Taish- khwaab ke us shahr ki TARAF...!!

by ghayal_shayar on July 28, 2013, 08:42:54 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 29, 2013, 03:07:30 PM »
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waaaaaaaah taishji. behtareeeen peshkash rahi aapki. kuch ashaar bahut bahut bahut hi achche hai. aapko is khoobsurat peshkash par hazaron daaaaaad daaaaaad daaaaaaad...
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«Reply #16 on: July 29, 2013, 03:44:00 PM »
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kyuN aitbaar tujhpe dil-o-jaan haar ke,
ye paiNtre haiN seekhne tujhse shikaar ke...
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JaayeNge hum bhi khwaab ke us shahr ki taraf,
Kashti palat jo aaye musaafir utaar ke...
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baazaar-e-jeest me thi bahut mehngi zindagi
do chaar din hooN maaNg main laaya udhaar ke,
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maiN kya umeed unse karooN sach dikhaane ki,
vo aaina bhi dekhte aaNkheN utaar ke...
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tere siwa na ishq kisi se hua hume.
dil ke ye falsafe hain kahaaN baar-baar ke...
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dekha hai usko maine bhi kitne kareeb se,
jo chhup gaya hai yaadoN meN mujhko pukaar ke...
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jo dard dena ho naya sa dijiyega ab,
humne bhi dekhe haiN yahaaN sab rang pyar ke...
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kitne bahaane roz tumhare na milne ke,
do din ko zindagi teri dekheN guzaar ke...
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waah waah taish bhai... bahut umdaa kalaam hai.. bahut khoob.. yu hi likhte rahe.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #17 on: July 30, 2013, 01:54:32 AM »
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wonderful

saini sir thanks for the compliment...!!
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«Reply #18 on: July 30, 2013, 07:43:57 PM »
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lovely creation

saniya maam thanks a tonne for the compliements...!!
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«Reply #19 on: July 31, 2013, 01:06:33 AM »
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shukriya mukesh sir, meri khusnaseebi jo aapko khayaal pasand aaya, umeed karta hun aapka aashirwad aage bhi yuNhi milta rahegaa...!!
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«Reply #20 on: July 31, 2013, 02:33:58 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai taish bhai..dhero daad..happy9

shukriya nashwani ji, kosish ko saraahne ke liye, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath dete raheN...!!
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«Reply #21 on: July 31, 2013, 10:08:18 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob..

nishi ji tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya mohtarma...!!
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«Reply #22 on: July 31, 2013, 10:22:02 PM »
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Taish bhai ek dam mast hai..itminaan se pada ek -ek alfaaz....maza aa gaya..wonderful
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«Reply #23 on: August 01, 2013, 12:09:58 PM »
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bahut umda janaab! u r among good poets of Yo aur wo aap sabit karte rahte hain! Daad ke saath Rau banta hai and it's given!



sir this is the great love and respect of urs, which is saying so, otherwise i am just an immature trying to pen down my thoughts... Thanks a tonne for both, ur appreciation and rau, hope that will keep getting the same love from you...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: August 01, 2013, 09:25:14 PM »
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bahut khoob...........!

sheba ji hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya, bas aage bhi aa yuNhi saath deti raheN...!!
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«Reply #25 on: August 02, 2013, 04:39:04 AM »
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maiN kya umeed unse karooN sach dikhaane ki,
vo aaina bhi dekhte aaNkheN utaar ke...
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saraswat ji tareef ka bahut bahut shukiya, umeed karta hun aapka saath aage bhi yuNhi milta rahegaa...!!
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«Reply #26 on: August 02, 2013, 11:33:24 PM »
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वाह वाह क्या बात है बहुत खूब.

saagar saaheb, tareef ka shukriya janaab, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath dete raheN...!!
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«Reply #27 on: August 03, 2013, 06:20:13 PM »
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wah wah

bahukhandi saaheb, saath aur tareef dono ka bahut bahut shukraguzaar hun janaab...
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«Reply #28 on: August 04, 2013, 12:39:55 AM »
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miraj ji pasand karne ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab...
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«Reply #29 on: August 04, 2013, 12:40:52 AM »
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bahut bahut khooob taish saheb

hasan sir aapki tareef se humesha garv muhsus hota hai, bas yunhi duaa dete rahiye...
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