Taish- marasim EHTIYAATAN torr dena chaahta hooN maiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on April 08, 2013, 10:39:09 PM

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janumanu

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«Reply #15 on: April 10, 2013, 06:08:01 AM »

Quote from: Taish on April 09, 2013, 02:51:36 PM

pehle to shukriya khwaish saahab, is nacheez ki kosish ko saraahne ke liye...

Main aapki baat se sehmat hun ki khud ko hum khuda ka darja nahiN de sakte, par neki se hum apni kismat jaroor badal sakte haiN, aur maine bas vahi kehne ki kosish ki hai, ab agar isse aapki kisi bhi bhaavna ko thes pahuNchi ho to maiN uske liye maafi ka talabgaar huN...

kyun bhayee jab hum kahte hai sanam ko khudaa bana diya
butt ko khudaa bana diya to isme kya harz Usual Smile


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livingbytheday

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Re: Taish- marasim EHTIYAATAN torr dena chaahta hooN maiN...!!

«Reply #16 on: April 10, 2013, 07:19:36 PM »

nihayat hi khoobsurat, very very good, congratulations


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taish- marasim EHTIYAATAN torr dena chaahta hooN maiN...!!

«Reply #17 on: April 10, 2013, 11:12:43 PM »

Quote from: lovely_charan on April 09, 2013, 02:17:10 AM

behad khubsurat taish ji.. dheron mubarakbaad aapko.. Usual Smile

plus ek rau.. Usual Smile

charan ji, daad aur rau dono hi ke liye aapke tah-e-dil se shukraguzaar huN, umeed karta huN aapka saath aage bhi yuNhi milta rahegaa... Usual Smile


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #18 on: April 11, 2013, 11:13:26 AM »

Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on April 09, 2013, 02:35:55 AM

padhne ki jehmiyat uthaane aur ise pasand karne ka shukriya saaheb...


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #19 on: April 11, 2013, 11:11:39 PM »

Quote from: Sheba on April 09, 2013, 02:57:15 AM

wah wah wah taish ek rau deti hoon...........!

sheba ji aapki tareef meri sar aaNkhon pe, aur bahut baht shukraguzaar hun aapka, ki aapne is kosish ko rau ke kaabil samjha... yuNhi hausla afzaayi karti raheN...


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #20 on: April 12, 2013, 02:39:44 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 09, 2013, 03:30:22 AM

Taish Sahaab Aadaab!

WaaH janab waaH kya kahne, janab bade hi gehre gote lagaa rahe haiN aap.. yaqeenan behad khooba aur umdaa gazal kahi hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar aik se badhkar aik rahe... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par meri hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye.. bazm meiN aate rahiye..,
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

bhai aapki hausla afzaayi se humesha hi bal milta hai, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko kalaam pasand aaya, umeed karta hun ki aage bhi aapka saath hume yuNhi milta rahega..


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #21 on: April 12, 2013, 09:12:55 PM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on April 09, 2013, 04:04:02 AM

Waah waah waah Bhusan jee, bahut hi umda ghazal kahi hai aapne, bahut pasand aayi, iss she'r ke liye khususann daad aur ek Rau bhi qubool kareiN meri taraf se:

Ye mere aayine ko shaayri kisne hai sikhlaayi,
Ghazal ye gungunaata hai teri, jo dekhta hooN maiN

iftakhar saaheb, aapne ghazal pasand ki ye jaan kar behad khushi hui, umeed karta hun ki aapka saath aur aapki hausla afzaayi hume aage bhi naseeb hote raeNge, aapke rau ke liye bhi main tah-e-dil se shukraguzaar huN...


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aqsh

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«Reply #22 on: April 13, 2013, 11:38:07 PM »

Bahut bahut bahut khoob taish ji. har ek sher khoob hai. kiski tareef karoon aur kisko chod doon. poori ghazal lajawab hai. dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare.


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #23 on: April 14, 2013, 04:03:27 PM »

Quote from: Farhan Sohail on April 09, 2013, 05:24:30 AM

Waaaaaah waaaaaaaaah Buht umda jnab,,,, dheroon daaad

farhan saaheb aapki tareef aur hausla afzaayi ka shukraguzaar huN, umeed karta huN ki aage bhi aapka saath yuNhi bana rahega...!!


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #24 on: April 14, 2013, 10:19:50 PM »

Quote from: janumanu on April 10, 2013, 06:08:01 AM

kyun bhayee jab hum kahte hai sanam ko khudaa bana diya
butt ko khudaa bana diya to isme kya harz Usual Smile

are bhai sabki apni soch hai, so don't worry, waise is mudde ko sabse behtar tareeke se aap hi jaante haiN... Usual Smile


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #25 on: April 15, 2013, 04:01:13 AM »

Quote from: livingbytheday on April 10, 2013, 07:19:36 PM

nihayat hi khoobsurat, very very good, congratulations

shukriya saaheb, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko humara likha pasand aaya, umeed karta huN ki aage v aap yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte rahenge...


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ghayal_shayar

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«Reply #26 on: April 16, 2013, 11:45:44 PM »

Quote from: aqsh on April 13, 2013, 11:38:07 PM

Bahut bahut bahut khoob taish ji. har ek sher khoob hai. kiski tareef karoon aur kisko chod doon. poori ghazal lajawab hai. dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare.

aqsh ji bahut bahut shukra guzara hun maiN aapka is hausla afzaayi ke liye, umeed karta huN aage bhi aapka saath yuNhi milta rahegaa...


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suman59

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«Reply #27 on: December 15, 2013, 04:26:45 PM »

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KahaaN ko chal pada hooN main liye roothi hui kismat,
Meri manjil kahaan par thi, kahaan ko chal pada huN maiN..

Teri dehleez per aankhon ke ye roshan diye rakh kar..
Akela andhiyaara dhoondta jo fir raha hoon maiN..

Ye mere aayine ko shaayri kisne hai sikhlaayi,
Ghazal ye gungunaata hai teri, jo dekhta hooN maiN..

Vo kehte hain ke milta hai jo bhi kismat se milta hai,
main kismat hi badal dunga ke khud ka khud khuda hooN maiN..

bahut bahut umda ghazal kahi hai aapne. deron daad Clapping Smiley