Taish- vo panchi aur na ab vo PATANG dekhte haiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on September 03, 2013, 02:11:14 PM
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Bazm ko mera aadaab, kuch waqt se gaayab rehne ke liye muafi ka talabgara huN, par mashroofiyat thodi jyada rahi haal meN... Ek alag khayal ko pesh kar raha huN, umeed karta huN ki aap sab ko pasand aayegaa...

haya ka roz naya ek raNg dekhte hain,
yuN jab kabhi bhi use tere saNg dekhte haiN...

hawa ka badla hua ek rang dekhte haiN,
vo panchi aur na ab vo pataNg dekhte haiN...

ajeeb hai ye paheli bhi ishq ki o sanam,
suraNg roz nayi ik suraNg dekhte haiN...

lahoo-luhaan ho kar vo pada hua hai yahaaN,
umang aaj hui yuN apaNg dekhte haiN...

jo napasand samajh ko ye dil vahi kare hai...
dil-o-dimaag ki ulfat meN juNg dehte haiN..

sataate haiN to kabhi rooth jaate mere sanam,
vo dhaNg dhaNg mere raNg dhaNg dekhte haiN

vo shaqs chain se tha zindagi meN soya nahi,
qafan meN 'taish' ke tooti palaNg dekhte haiN...
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«Reply #1 on: September 03, 2013, 02:28:33 PM »
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waah waah qaafiyo kaa selection ghajab kaa hai dheron daad
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«Reply #2 on: September 03, 2013, 02:29:01 PM »
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waaah hi waaah... der aaye durust aaye Usual Smile
lahoo-luhaan ho kar vo pada hua hai yahaaN,
umang aaj hui yuN apaNg dekhte haiN...
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Waaaaaaaaj taish ji behtareeen peshkash...sabhi ashaar bahut khoooooooob hai par yeh ashaar bahut pasand aaye..

ajeeb hai ye paheli bhi ishq ki o sanam,
suraNg roz nayi ik suraNg dekhte haiN...

lahoo-luhaan ho kar vo pada hua hai yahaaN,
umang aaj hui yuN apaNg dekhte haiN...

jo napasand samajh ko ye dil vahi kare hai...
dil-o-dimaag ki ulfat meN juNg dehte haiN..
  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause...Hazaron dili daad is khoob kalaam par...
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«Reply #4 on: September 03, 2013, 03:43:16 PM »
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behtreeen likha hai taish ji...bahut hi badhya
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«Reply #5 on: September 03, 2013, 03:54:27 PM »
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Matla behad khoobsurat laga mujhe..

kamaal ki soch hai..
bahut badhiya Taish jee
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«Reply #6 on: September 03, 2013, 05:10:42 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on September 03, 2013, 02:28:33 PM
waah waah qaafiyo kaa selection ghajab kaa hai dheron daad

saini sir aapko kosish pasand aayi, yahi bahut hai mere liye, behad khushi ye jaan kar,, bas aage v aap yuNhi saath aur aashirwaad dete raheN...
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«Reply #7 on: September 03, 2013, 05:40:41 PM »
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nahi taish bhai baar baar maafi nai mil sakti hain ,=))

bazm me nahi aane ki saza milegi,, saza ye hai ke pabandi se ana padega,
khair masrufiyat wajah hai to phir maaf kiya,

jo napasand samajh ko ye dil vahi kare hai...
dil-o-dimaag ki ulfat meN juNg dehte haiN..


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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2013, 08:15:54 PM »
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waah waah waah waah kyaa baat hai Taish ji, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #9 on: September 03, 2013, 09:09:34 PM »
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Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #10 on: September 03, 2013, 09:36:16 PM »
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waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob, welcome back.
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«Reply #11 on: September 04, 2013, 12:25:13 AM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on September 03, 2013, 02:29:01 PM
waaah hi waaah... der aaye durust aaye Usual Smile
lahoo-luhaan ho kar vo pada hua hai yahaaN,
umang aaj hui yuN apaNg dekhte haiN...
har baar ki tarha umdah kalaam  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bhai jaan tareef aur saath ka bahut bahut shukriya janaab... bas aage bhi aap yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheN...
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Quote from: samnoj on September 03, 2013, 03:43:16 PM
behtreeen likha hai taish ji...bahut hi badhya

samnoj saaheb bahut bahut shukriya hausla afzaayi ka, bas aage v yuNhi saath dete raheN...
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«Reply #13 on: September 04, 2013, 09:17:36 AM »
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bahut khoob, dhero daad
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«Reply #14 on: September 04, 2013, 01:27:13 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on September 03, 2013, 02:54:53 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
Waaaaaaaaj taish ji behtareeen peshkash...sabhi ashaar bahut khoooooooob hai par yeh ashaar bahut pasand aaye..

ajeeb hai ye paheli bhi ishq ki o sanam,
suraNg roz nayi ik suraNg dekhte haiN...

lahoo-luhaan ho kar vo pada hua hai yahaaN,
umang aaj hui yuN apaNg dekhte haiN...

jo napasand samajh ko ye dil vahi kare hai...
dil-o-dimaag ki ulfat meN juNg dehte haiN..
  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause...Hazaron dili daad is khoob kalaam par...

aqsh ji aapki duaayeN sar aaNkhon pe,bas yuNhi saath deti rahen aap, yahi iltizaa hai...!!
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