17:56 PM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on December 17, 2012, 04:57:47 PM
waah waah, bahut khoob


janaab aapke naams e aphi tak waakif nahin hun uske loiye mafi chaahunga, aur aapne jo daad di hai uske liye aapka aabhaari huN...!!
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