Taish- sab ke sab BEWAFA nahi hote(2122 1212 22)

by ghayal_shayar on December 21, 2012, 06:25:15 PM
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beh'r ghazal likhne ki oor mera pehla qadam hai ye, umeed karta hun ki aap sabhi ka saath aur mashwaraa milegaa mujhe, bhaiyon agar kahiN gadbad hui ho to bata dena, kyunki kisi se bhi islaah nahin karaya hai, bas khatm kar ke yahaaN feNk diyaa hai, islaah aur mashwaron ke talabgaar rahungaa...


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jo khuda me yakeen rakhte hain,
ek pukhta zameen rakhte hain.

aajmane se toot jaate hain,
pyar rishtey maheen rakhte hain

sab ke sab bewafa nahi hote,
jo bhi chehre haseen rakhte hain.

aandhiyan unka kya beegarengi,
jo ki gehri zameen rakhte hain.

'taish', ik jeene ki tamanna hai,
hum isi me yakeen rakhte hain.
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«Reply #1 on: December 21, 2012, 07:32:53 PM »
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bahut khoob kha aapne...har koi bewafaa nahi hota...bahut umda likha hai...
bahut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: December 22, 2012, 01:52:55 AM »
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superb
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«Reply #3 on: December 22, 2012, 02:13:29 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: December 22, 2012, 02:56:23 AM »
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BAHUT UMDA TAISH JEE
BAHUT PYAARE KHAYAALAAT.. EK MUKAMMAL GHAZAL
IS KHOOBSURAT AAGHAJ PAR BAHUT BAHUT BADHAAI..
LIKHTE RAHIYE...
KAABIL-E-TAAREEF HAI AAPKA BAHR BHI SAATH ME LIKHNA..FOR THOSE WHO WANT TO WRITE THE SAME WAY.
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«Reply #5 on: December 22, 2012, 03:18:23 AM »
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humesha ki terah umda peshkash
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«Reply #6 on: December 22, 2012, 03:53:44 AM »
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Quote from: Nikhaar on December 21, 2012, 07:32:53 PM
bahut khoob kha aapne...har koi bewafaa nahi hota...bahut umda likha hai...
bahut khoob

nikhaar ji bahut bahut shukriya, ye humari khusnaseebi ki aap humare qalaam pe aayin aur aapne ise pasand kiya, umeed karta huN ki aap age bhi yuNhi saath nibhaate raheNge...
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«Reply #7 on: December 22, 2012, 04:59:40 AM »
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kya baat hai lucky jee badi hi lajawab peshkash rahi dili mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #8 on: December 22, 2012, 05:00:03 AM »
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Bahut  bahut  khoob . commendable  effort  . congrats .
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«Reply #9 on: December 22, 2012, 08:06:58 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: December 22, 2012, 10:02:44 AM »
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waah waah
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Bahut Khoob .......Awesome .......Zabardast Creation Taish Ji ..
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Bahut khubsurat kalaam hai Taish ji. Behr me hone ki wajah se aur bhi nikhar aa gaya. Daad pesh hai.
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«Reply #13 on: December 22, 2012, 10:36:26 AM »
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Quote from: Taish on December 21, 2012, 06:25:15 PM
beh'r ghazal likhne ki oor mera pehla qadam hai ye, umeed karta hun ki aap sabhi ka saath aur mashwaraa milegaa mujhe, bhaiyon agar kahiN gadbad hui ho to bata dena, kyunki kisi se bhi islaah nahin karaya hai, bas khatm kar ke yahaaN feNk diyaa hai, islaah aur mashwaron ke talabgaar rahungaa...


Beh'r- 2122 1212 22


jo khuda me yakeen rakhte hain,
ek pukhta zameen rakhte hain.

aajmane se toot jaate hain,
pyar rishtey maheen rakhte hain

sab ke sab bewafa nahi hote,
jo bhi chehre haseen rakhte hain.

aandhiyan unka kya beegarengi,
jo ki gehri zameen rakhte hain.

'taish', ik jeene ki tamanna hai,
hum isi me yakeen rakhte hain.
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wah wah waah taish sahab kamal kardiya.
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«Reply #14 on: December 22, 2012, 04:37:18 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 22, 2012, 01:52:55 AM
superb

saini sir thanks a lot, aapki shaabashi bahut bal deti hai, jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko kosish pasand aayi....
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