Taish- kabhi GEETA, kabhi QURAAN de kar...!!

by ghayal_shayar on January 11, 2015, 07:43:07 AM
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Bazm ko mera aadaab... Ik choti is ghazal thodi alag fiqr-o-khayaal ki pesh-e-khidmat hai...


Galat baatoN meiN uljhaaya gaya hooN...
Tasalli de ke behlaaya gaya hooN...

Kabhi Geeta, kabhi Quraan de kar,
MaiN dono taraf behkaya gaya hooN...

Sadak ho, naksali hamle ya sarhad,
MaiN hi marta hua paaya gaya hooN...

GareeboN ke bhale ki baat kar di,
Bhari mehfil se uthvaaya gaya hooN...
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2015, 08:43:06 AM »
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Bohot he achawww
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2015, 12:58:01 PM »
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Bahut khoob kaha.
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2015, 03:49:21 PM »
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Quote from: vishesh ranawat on January 11, 2015, 08:43:06 AM
Bohot he achawww

vishesh ji pasand karne ka shukriya, yuNhi pyar dete raheN...
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«Reply #4 on: January 11, 2015, 04:56:55 PM »
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Bahut Umdah  Applause
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2015, 11:28:21 PM »
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bahut umdah Taish Sahib, dheroooooooooH daad Rau ke saath.
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2015, 05:08:33 AM »
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Quote from: Rajigujral on January 11, 2015, 12:58:01 PM
Bahut khoob kaha.

raji ji shukriya, apni mohabbat yuNhi banaye rakheN...
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«Reply #7 on: January 12, 2015, 05:49:17 AM »
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Waah waah...
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«Reply #8 on: January 12, 2015, 09:20:02 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 11, 2015, 04:56:55 PM
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hasan sire, bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2015, 10:14:13 AM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab...!

Badi hi umdaa aur gehri fikr kasi hai janab... waqai behad qabil e daad huye haiN sabhi sher...

Bahut khoob janab bahut umdaa... is laa jawaab ashaar par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye.. bazm ko apni khoobsurat kalaamoN se nawaazte rahiye...


Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...
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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2015, 11:32:14 AM »
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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2015, 12:45:35 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: January 12, 2015, 04:00:54 PM »
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Quote from: surindarn on January 11, 2015, 11:28:21 PM
bahut umdah Taish Sahib, dheroooooooooH daad Rau ke saath.
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surindarn bhai ji, aapke saath, tareef aur rau teeno ke liye tahe dil se aapka shukraguzaar huN...
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2015, 08:23:07 AM »
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Quote from: sanchit on January 12, 2015, 05:49:17 AM
Waah waah...

sanchit saaheb hausla afzaayi ke liye bahut bahut shukraguzaar hun aapka...!!
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«Reply #14 on: January 13, 2015, 09:21:03 AM »
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bahut khub.....
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