Taish- humne aansu bhi na poNche, tum RULAANE aa gaye...!!

by ghayal_shayar on May 21, 2013, 05:05:34 AM
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socha ghum ke kaarwaaN jitne the aane aa gaye,
humne aansu bhi na poNche, tum rulaane aa gaye...

jin ne marte waqt bhi mujhko nahiN poocha kabhi,
meri maiyyat pe vahi daavat udaane aa gaye...

taal jaati baat meri jis qadar tu aaj kal,
zindagi lagta hai tujhko bhi bahaane aa gaye...

khoobsurat hai adaa tere bahaanoN ki sanam,
jab bhi maiN naraaz hota tum manaane aa gaye...

haar kar tum aashiqui ki baaziyaaN mujhse sanam,
ishq ke hi naam se mujhko rijhaane aa gaye...

aashiqui bas bhookh jismaani hai ban ke reh gayi,
log kehte haiN yahaaN ladke sayaane aa gaye...
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2013, 06:43:57 AM »
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socha ghum ke kaarwaaN jitne the aane aa gaye,
humne aansu bhi poNche, tum rulaane aa gaye...

jin ne marte waqt bhi mujhko nahiN poocha kabhi,
meri maiyyat pe vahi daavat udaane aa gaye...

taal jaati baat meri jis qadar tu aaj kal,
zindagi lagta hai tujhko bhi bahaane aa gaye...

khoobsurat hai adaa tere bahaanoN ki sanam,
jab bhi maiN naraaz hota tum manaane aa gaye...

haar kar tum aashiqui ki baaziyaaN mujhse sanam,
ishq e hi naam se mujhko rijhaane aa gaye...

aashiqui bas bhookh jismaani hai ban ke reh gayi,
log kehte haiN yahaaN ladke sayaane aa gaye...
Mastam mst gazal taish...... har sher sidhe dil se nikla hua hai...
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2013, 07:00:27 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah kya baat hai, bahut hi khoob Bhushan jee, achhi ghazal kahi hai. Matle aur 5th she'r meiN Typo haiN, check kar lijiyega.
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2013, 12:32:39 PM »
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Bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2013, 12:41:37 PM »
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socha ghum ke kaarwaaN jitne the aane aa gaye,
humne aansu bhi na poNche, tum rulaane aa gaye...

jin ne marte waqt bhi mujhko nahiN poocha kabhi,
meri maiyyat pe vahi daavat udaane aa gaye...

taal jaati baat meri jis qadar tu aaj kal,
zindagi lagta hai tujhko bhi bahaane aa gaye...

khoobsurat hai adaa tere bahaanoN ki sanam,
jab bhi maiN naraaz hota tum manaane aa gaye...

haar kar tum aashiqui ki baaziyaaN mujhse sanam,
ishq ke hi naam se mujhko rijhaane aa gaye...

aashiqui bas bhookh jismaani hai ban ke reh gayi,
log kehte haiN yahaaN ladke sayaane aa gaye...
Bhut khua likha hai taish ji
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2013, 01:31:33 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2013, 04:33:34 PM »
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Mastam mst gazal taish...... har sher sidhe dil se nikla hua hai...

bade dinoN baad aapke deedaar hue, par ye jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko likha pasand aaya, laga lihna vasool ho gaya.... Winking
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2013, 05:41:36 PM »
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mujhe bhi aapki ghazal baht pasand aayee Taih saahab Usual Smile

daad daad daad
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«Reply #8 on: May 21, 2013, 06:31:39 PM »
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socha ghum ke kaarwaaN jitne the aane aa gaye,
humne aansu bhi na poNche, tum rulaane aa gaye...

jin ne marte waqt bhi mujhko nahiN poocha kabhi,
meri maiyyat pe vahi daavat udaane aa gaye...

taal jaati baat meri jis qadar tu aaj kal,
zindagi lagta hai tujhko bhi bahaane aa gaye...

khoobsurat hai adaa tere bahaanoN ki sanam,
jab bhi maiN naraaz hota tum manaane aa gaye...

haar kar tum aashiqui ki baaziyaaN mujhse sanam,
ishq ke hi naam se mujhko rijhaane aa gaye...

aashiqui bas bhookh jismaani hai ban ke reh gayi,
log kehte haiN yahaaN ladke sayaane aa gaye...


gr88888888888888888888,sir
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2013, 06:37:47 PM »
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kya baat hai taishji. as usual yeh ghazal bhi khoob rahi. sabhi ashaar khoob rahe. dil se mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2013, 07:01:17 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah kya baat hai, bahut hi khoob Bhushan jee, achhi ghazal kahi hai. Matle aur 5th she'r meiN Typo haiN, check kar lijiyega.

iftakhar saaheb jah-e-naseeb jo aapko kalaam pasand aaya, aur bahut bahut shukriya typos dhyaan dilaane ke liye... umeed karta huN ki aap aage bhi yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheNge...
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«Reply #11 on: May 21, 2013, 07:42:38 PM »
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bahut khoob.. bahut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2013, 07:50:55 PM »
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socha ghum ke kaarwaaN jitne the aane aa gaye,
humne aansu bhi na poNche, tum rulaane aa gaye...

jin ne marte waqt bhi mujhko nahiN poocha kabhi,
meri maiyyat pe vahi daavat udaane aa gaye...

taal jaati baat meri jis qadar tu aaj kal,
zindagi lagta hai tujhko bhi bahaane aa gaye...

khoobsurat hai adaa tere bahaanoN ki sanam,
jab bhi maiN naraaz hota tum manaane aa gaye...

haar kar tum aashiqui ki baaziyaaN mujhse sanam,
ishq ke hi naam se mujhko rijhaane aa gaye...

aashiqui bas bhookh jismaani hai ban ke reh gayi,
log kehte haiN yahaaN ladke sayaane aa gaye...
laajawab,...............bohat c daad,..........
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«Reply #13 on: May 21, 2013, 08:26:04 PM »
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socha ghum ke kaarwaaN jitne the aane aa gaye,
humne aansu bhi na poNche, tum rulaane aa gaye...

jin ne marte waqt bhi mujhko nahiN poocha kabhi,
meri maiyyat pe vahi daavat udaane aa gaye...

taal jaati baat meri jis qadar tu aaj kal,
zindagi lagta hai tujhko bhi bahaane aa gaye...

khoobsurat hai adaa tere bahaanoN ki sanam,
jab bhi maiN naraaz hota tum manaane aa gaye...

haar kar tum aashiqui ki baaziyaaN mujhse sanam,
ishq ke hi naam se mujhko rijhaane aa gaye...

aashiqui bas bhookh jismaani hai ban ke reh gayi,
log kehte haiN yahaaN ladke sayaane aa gaye...


Bahut Bahut Khoooob Taish Ji...

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Pesh Ki Hai Aapne..

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«Reply #14 on: May 22, 2013, 01:46:26 AM »
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Bahut khoob

pasand karne ka shukriya saaheb, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath dete rahiyegaa....!! Usual Smile
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