Taish ne badle TEWAR nahiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on February 23, 2013, 09:10:50 PM
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Beh'r- 212 212 212



saath mere tu jo gar nahin,
zinda hooN zindagi par nahiN...

choom ke jootha chodda mujhe,
humko koi dekhta chookar nahiN...

ke hai kya faayeda chasm ka,
jo nigaaheN hon unpar nahiN...

unki rehmat to mashoor hai,
bas abhaga maiN jis par nahiN...

haarna uss se kaise ho ab,
dil utarna tu zidd par nahiN...

hum to haiN kashmakash meN rahe,
kuch jo kehti vo khulkar nahiN...

chaahe haalaat jaise rahe,
taish ne badle tewar nahiN...
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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2013, 09:24:11 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on February 23, 2013, 09:10:50 PM
Beh'r- 212 212 212



aath mere tu jo gar nahin,
zinda hooN zindagi par nahiN...

choom ke jootha chodda mujhe,
humko koi dekhta chookar nahiN...

ke hai kya faayeda chasm ka,
jo nigaaheN hon unpar nahiN...

unki rehmat to mashoor hai,
bas abhaga maiN jis par nahiN...

haarna uss se kaise ho ab,
dil utarna tu zidd par nahiN...

hum to haiN kashmakash meN rahe,
kuch jo kehti vo khulkar nahiN...

chaahe haalaat jaise rahe,
taish ne badle tewar nahiN...

bahut khoob......!
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2013, 09:34:59 PM »
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab!



Kia baat hai janab waaH jee waaH badi hi khoobsurat gazal kahi hai...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob aur umdaa rahe... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


Quote from: Taish on February 23, 2013, 09:10:50 PM
Beh'r- 212 212 212





choom ke jootha chodda mujhe,
humko koi dekhta chookar nahiN...

unki rehmat to mashoor hai,
bas abhaga maiN jis par nahiN...

hum to haiN kashmakash meN rahe,
kuch jo kehti vo khulkar nahiN...

chaahe haalaat jaise rahe,
taish ne badle tewar nahiN...


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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2013, 11:03:24 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on February 23, 2013, 09:24:11 PM

bahut khoob......!

sheba ji bahut bahut shukriya ise pasand karne ka, jaan kar khushi hui ki kalaam aapko pasand aaya....!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2013, 11:08:03 PM »
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wah ji wah....superb
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2013, 01:44:57 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 23, 2013, 09:34:59 PM
Taish Sahaab Aadaab!



Kia baat hai janab waaH jee waaH badi hi khoobsurat gazal kahi hai...
Sabhi ashaar behad khoob aur umdaa rahe... Usual Smile

Is khoobsurat kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye... Usual Smile

Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile



 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bhai jaan bahut bahut shukriya ise pasand karne ka, kosish yahi rahegi ki bazm meN regular haazri di jaa sake, aur kuch dhang ka likh sakuN, bas yuNhi aapke saath ki darkhwast rahegi.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2013, 02:48:31 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on February 24, 2013, 01:44:57 AM
bhai jaan bahut bahut shukriya ise pasand karne ka, kosish yahi rahegi ki bazm meN regular haazri di jaa sake, aur kuch dhang ka likh sakuN, bas yuNhi aapke saath ki darkhwast rahegi.... Usual Smile

Lucky Bhai yeH toH aapka khulus O aqlaaq hai jo aap itna pyaar mohobbat
se jawaab dete haiN... Usual Smile

Koshish jaari rakhiye aur sikhte rahiye.. aapke saath behad achche rahnumaa hai jo
badi khubi se aur samjhne layaq sikha sakte haiN so meri yehi duaa raheNgi ke aap
bher meiN achche se likhna sikh jaaye.. aur phir hume bhi yahaaN sikhaye.. Usual Smile

HaaN abhi aap meiN words ko todne ka kafi kachchapan nazar aa raha hai... jo lafz
lo sahiN wazn meiN nahi baNd sake hai aap... waise aap toH jante hi hai mujhe khud
thik se lafzoN ko todna nahi aata so maiN bhi ghalat ho sakta huN..  icon_geek icon_geek

Chaliye aapke saath saath humari bhi taleem hoti raheNgi.. Usual Smile
Aur haaN bazm meiN toH waqt diyaa hi kijiye kyuN ke abhi mera sikhna aap par hai..Usual Smile

So aate rahiye.. shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2013, 02:53:29 AM »
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baht baht khoob Taish sahab
bht khubsurat ghazal rahi
aur aapke likhne ka andaaz
behad lajawaab
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janaab kosis karie aur regular aane ka time nikalie
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khus rahie
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2013, 03:20:43 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on February 24, 2013, 02:48:31 AM
Lucky Bhai yeH toH aapka khulus O aqlaaq hai jo aap itna pyaar mohobbat
se jawaab dete haiN... Usual Smile

Koshish jaari rakhiye aur sikhte rahiye.. aapke saath behad achche rahnumaa hai jo
badi khubi se aur samjhne layaq sikha sakte haiN so meri yehi duaa raheNgi ke aap
bher meiN achche se likhna sikh jaaye.. aur phir hume bhi yahaaN sikhaye.. Usual Smile

HaaN abhi aap meiN words ko todne ka kafi kachchapan nazar aa raha hai... jo lafz
lo sahiN wazn meiN nahi baNd sake hai aap... waise aap toH jante hi hai mujhe khud
thik se lafzoN ko todna nahi aata so maiN bhi ghalat ho sakta huN..  icon_geek icon_geek

Chaliye aapke saath saath humari bhi taleem hoti raheNgi.. Usual Smile
Aur haaN bazm meiN toH waqt diyaa hi kijiye kyuN ke abhi mera sikhna aap par hai..Usual Smile

So aate rahiye.. shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile

bhai jan par ye ghazal bina islaah beh'r men hai.... tongue3, kayi fafzon ki taqti men confusion jarur aa jaati hai, nahiN to baaNki sab ab theek hai... chliye main bhi mashq jaari rakh raha hun.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: February 24, 2013, 02:31:11 PM »
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Bahut khoob bahut hii zabardast gazal lakhon daad aur mubarkbaad TAISH JII
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