Taish- mujhe vo LAFZ laa do...!!

by ghayal_shayar on May 17, 2013, 03:00:55 PM
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Bade dinoN baad ek halki si ghazal likhi hai, to bazm ke nazar kar raha huN, umeed hai jyada niraash nahiN karuNga.... Usual Smile


Tere is shahr ka ab ishq hi dastoor ho jaaye,
Ke nafrat jis kisi meN ho yahaaN kaafoor ho jaaye...

Main jiske paas jata huN vo mujhse door ho jaaye,
Mujhe vo lafz laa do ke razaa manjoor ho jaaye...

Dilon ka tootna jo ishq ka dastoor ho jaaye,
Khuda kuch aisa kar ki dil mera taimoor* ho jaaye...

*Made of steel

Shikayat to nahi karta magar ye sochta hooN maiN,
Vo aakhir kya kare jo har tarah majboor ho jaaye...

bahaane dhooNdta huN raat din jisko manaane ke,
Kabhi vo door hoti hai, kabhi maghroor ho jaaye...

Tera insaaf bhi kya khoob hota hai mere maulaa,
Ke likhta huN main ghazaleN aur tu mashoor ho jaaye...

Sharafat 'taish' ki aadat nahi bas itna samajh lo tum,
To mujhko dosh mat dena vo gar makhmoor* ho jaaye...

*Drunk
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2013, 04:31:53 PM »
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Good one Taish jee
ek muqammal kalaam..
Shikayat to nahi karta magar ye sochta hooN maiN,
Vo aakhir kya kare jo har tarah majboor ho jaaye...
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2013, 04:57:53 PM »
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Tere is shahr ka ab ishq hi dastoor ho jaaye,
Ke nafrat jis kisi meN ho yahaaN kaafoor ho jaaye...
Main jiske paas jata huN vo mujhse door ho jaaye,
Mujhe vo lafz laa do ke razaa manjoor ho jaaye...
Dilon ka tootna jo ishq ka dastoor ho jaaye,
Khuda kuch aisa kar ki dil mera taimoor* ho jaaye...
*Made of steel
Shikayat to nahi karta magar ye sochta hooN maiN,
Vo aakhir kya kare jo har tarah majboor ho jaaye...
bahaane dhooNdta huN raat din jisko manaane ke,
Kabhi vo door hoti hai, kabhi maghroor ho jaaye...
Tera insaaf bhi kya khoob hota hai mere maulaa,
Ke likhta huN main ghazaleN aur tu mashoor ho jaaye...
Sharafat 'taish' ki aadat nahi bas itna samajh lo tum,
To mujhko dosh mat dena vo gar makhmoor* ho jaaye...       
*Drunk

Wah,Wah,Wah Taish Bhai,Really kamaal kar diya aapne.Bilkul mukkammal ghazal kahi hai aapne.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2013, 05:06:28 PM »
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Very nice
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2013, 05:50:34 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on May 17, 2013, 03:00:55 PM
Bade dinoN baad ek halki si ghazal likhi hai, to bazm ke nazar kar raha huN, umeed hai jyada niraash nahiN karuNga.... Usual Smile


Tere is shahr ka ab ishq hi dastoor ho jaaye,
Ke nafrat jis kisi meN ho yahaaN kaafoor ho jaaye...

Main jiske paas jata huN vo mujhse door ho jaaye,
Mujhe vo lafz laa do ke razaa manjoor ho jaaye...

Dilon ka tootna jo ishq ka dastoor ho jaaye,
Khuda kuch aisa kar ki dil mera taimoor* ho jaaye...

*Made of steel

Shikayat to nahi karta magar ye sochta hooN maiN,
Vo aakhir kya kare jo har tarah majboor ho jaaye...

bahaane dhooNdta huN raat din jisko manaane ke,
Kabhi vo door hoti hai, kabhi maghroor ho jaaye...

Tera insaaf bhi kya khoob hota hai mere maulaa,
Ke likhta huN main ghazaleN aur tu mashoor ho jaaye...

Sharafat 'taish' ki aadat nahi bas itna samajh lo tum,
To mujhko dosh mat dena vo gar makhmoor* ho jaaye...

*Drunk

nice,sir
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2013, 06:37:35 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on May 17, 2013, 04:31:53 PM
Good one Taish jee
ek muqammal kalaam..
Shikayat to nahi karta magar ye sochta hooN maiN,
Vo aakhir kya kare jo har tarah majboor ho jaaye...
Ye sher khoob raha  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP



bahut bahut shukriya mukesh ji, jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko kosish pasand aayi, umeed karta huN aage v aapka saath yuNhi milta rahegaa hume... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2013, 06:39:47 PM »
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ache qafiya ou.r radeef ke sath bohat achee ghazal,......bohat c daad,.......
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2013, 07:29:12 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on May 17, 2013, 03:00:55 PM
Bade dinoN baad ek halki si ghazal likhi hai, to bazm ke nazar kar raha huN, umeed hai jyada niraash nahiN karuNga.... Usual Smile


Tere is shahr ka ab ishq hi dastoor ho jaaye,
Ke nafrat jis kisi meN ho yahaaN kaafoor ho jaaye...

Main jiske paas jata huN vo mujhse door ho jaaye,
Mujhe vo lafz laa do ke razaa manjoor ho jaaye...

Dilon ka tootna jo ishq ka dastoor ho jaaye,
Khuda kuch aisa kar ki dil mera taimoor* ho jaaye...

*Made of steel

Shikayat to nahi karta magar ye sochta hooN maiN,
Vo aakhir kya kare jo har tarah majboor ho jaaye...

bahaane dhooNdta huN raat din jisko manaane ke,
Kabhi vo door hoti hai, kabhi maghroor ho jaaye...

Tera insaaf bhi kya khoob hota hai mere maulaa,
Ke likhta huN main ghazaleN aur tu mashoor ho jaaye...

Sharafat 'taish' ki aadat nahi bas itna samajh lo tum,
To mujhko dosh mat dena vo gar makhmoor* ho jaaye...

*Drunk

Bahut Bahut Khoooob Taish Ji...

Khoobsurat Peshkash...

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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2013, 07:47:12 PM »
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Good One!

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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2013, 09:04:08 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2013, 02:54:53 AM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 17, 2013, 04:57:53 PM
Tere is shahr ka ab ishq hi dastoor ho jaaye,
Ke nafrat jis kisi meN ho yahaaN kaafoor ho jaaye...
Main jiske paas jata huN vo mujhse door ho jaaye,
Mujhe vo lafz laa do ke razaa manjoor ho jaaye...
Dilon ka tootna jo ishq ka dastoor ho jaaye,
Khuda kuch aisa kar ki dil mera taimoor* ho jaaye...
*Made of steel
Shikayat to nahi karta magar ye sochta hooN maiN,
Vo aakhir kya kare jo har tarah majboor ho jaaye...
bahaane dhooNdta huN raat din jisko manaane ke,
Kabhi vo door hoti hai, kabhi maghroor ho jaaye...
Tera insaaf bhi kya khoob hota hai mere maulaa,
Ke likhta huN main ghazaleN aur tu mashoor ho jaaye...
Sharafat 'taish' ki aadat nahi bas itna samajh lo tum,
To mujhko dosh mat dena vo gar makhmoor* ho jaaye...       
*Drunk

Wah,Wah,Wah Taish Bhai,Really kamaal kar diya aapne.Bilkul mukkammal ghazal kahi hai aapne.Meri dili mubarakbaad qabool kijiye.

sudhir saaheb ye humari khushnaseebi ki aapko humari kosish pasand aayi, bas yahi dua rahegi ki aage bhi aapka saaath hume yuNhi milta rahe...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2013, 02:32:32 PM »
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Quote from: NeelamJ on May 17, 2013, 05:06:28 PM
Very nice


neelam ji padhne aur paand karne ka shukriya, umeed karta hun aapka saath aage v yunhi milta rahegaa...
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«Reply #12 on: May 18, 2013, 07:09:11 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on May 17, 2013, 05:50:34 PM
nice,sir

thanks for the appreciation mate...
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«Reply #13 on: May 19, 2013, 09:11:20 AM »
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Quote from: laaiba on May 17, 2013, 06:39:47 PM
ache qafiya ou.r radeef ke sath bohat achee ghazal,......bohat c daad,.......

tareef ka bahut bahut shukraguzaar huN laaiba ji, bas yahi darkhwast rahegi ki apna saath aap aage bhi yuNhi deti raheN...
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«Reply #14 on: May 19, 2013, 05:15:55 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on May 17, 2013, 07:29:12 PM
Bahut Bahut Khoooob Taish Ji...

Khoobsurat Peshkash...

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bahut bahut shukriya khwaish saaheb, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko kosish pasand aayi, umeed karta hun aapka saath aage v hume yuNhi milta rahe...
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