Taish- vo panchi aur na ab vo PATANG dekhte haiN...!!

by ghayal_shayar on September 03, 2013, 02:11:14 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 04, 2013, 03:54:02 PM »
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lajawaab .. umdaa behad umda.. waah kya baat hai taish ji..

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aaj bhi na aaya dilbar ke uske intezar me..

har gali ko hoke malang dekhte hai..
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«Reply #16 on: September 04, 2013, 08:12:50 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on September 03, 2013, 03:54:27 PM
Matla behad khoobsurat laga mujhe..

kamaal ki soch hai..
bahut badhiya Taish jee

mukesh sir ji bahut bahut shukriya, mujhe to shaq tha ki ye khayal kisi tak pahuNchega bhi ya nahiN, bas yuNhi aage bhi aashirwaad dete raheN...
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«Reply #17 on: September 04, 2013, 08:26:15 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on September 03, 2013, 02:11:14 PM
Bazm ko mera aadaab, kuch waqt se gaayab rehne ke liye muafi ka talabgara huN, par mashroofiyat thodi jyada rahi haal meN... Ek alag khayal ko pesh kar raha huN, umeed karta huN ki aap sab ko pasand aayegaa...

haya ka roz naya ek raNg dekhte hain,
yuN jab kabhi bhi use tere saNg dekhte haiN...

hawa ka badla hua ek rang dekhte haiN,
vo panchi aur na ab vo pataNg dekhte haiN...

ajeeb hai ye paheli bhi ishq ki o sanam,
suraNg roz nayi ik suraNg dekhte haiN...
i could not underestand the above sher,sir
lahoo-luhaan ho kar vo pada hua hai yahaaN,
umang aaj hui yuN apaNg dekhte haiN...
very very nicesher, sir
jo napasand samajh ko ye dil vahi kare hai...
dil-o-dimaag ki ulfat meN juNg dehte haiN..

sataate haiN to kabhi rooth jaate mere sanam,
vo dhaNg dhaNg mere raNg dhaNg dekhte haiN

vo shaqs chain se tha zindagi meN soya nahi,
qafan meN 'taish' ke tooti palaNg dekhte haiN...


gr88888888888,sir
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«Reply #18 on: September 05, 2013, 12:41:09 AM »
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Quote from: sahal on September 03, 2013, 05:40:41 PM
nahi taish bhai baar baar maafi nai mil sakti hain ,=))

bazm me nahi aane ki saza milegi,, saza ye hai ke pabandi se ana padega,
khair masrufiyat wajah hai to phir maaf kiya,

jo napasand samajh ko ye dil vahi kare hai...
dil-o-dimaag ki ulfat meN juNg dehte haiN..


is misre per barhaa daad ,umda khayaal se labraiz,
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sahal saaheb bahut bahut shukriya janaab, muaaf karne ke liye aur kosish ko pasand karne ke liye, bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath dete raheN... Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: September 05, 2013, 04:14:06 PM »
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 Taish Sahaab Aadaab... !


Ajab hi tajurbe ki fankaari ki hai janab achchi kalaam huyi hai aur yeH quoted ashaar toH behad laa jawaab huye haiN...

Naya sa kafiyaa hai khoob adaa kiya hai aapne...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...


Quote from: Taish on September 03, 2013, 02:11:14 PM




hawa ka badla hua ek rang dekhte haiN,
vo panchi aur na ab vo pataNg dekhte haiN...
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lahoo-luhaan ho kar vo pada hua hai yahaaN,
umang aaj hui yuN apaNg dekhte haiN...

jo napasand samajh ko ye dil vahi kare hai...
dil-o-dimaag ki ulfat meN juNg dehte haiN..

sataate haiN to kabhi rooth jaate mere sanam,
vo dhaNg dhaNg mere raNg dhaNg dekhte haiN
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«Reply #20 on: September 05, 2013, 10:51:19 PM »
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hriday bhai saath aur hausla afzaayi ka shukriya bas aage bhi aap yuNhi saath dete raheN...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: September 06, 2013, 10:45:13 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on September 03, 2013, 09:09:34 PM
Bahut Khoob.

sagar saaheb tareef ka shukriya... Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: September 07, 2013, 05:07:53 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on September 03, 2013, 09:36:16 PM
waah waah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob, welcome back.

tareff aur saath ka behad hsukriya iftakhar sahaeb bas yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheN...
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«Reply #23 on: September 07, 2013, 05:08:45 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on September 04, 2013, 09:17:36 AM
bahut khoob, dhero daad

bahukhandi saaheb bahut bahut shukriya janaab... Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: September 07, 2013, 05:09:44 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on September 04, 2013, 03:54:02 PM
lajawaab .. umdaa behad umda.. waah kya baat hai taish ji..

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aaj bhi na aaya dilbar ke uske intezar me..

har gali ko hoke malang dekhte hai..


touhid miyaaN bhut bahut shukriya is inayat ke liye.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: September 07, 2013, 05:10:16 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on September 04, 2013, 08:26:15 PM

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thanks sir..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: September 07, 2013, 05:11:49 PM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on September 05, 2013, 04:14:06 PM

 Taish Sahaab Aadaab... !


Ajab hi tajurbe ki fankaari ki hai janab achchi kalaam huyi hai aur yeH quoted ashaar toH behad laa jawaab huye haiN...

Naya sa kafiyaa hai khoob adaa kiya hai aapne...
Is khoob kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez...



janaab aapke jawaab dene ke andaaz ke qaayal hain hum, bas lagta hai ke kuch dhang ka likh diya hoga jo aapko tareef karte dehte haiN, umeed karta huN aapki aisi inayat aage bhi hum par yuNhi bani rahegi...
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«Reply #27 on: September 08, 2013, 08:35:49 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #28 on: September 09, 2013, 10:12:58 AM »
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pasand karne ka shukriya saaheb...!! Usual Smile
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