Taiyyar Hai Qaatil

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 23, 2010, 10:35:27 AM
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Taiyaar hai qaatil kase teer apni kamaa.n mei.n
Rakhna mere Allah mujhe apni amaa.n  mei.n

Dilchaspi hamein kum nahi.n Allah Mia.n  mei.n
Hai lutf hi kuch aur magar Ishq-e-butaa.n mei.n

WO jhoot bhi boley to sadaqat ka guma.n ho
Jaadu hai mere yaar ke andaa-e-Baya.n mei.n

Kyuu.n Waqt-e-ajal, Zaad-e-safar kuchh nahi.n bachta
Kat jaati hai.n Umrei.n Khalish-e-Sood-o-Ziyaa.n mei.n

Paai Hai tabi'at hi faqeerana 'Hasan' Ne
Jo Ahd-e-baharaa.n mei.n wo hi Daur-e-Khia.n mei.n
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«Reply #1 on: December 23, 2010, 10:48:42 AM »
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Bahut Khub Siddiqui Ji
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«Reply #2 on: December 23, 2010, 11:21:36 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2010, 08:30:56 PM »
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Good one
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«Reply #4 on: February 17, 2011, 07:30:06 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 23, 2010, 10:35:27 AM
Taiyaar hai qaatil kase teer apni kamaa.n mei.n
Rakhna mere Allah mujhe apni amaa.n  mei.n

Dilchaspi hamein kum nahi.n Allah Mia.n  mei.n
Hai lutf hi kuch aur magar Ishq-e-butaa.n mei.n

WO jhoot bhi boley to sadaqat ka guma.n ho
Jaadu hai mere yaar ke andaa-e-Baya.n mei.n

Kyuu.n Waqt-e-ajal, Zaad-e-safar kuchh nahi.n bachta
Kat jaati hai.n Umrei.n Khalish-e-Sood-o-Ziyaa.n mei.n

Paai Hai tabi'at hi faqeerana 'Hasan' Ne
Jo Ahd-e-baharaa.n mei.n wo hi Daur-e-Khia.n mei.n


BAHUT KHOOB SIDDIQUI SAHAB  BEHTRIN
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«Reply #5 on: April 10, 2011, 05:36:23 PM »
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Sabhi Dosto.n ko Hauslaafai ke liye bahut bahut Shukria.F.H.Siddiqui
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«Reply #6 on: June 11, 2011, 12:26:23 PM »
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    siddiqui sahab aapka likha hua 2-sher mujhe kufriya laga. kya aap iss sher ko mazed waazey kar sakte hain.
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«Reply #7 on: June 12, 2011, 04:19:09 AM »
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Adil saheb,Yeh she'r kufriya nahee.n Ishqia hai .Aap khud shaair hai.n aur mera ye bataana theek to nahii.n lagta,lekin wazaahat ke taur per arz hai ki Ghazal mei.n musta'mil alfaaz aksar symbolic hote hai.n aur unnka 'purely literal' maani lena munasib nahi.n hai.Mere khayal se iss se zyaada wazaahat ki zaroorat nahi.n hai.Aap ka ek adabi tashweesh ke izhaar ke liye shukriya.
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«Reply #8 on: June 12, 2011, 04:28:41 AM »
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siddiqui ji bahut khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #9 on: June 12, 2011, 05:37:18 AM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 23, 2010, 10:35:27 AM
Taiyaar hai qaatil kase teer apni kamaa.n mei.n
Rakhna mere Allah mujhe apni amaa.n  mei.n

Dilchaspi hamein kum nahi.n Allah Mia.n  mei.n
Hai lutf hi kuch aur magar Ishq-e-butaa.n mei.n

WO jhoot bhi boley to sadaqat ka guma.n ho
Jaadu hai mere yaar ke andaa-e-Baya.n mei.n

Kyuu.n Waqt-e-ajal, Zaad-e-safar kuchh nahi.n bachta
Kat jaati hai.n Umrei.n Khalish-e-Sood-o-Ziyaa.n mei.n

Paai Hai tabi'at hi faqeerana 'Hasan' Ne
Jo Ahd-e-baharaa.n mei.n wo hi Daur-e-Khia.n mei.n

Very Impressive ... !
Nice Creation .... !

dil se daad qubuul KareN ... Siddiqui Sahab !
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«Reply #10 on: June 12, 2011, 07:22:01 AM »
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 Suresh sdangwan ji,hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.Khush rahiye....Hasan
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«Reply #11 on: June 12, 2011, 07:25:00 AM »
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Anshumali ji,Ghazal pasand farmaane aur hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya. FHSiddiqui
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«Reply #12 on: June 17, 2011, 10:18:56 AM »
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wah wah wah F.H. Siddiqui Saheb wah. Kya ghazal hai janab maza aa gaya. Aapke ashaar meiN jo tarz-e-takallum hai uski geeraii aur gahraaii bahut zabardast hai jo sher ki sheriyat ko urooj par pahuNcha deti hai. Aik aisi naghmagi hai jo bheeni bheeni khusboo ki tarah qaari k zehn ko mo.attar kiye rahti hai. Aapki ghazal paRhte hi barjasta ye kahna paRa:

Allah kare aur bhi ho zor zubaN meiN
Andaaz niraala hai tire Tarze-bayaN meiN

Is munfarid, murassa, me.aari ghazal k liye mubarakbaad k saath saath hazaroN daad qubul kijiye.

(waquif ansari)

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 23, 2010, 10:35:27 AM
Taiyaar hai qaatil kase teer apni kamaa.n mei.n
Rakhna mere Allah mujhe apni amaa.n  mei.n

Dilchaspi hamein kum nahi.n Allah Mia.n  mei.n
Hai lutf hi kuch aur magar Ishq-e-butaa.n mei.n

WO jhoot bhi boley to sadaqat ka guma.n ho
Jaadu hai mere yaar ke andaa-e-Baya.n mei.n

Kyuu.n Waqt-e-ajal, Zaad-e-safar kuchh nahi.n bachta
Kat jaati hai.n Umrei.n Khalish-e-Sood-o-Ziyaa.n mei.n

Paai Hai tabi'at hi faqeerana 'Hasan' Ne
Jo Ahd-e-baharaa.n mei.n wo hi Daur-e-Khia.n mei.n
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«Reply #13 on: June 18, 2011, 05:03:24 AM »
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Janab Waquif Ansari saheb,Aap ki purkhuloos tahreer ke liye bahut mamnoon hoo.n. Aap jaise me'yaari shaair aur fun-shinaas qaari se daad paana apni khush-qismati samajhta hoo.n.Faraakh-dili aur khuloos ke paikar aap ke tabsire ke liye tah e dil se shukriya.FHSiddiqui     
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«Reply #14 on: February 08, 2012, 04:52:56 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hasan Sir
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