Taish- mujhko tera ghum bahut NAAYAAB hai...!!

by ghayal_shayar on July 08, 2014, 06:09:59 PM
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Ek aur alag si ghazal le ke bazm mein pesh hun apni raaye se nawaaziyega...


Tera dariya, mera ik taalaab hai,
Har kisi ka apna apna khwaab hai...

Kal jo baadal aaya tere shahr se,
Aaj mujh pe rone ko betaab hai...

Toote dil ki is tijori meiN rakha,
Mujhko tera ghum bahut naayaab hai...

HoNth pyase, rooh pyasi, pyasa dil,
Pyas ki khaatir mila zehraab* hai...

*Deadly Poison

Palkon pe rakkhi teri yaadeiN dho liN,
Aankh se jo gir raha tezaab hai...

Dosti ke sab kareene chod kar,
DushmanoN ko 'Taish' ka aadaab hai...
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2014, 07:30:29 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2014, 07:37:50 PM »
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Its Superb Taish & Simply marvelous............
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Loved the way u penned it, with few wordings carrying deep meaning.
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2014, 09:26:32 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on July 08, 2014, 06:09:59 PM
Ek aur alag si ghazal le ke bazm mein pesh hun apni raaye se nawaaziyega...


Tera dariya, mera ik taalaab hai,
Har kisi ka apna apna khwaab hai...

Kal jo baadal aaya tere shahr se,
Aaj mujh pe rone ko betaab hai...

Toote dil ki is tijori meiN rakha,
Mujhko tera ghum bahut naayaab hai...

HoNth pyase, rooh pyasi, pyasa dil,
Pyas ki khaatir mila zehraab* hai...

*Deadly Poison

Palkon pe rakkhi teri yaadeiN dho liN,
Aankh se jo gir raha tezaab hai...

Dosti ke sab kareene chod kar,
DushmanoN ko 'Taish' ka aadaab hai...

good Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2014, 11:59:16 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on July 08, 2014, 07:30:29 PM
Applause Applause Applause waah waah bahut khoob

shukriya sire ji...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2014, 04:11:22 AM »
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Quote from: Bhupinder Kaur on July 08, 2014, 07:37:50 PM
Its Superb Taish & Simply marvelous............
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Loved the way u penned it, with few wordings carrying deep meaning.

Bhupinder ji bahut bahut shukriya, ahcha laga ye dekh kar ki aapko kosish pasand aayi...
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2014, 04:44:49 AM »
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bahut umdah Taish Sahib, dheron daad.
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2014, 05:38:38 AM »
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Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2014, 02:43:36 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on July 08, 2014, 09:26:32 PM
good Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

adil saaheb hausla afzaayi ka shukriya....!!
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2014, 08:08:08 PM »
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Quote from: surindarn on July 09, 2014, 04:44:49 AM
bahut umdah Taish Sahib, dheron daad.
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aapki daad sar aaNkhon pe surindarn saheb.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2014, 10:58:35 PM »
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very nice
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«Reply #11 on: July 10, 2014, 04:16:53 AM »
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Lucky jee Aadaab ... !

Janab khoob mizaaz meiN lag rahe haiN aajkal ...
Badi hi umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab ... behad khoob sher huye haiN sabhi ...
Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye ...

Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...
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«Reply #12 on: July 11, 2014, 04:41:21 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on July 09, 2014, 05:38:38 AM
Bahut khoob.

shukriya sagar ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2014, 02:00:59 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on July 09, 2014, 10:58:35 PM
very nice

hausla afzaayi ke liye shukraguzaar hun saaheb... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: July 13, 2014, 12:43:20 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on July 10, 2014, 04:16:53 AM

Lucky jee Aadaab ... !

Janab khoob mizaaz meiN lag rahe haiN aajkal ...
Badi hi umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab ... behad khoob sher huye haiN sabhi ...
Is khoob kalaam par humari hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye ...

Likhte rahiye ... bazm meiN aate rahiye ...
Shaad O aabad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...


bhai jaan bas aapki duaayeN haiN.... nahiN to hum kahaan kisi kaaabil... Usual Smile yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte rahiyega... Usual Smile
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