Taish- humara hai magar fir bhi HUMARA ho nahi pata...!!

by ghayal_shayar on March 10, 2013, 02:12:50 PM
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«Reply #15 on: March 11, 2013, 01:09:29 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on March 10, 2013, 03:32:28 PM
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hausla afzaayi ka shukriya bhai.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: March 11, 2013, 02:44:26 AM »
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janab.....taishji..bahut hi khoob ghazhal hai.......wah....subhanallah........zajakallah... .
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«Reply #17 on: March 11, 2013, 08:58:03 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on March 10, 2013, 02:12:50 PM
Beh'r- 1222 1222 1222 1222


jo tujhse dil laga, ab dil lagana ho nahi pata,
ke vo jaisa bhi kehti hai maiN waisa ho nahi pata..

badi tareef sun kar maiN huN is dar par chala aaya,
fakat itna bata kyuN maiN tumhara ho nahi pata..

tumhara naam likhne ki ijazat chin gayi jab se,
jo koi sher likhta hooN to poora ho nahi pata..

mohabbat dono ko hai par na ik dooje ke ho paye
humara hai magar fir bhi humara ho nahi pata..

talaatum to hazaaroN ishq ki raahoN meN milte haiN,
yahaaN doobe bina koi kinara ho nahi pata..

use mujhse shikayat hai ke chaahat kuch adhoori hai,
main kyun toota hua sa ek sitaara ho nahi pata..

main ro kar bhool jata huN judaayi ke jo hain lamhe,
mohabbat dard hai aisa bhulaana ho nahi pata..

mere maathe pe likh di daastaaneN waqt ne saari,
ke maiN jiska bhi hota hun vo mera ho nahi pata.

kadam aaNkhoN pe padte haiN to aaNkheN bheeg jaati haiN,
meri aankhon ko ulfat ka sahaara ho nahiN pata..

kisi se baat hoti hai to teri baat karta hooN,
jo mujhse jhoothi koi baat karna ho nahi pata..

ye aansu jo ibadat ki nishaani haiN mere humdum,
main chaahuN bhi jo kaafir ban.na aisa ho nahi pata..

gale jab tumse milta huN bada hi chain milta hai,
teri julfoN ke pehlu meN saweraa ho nahi pata..

taish bhai , wah wah wah wah wah wah wah aur sirf wah kya baat hai behrmeN likhi gayee is ghazal ke liye meri dili mubarakbaad qubool kareN. aur kya ashaar kaheN haiN har shair ek nagine ki manind jada hai aapne , khas taur se in ash'aar ke liye dil ki gehraiyoN se daaaad qubool kareN.


tumhara naam likhne ki ijazat chin gayi jab se,

jo koi sher likhta hooN to poora ho nahi pata..




dheron daaad aur rau qubool kareN



 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


ye aansu jo ibadat ki nishaani haiN mere humdum,

main chaahuN bhi jo kaafir ban.na aisa ho nahi pata.

kya baat hai wah wah wah.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



 
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«Reply #18 on: March 11, 2013, 12:39:12 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on March 10, 2013, 03:33:36 PM
so nice.....

sagar saaheb thanks for the compliments.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: March 11, 2013, 11:21:41 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on March 10, 2013, 04:06:21 PM
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wah wah wah bahut khubsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.Dili mubarakbaad kabool kareiyn.

sudhir saaheb aapki tareef sar aanhon pe, bas yuNhi aage v hausla afzaayi karte raheN...
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«Reply #20 on: March 11, 2013, 11:29:13 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on March 10, 2013, 02:12:50 PM
Beh'r- 1222 1222 1222 1222


jo tujhse dil laga, ab dil lagana ho nahi pata,
ke vo jaisa bhi kehti hai maiN waisa ho nahi pata..

badi tareef sun kar maiN huN is dar par chala aaya,
fakat itna bata kyuN maiN tumhara ho nahi pata..

tumhara naam likhne ki ijazat chin gayi jab se,
jo koi sher likhta hooN to poora ho nahi pata..

mohabbat dono ko hai par na ik dooje ke ho paye
humara hai magar fir bhi humara ho nahi pata..

talaatum to hazaaroN ishq ki raahoN meN milte haiN,
yahaaN doobe bina koi kinara ho nahi pata..

use mujhse shikayat hai ke chaahat kuch adhoori hai,
main kyun toota hua sa ek sitaara ho nahi pata..

main ro kar bhool jata huN judaayi ke jo hain lamhe,
mohabbat dard hai aisa bhulaana ho nahi pata..

mere maathe pe likh di daastaaneN waqt ne saari,
ke maiN jiska bhi hota hun vo mera ho nahi pata.

kadam aaNkhoN pe padte haiN to aaNkheN bheeg jaati haiN,
meri aankhon ko ulfat ka sahaara ho nahiN pata..

kisi se baat hoti hai to teri baat karta hooN,
jo mujhse jhoothi koi baat karna ho nahi pata..

ye aansu jo ibadat ki nishaani haiN mere humdum,
main chaahuN bhi jo kaafir ban.na aisa ho nahi pata..

gale jab tumse milta huN bada hi chain milta hai,
teri julfoN ke pehlu meN saweraa ho nahi pata..


Lajawaab!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoooooooob Taish ji...

Kya Khayaalat, kya Andaaz-e-bayaan..

Bahut Ache...

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«Reply #21 on: March 12, 2013, 08:48:59 PM »
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Quote from: saahill on March 10, 2013, 05:16:27 PM
bohut khub taish ji bohut umda bohut hi acha likha hai aapne

bahut bahut shukriya sahil saaheb, umeed karta hun ki aapka saath aage v yuNhi milta rahegaa...
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«Reply #22 on: March 13, 2013, 10:03:12 AM »
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bahut dino baad ek duubi hui ghazal mili padhne ko, mazaa aa gaya, very good, keep it up, bahut shandaar
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«Reply #23 on: March 13, 2013, 11:21:16 PM »
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Quote from: Farhan Sohail on March 10, 2013, 05:37:31 PM
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaah WAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah buht khoob buht hi umda,

farhan saaheb shukraguzaar hun aaka is tareef aur izzat afzaayi ke liye, umeed karta huN ki aapka saath aage v yuNhi milta rahegaa...
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«Reply #24 on: March 14, 2013, 02:06:06 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on March 10, 2013, 05:46:57 PM
umda ghazal. bahut c daad

suman ji aapka bahut bahut shukraguzaar huN is hauslaa afzaayi ke liye....
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«Reply #25 on: March 14, 2013, 11:13:30 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on March 10, 2013, 05:49:50 PM
wah wah dhero dad

shukriya bahukhandi saaheb, aapke saath se bahut bal milta hai, yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN...
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«Reply #26 on: March 14, 2013, 11:23:00 PM »
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 सुंदर अति सुंदर अति सुंदर,
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«Reply #27 on: March 14, 2013, 11:34:06 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on March 10, 2013, 02:12:50 PM
Beh'r- 1222 1222 1222 1222


jo tujhse dil laga, ab dil lagana ho nahi pata,
ke vo jaisa bhi kehti hai maiN waisa ho nahi pata..

badi tareef sun kar maiN huN is dar par chala aaya,
fakat itna bata kyuN maiN tumhara ho nahi pata..

tumhara naam likhne ki ijazat chin gayi jab se,
jo koi sher likhta hooN to poora ho nahi pata..

mohabbat dono ko hai par na ik dooje ke ho paye
humara hai magar fir bhi humara ho nahi pata..

talaatum to hazaaroN ishq ki raahoN meN milte haiN,
yahaaN doobe bina koi kinara ho nahi pata..

use mujhse shikayat hai ke chaahat kuch adhoori hai,
main kyun toota hua sa ek sitaara ho nahi pata..

main ro kar bhool jata huN judaayi ke jo hain lamhe,
mohabbat dard hai aisa bhulaana ho nahi pata..

mere maathe pe likh di daastaaneN waqt ne saari,
ke maiN jiska bhi hota hun vo mera ho nahi pata.

kadam aaNkhoN pe padte haiN to aaNkheN bheeg jaati haiN,
meri aankhon ko ulfat ka sahaara ho nahiN pata..

kisi se baat hoti hai to teri baat karta hooN,
jo mujhse jhoothi koi baat karna ho nahi pata..

ye aansu jo ibadat ki nishaani haiN mere humdum,
main chaahuN bhi jo kaafir ban.na aisa ho nahi pata..

gale jab tumse milta huN bada hi chain milta hai,
teri julfoN ke pehlu meN saweraa ho nahi pata..

sir, with a rau i do aapreicate this ghazal
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«Reply #28 on: March 15, 2013, 06:30:17 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on March 10, 2013, 06:40:47 PM
Taish Jee Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH janab kia kahne waaH, bahut khoob bahut umdaa gazal kahi
hai janab bahut khoob... bade hi gazab ke sher rahe janab.. aapne kalaam
ko bher meiN toH adaa kiya hai par khususan ashaaroN meiN behad achchi gehrai
bhi dii hai.. yeH aapki kalaam ab tak ki sabse khoob kalaam rahi janab..

humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...

Aate rhaiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
                   

bhai ye to bas aapka pyar hai jo kheeNch lata hai, waise mujhe v lagta hai ki shayad ab thoda bahut likhna seekh raha huN, kaash jo kisi ki sun ke pehle hi beh'r meN likhne ki kosish shuru kar di hoti... bas yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheN saaheb...
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«Reply #29 on: March 16, 2013, 01:44:02 PM »
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Quote from: 1tarun on March 11, 2013, 02:44:26 AM
janab.....taishji..bahut hi khoob ghazhal hai.......wah....subhanallah........zajakallah... .

tarun ji tareef aur hausla afzaayi ka shukriya, bas aage bhi yuNhi saath nibhaate raheN....
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