Taish- ishq pe laagu ye KAHAAVAT nahiN hoti...!!

by ghayal_shayar on May 31, 2013, 08:33:47 PM
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Bazm ko mera aadaab, ek nayi kosish ke saath haazir huN... Har sher meN kuch naya khayaal dene ki kosish ki hai, umeed karta huN aapko pasand aayega...



Har roz nayi ek qayamat nahiN hoti,
Par ishq pe laagu ye kahaavat nahiN hoti...

Ae kaash mujhe tumse mohabbat nahiN hoti,
To gham ke varaq* par likhi kismat nahiN hoti...

*Panna, page.

Gar humse jo unhe yun adawat* nahiN hoti,
Tareef ke pehlu men shikayat nahiN hoti...

*Chiddh, kind of annoyance.

LaashoN ke gale haaroN se kyuN gul ke bhare haiN,
Kya phooloN meN thodi si bhi ghairat* nahin hoti...

*Aatma sammaan, Self-respect

Ik doosre ko loot.te hain log yahaaN ab,
Poori jo sharaafat se jaroorat nahiN hoti...

Hai chor uchakkoN se bhari desh ki satta,
Ke ab bhale logoN se siyaasat nahin hoti...

Lekar ke udhaari na chukaayi kabhi maine,
Ab shaql chipaane ko hazaamat nahin hoti...

Kachhi kaliyaaN baghbaaN ne khud haiN ujaadi,
Ab bhonroN ko bhi phooloN ki chaahat nahiN hoti...

Shayad teri nafrat me vo shiddat na rahi ab,
Jo taish mere dard ki barqat nahiN hoti...
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«Reply #1 on: May 31, 2013, 09:30:43 PM »
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Bahut Achi Peshkash Hai Janab Waah!!Behtreen.Daad Kabool Karein.
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«Reply #2 on: May 31, 2013, 09:53:58 PM »
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Bazm ko mera aadaab, ek nayi kosish ke saath haazir huN... Har sher meN kuch naya khayaal dene ki kosish ki hai, umeed karta huN aapko pasand aayega...



Har roz nayi ek qayamat nahiN hoti,
Par ishq pe laagu ye kahaavat nahiN hoti...

Ae kaash mujhe tumse mohabbat nahiN hoti,
Yun gham ke varaq* par likhi kismat nahiN hoti...

*Panna, page.

Gar humse jo unhe yun adawat* nahiN hoti,
Tareef ke pehlu men shikayat nahiN hoti...

*Chiddh, kind of annoyance.

LaashoN ke gale haaroN se kyuN gul ke bhare haiN,
Kya phooloN meN thodi si bhi ghairat* nahin hoti...

*Aatma sammaan, Self-respect

Ik doosre ko loot.te hain log yahaaN ab,
Poori jo sharaafat se jaroorat nahiN hoti...

Hai chor uchakkoN se bhari desh ki satta,
Ke ab bhale logoN se siyaasat nahin hoti...

Lekar ke udhaari na chukaayi kabhi maine,
Ab shaql chipaane ko hazaamat nahin hoti...

Kachhi kaliyaaN baghbaaN ne khud haiN ujaadi,
Ab bhonroN ko bhi phooloN ki chaahat nahiN hoti...

Shayad teri nafrat me vo shiddat na rahi ab,
Jo taish mere dard ki barqat nahiN hoti...

wah wah wah bahut khoob taish...........!
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«Reply #3 on: May 31, 2013, 10:22:51 PM »
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Bazm ko mera aadaab, ek nayi kosish ke saath haazir huN... Har sher meN kuch naya khayaal dene ki kosish ki hai, umeed karta huN aapko pasand aayega...



Har roz nayi ek qayamat nahiN hoti,
Par ishq pe laagu ye kahaavat nahiN hoti...

Ae kaash mujhe tumse mohabbat nahiN hoti,
To gham ke varaq* par likhi kismat nahiN hoti...

*Panna, page.

Gar humse jo unhe yun adawat* nahiN hoti,
Tareef ke pehlu men shikayat nahiN hoti...

*Chiddh, kind of annoyance.

LaashoN ke gale haaroN se kyuN gul ke bhare haiN,
Kya phooloN meN thodi si bhi ghairat* nahin hoti...

*Aatma sammaan, Self-respect

Ik doosre ko loot.te hain log yahaaN ab,
Poori jo sharaafat se jaroorat nahiN hoti...

Hai chor uchakkoN se bhari desh ki satta,
Ke ab bhale logoN se siyaasat nahin hoti...

Lekar ke udhaari na chukaayi kabhi maine,
Ab shaql chipaane ko hazaamat nahin hoti...

Kachhi kaliyaaN baghbaaN ne khud haiN ujaadi,
Ab bhonroN ko bhi phooloN ki chaahat nahiN hoti...

Shayad teri nafrat me vo shiddat na rahi ab,
Jo taish mere dard ki barqat nahiN hoti...

Wah,Wah,Wah Taish ji,
Behad khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.I really love it.Khaas taur  se matla aur maqta lazawab hai.Dili Mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #4 on: May 31, 2013, 10:26:38 PM »
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Bazm ko mera aadaab, ek nayi kosish ke saath haazir huN... Har sher meN kuch naya khayaal dene ki kosish ki hai, umeed karta huN aapko pasand aayega...



Har roz nayi ek qayamat nahiN hoti,
Par ishq pe laagu ye kahaavat nahiN hoti...

Ae kaash mujhe tumse mohabbat nahiN hoti,
To gham ke varaq* par likhi kismat nahiN hoti...

*Panna, page.

Gar humse jo unhe yun adawat* nahiN hoti,
Tareef ke pehlu men shikayat nahiN hoti...

*Chiddh, kind of annoyance.

LaashoN ke gale haaroN se kyuN gul ke bhare haiN,
Kya phooloN meN thodi si bhi ghairat* nahin hoti...

*Aatma sammaan, Self-respect

Ik doosre ko loot.te hain log yahaaN ab,
Poori jo sharaafat se jaroorat nahiN hoti...

Hai chor uchakkoN se bhari desh ki satta,
Ke ab bhale logoN se siyaasat nahin hoti...

Lekar ke udhaari na chukaayi kabhi maine,
Ab shaql chipaane ko hazaamat nahin hoti...

Kachhi kaliyaaN baghbaaN ne khud haiN ujaadi,
Ab bhonroN ko bhi phooloN ki chaahat nahiN hoti...

Shayad teri nafrat me vo shiddat na rahi ab,
Jo taish mere dard ki barqat nahiN hoti...


Waah waah Waah Waah...

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoooob Taish Ji...Lajawaab

Har Ek Ashaar Par Dilli Daad...

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«Reply #5 on: May 31, 2013, 10:32:42 PM »
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waaaaah. Taish ji bahut hi achchi kalaam rahi is baar.khaas kar teesra sher aur maqta mujhe bahut jyaada pasand aaya. Har ek sher bahut achche khayalon se saji hai. aapko hazaron dili daad. qubool kare.
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2013, 12:06:09 AM »
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Bahut Achi Peshkash Hai Janab Waah!!Behtreen.Daad Kabool Karein.

bahut bahut shukriya aapka ravindera saaheb, ki aaapne is kosish ko pasand kiya aur saraaha, umeed karta hun ki aap aage bhi yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheNge...!!
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2013, 01:21:32 AM »
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wah wah wah bahut khoob taish...........!


shukriya sheba ji ise saraahne ke liye, bas aage v aap yuNhi saath nibhaati raheN...!!
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2013, 02:12:14 AM »
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SUBHANALLAH taish bhai... bht umda likha hai...
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«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2013, 03:23:40 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: June 01, 2013, 07:11:19 AM »
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nice work,achhe ehsasaat,daad!
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«Reply #11 on: June 01, 2013, 12:51:26 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Taish ji,
Behad khoobsurat ghazal kahi hai aapne.I really love it.Khaas taur  se matla aur maqta lazawab hai.Dili Mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.

aapka shukraguzaar huN sudhir saaheb, jo aapne is adni si peshkash ko itna saraaha, umeed karta hun ki aage bhi aapka saath hume yuNhi milta rahegaaa...
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«Reply #12 on: June 01, 2013, 01:00:23 PM »
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BAHUT KHOOB JI..................
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«Reply #13 on: June 01, 2013, 02:22:12 PM »
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Waah waah Waah Waah...

Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoooob Taish Ji...Lajawaab

Har Ek Ashaar Par Dilli Daad...

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khwaish ji aapse daad paa ke lag raha hai, ki jaroor kuch ahchaa likh gaya huN bhool se, waise bahut tasalli milti hai aapse hausla afzaayi paa kar, umeed karta huN ki aapka saath aage bhi hume yuNhi milta rahegaaa...
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«Reply #14 on: June 01, 2013, 02:32:07 PM »
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Kya baat hai taish ji.... bahut bahut khoob.. har ek she apni dastan keh gaya.. dili mubarakbad kubul kare.. Usual Smile
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