Taish- mera CHEHRA kho gaya chehroN me mere...!!

by ghayal_shayar on June 07, 2013, 03:09:30 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 08, 2013, 03:36:21 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on June 07, 2013, 11:46:10 AM
:clap:NICE,TAISH JI

thank u sir ji.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: June 08, 2013, 02:37:34 PM »
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«Reply #17 on: June 08, 2013, 06:22:23 PM »
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Quote from: poonamA on June 07, 2013, 12:31:57 PM
bahot sunder

shukriya poonam ji... yuNhi aage bhi aap saath deti raheN...!!
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«Reply #18 on: June 08, 2013, 09:17:24 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on June 07, 2013, 12:32:36 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
ufffffffffff taishji. bahut hi dil ko choone wali ghazal kahi hai aapne. waaah aur sirf waaah har sher par aur in ashaaron ka kya kehne. ek dam dil ke kareeb ho gayi.

paheli lage aqs apna hi ab aainon meN mere,
mera chehra hi kahiN kho gaya chehroN meN mere...

sazaa maut ki jisne mujhko sunaayi mohabbat me thi,
vahi dhadkaneN dhooNdti fir rahi cheethroN me mere...

yahaaN dard badhta raha, zakhm yuNhi vo ginta raha,
azal ro padi , zakhm-e-ulfat hue saiNkdon meN mere...

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
awesome...

is izzat afzaayi ke liye aapka shukraguzaar huN maiN, dua yahi rahegi ki aapka saath aage bhi isi tarah milta rahe hume...
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«Reply #19 on: June 09, 2013, 12:10:37 AM »
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khoobsooratee bhee gahrai bhee, kamaal
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«Reply #20 on: June 09, 2013, 06:54:02 PM »
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Quote from: zarraa on June 07, 2013, 01:55:51 PM
Taish ji ... Is soz e gham mein sulagti huee ghazal par apko dheron daad

zarra ji, aapki is inayat ka shukraguzaar huN, bas aage bhi yuNhi saath dete rahiyegaa...
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«Reply #21 on: June 09, 2013, 09:42:37 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on June 07, 2013, 02:28:34 PM
waah waah taish ji.. bahut bahut khoob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

touhid saaheb, bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #22 on: June 10, 2013, 03:06:40 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on June 07, 2013, 03:30:21 PM
badhiya Applause Applause

Mukesh sir ji, shukriya pasand karne ka... Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: June 11, 2013, 11:58:16 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 07, 2013, 06:07:12 PM
bahut khoob

thanku sir ji, bas aage bhi aap yunhi sath dete raheN...!!
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«Reply #24 on: June 12, 2013, 03:23:17 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on June 07, 2013, 10:34:03 PM
Bahut khoob Bhusan jee.

shukriya bhai jaan...
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«Reply #25 on: June 12, 2013, 11:44:45 AM »
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gazabbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb ...... taish ..... kya gazal kahi hai superbbbbbbbb yaara.......

paheli lage aqs apna hi ab aainon meN mere,
mera chehra hi kahiN kho gaya chehroN meN mere...

ye sher main chura lun kya.... Huh? mujhpe bht suit karta hai

sazaa maut ki jisne mujhko sunaayi mohabbat me thi,
vahi dhadkaneN dhooNdti fir rahi cheethroN me mere...

my fav sher from ur collection taish... best 1 of this gazal

main bhi farq kya aashiqui aur nafrat meN karta yahaaN,
jo haiN yaar-o-dushman sabhi baithte sarfiroN meN mere...

waahhhhhhh

atakne lagiN saaseN to nabz bhi yuN ukhadti rahi,
hai aandhi ye kaisi chali dekhiye sehroN meN mere...

kyaa baattt hai bas  bahot khoobbbb

yahaaN dard badhta raha, zakhm yuNhi vo ginta raha,
azal ro padi , zakhm-e-ulfat hue saiNkdon meN mere...

waahhhhh jiiii waahhhhhhhh
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«Reply #26 on: June 12, 2013, 11:15:10 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on June 08, 2013, 02:37:34 PM
bahut khoob

shukriya bahukhandi ji, bas aage v aap yuNhi saath dete raheN...
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«Reply #27 on: June 13, 2013, 02:22:29 PM »
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Quote from: srishti raj chintak on June 09, 2013, 12:10:37 AM
khoobsooratee bhee gahrai bhee, kamaal

chintak saaheb, bahut bahut shukraguzara hun aapka, ki aapne ise pasand kiya... bas aage v aap yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte rahen...
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«Reply #28 on: June 13, 2013, 02:25:40 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on June 07, 2013, 03:09:30 AM
Bahut dinoN baad ek pure dard ka kalaam le likha hai, jo ki meri usp rahi hai, umeed karta huN ahl-e-bazm ko jyada niraash nahiN karuNga...



paheli lage aqs apna hi ab aainon meN mere,
mera chehra hi kahiN kho gaya chehroN meN mere...

sazaa maut ki jisne mujhko sunaayi mohabbat me thi,
vahi dhadkaneN dhooNdti fir rahi cheethroN me mere...

main bhi farq kya aashiqui aur nafrat meN karta yahaaN,
jo haiN yaar-o-dushman sabhi baithte sarfiroN meN mere...

atakne lagiN saaseN to nabz bhi yuN ukhadti rahi,
hai aandhi ye kaisi chali dekhiye sehroN meN mere...

yahaaN dard badhta raha, zakhm yuNhi vo ginta raha,
azal ro padi , zakhm-e-ulfat hue saiNkdon meN mere...

wah wah wah... ek ek line dil ko chu gai... bahoot khoob!!! bahoot ache se shabdo ko motio ki tarah piroya hai... Good work!!!
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«Reply #29 on: June 14, 2013, 10:04:41 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on June 12, 2013, 11:44:45 AM
gazabbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb ...... taish ..... kya gazal kahi hai superbbbbbbbb yaara.......

paheli lage aqs apna hi ab aainon meN mere,
mera chehra hi kahiN kho gaya chehroN meN mere...

ye sher main chura lun kya.... Huh? mujhpe bht suit karta hai

sazaa maut ki jisne mujhko sunaayi mohabbat me thi,
vahi dhadkaneN dhooNdti fir rahi cheethroN me mere...

my fav sher from ur collection taish... best 1 of this gazal

main bhi farq kya aashiqui aur nafrat meN karta yahaaN,
jo haiN yaar-o-dushman sabhi baithte sarfiroN meN mere...

waahhhhhhh

atakne lagiN saaseN to nabz bhi yuN ukhadti rahi,
hai aandhi ye kaisi chali dekhiye sehroN meN mere...

kyaa baattt hai bas  bahot khoobbbb

yahaaN dard badhta raha, zakhm yuNhi vo ginta raha,
azal ro padi , zakhm-e-ulfat hue saiNkdon meN mere...

waahhhhh jiiii waahhhhhhhh

are mohtarmaa aap aayiN bahaar aayi, jo sher pasand aaye chura lijiye mohtarma, waise jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapne itna tareef bakshi meri kosish ko, bas yahi umeed karta hun aapka saath hume humesha yuNhi milta rahe...
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