Takleef Jaati Nahin......!!

by Talat on July 06, 2009, 05:24:09 PM
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«Reply #15 on: July 07, 2009, 12:57:57 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 06, 2009, 05:27:27 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah kaya baat hai Celmira.. ek ek line kamaal ki likhi hai apne... Good work, Good Creation!!!

Thanks so much Pooja... Bohot bohot shukriya aapko pasand aayi ye ghazal.
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«Reply #16 on: July 07, 2009, 01:04:46 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on July 06, 2009, 05:29:40 PM
Wahhh...
Bahut bahut achhe. Really every word is framed so beautifully, like a garland of pearl...

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Thanks so much Angel...Thanks for this lovely appreciation Usual Smile
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«Reply #17 on: July 07, 2009, 01:17:23 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on July 06, 2009, 05:35:27 PM
Wonderful Gazal dear Talat   Applause Applause A++++++  Thumbs UP Usual Smile

LOL Roja dear   Giggle Giggle

Thanks so much dear.
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«Reply #18 on: July 07, 2009, 01:42:33 PM »
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Talat ji aapne bohot hi khubsurat Gazal likhi hai,,, Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: July 07, 2009, 03:25:04 PM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on July 06, 2009, 06:06:40 PM
bahut khoob Celmira ji......pahli line hi dil ko chu gayi......
takleef is dil se jaati nahi.....sach me bahut khub
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks so much Pops...bohot bohot shukriya dear.
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«Reply #20 on: July 07, 2009, 03:33:01 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 06, 2009, 05:24:09 PM


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Talat! It's lovely!  Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
             - abd bundeli
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«Reply #21 on: July 07, 2009, 03:33:28 PM »
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Waah  Di bahoot Bahoot Pyaari Gazal likhi hai aapne. ahamesha ki tarah too good. Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: July 08, 2009, 03:21:32 AM »
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Hi Talat,
Tareef ke liye kuch likhu to kam hi hoga !!!

Phir bhi....bahot bahot hi khubsurat ghazal hai.....
It is a simple & beautiful ghazal.
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«Reply #23 on: July 08, 2009, 05:48:53 AM »
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bahut achche talat di kya khoob kaha hai aapne...........pad kar mazaa aa gaya
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«Reply #24 on: July 08, 2009, 08:19:54 AM »
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Celmira Ji,

Bohot Khoob
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«Reply #25 on: July 08, 2009, 10:25:02 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on July 06, 2009, 06:07:37 PM
Wah wah Kya Baat hai Talat Ji.. Yeh Mohabbat kahun Ya dard Kahun..? aapki Is Gazal Ke Har lafz Me Mohabbat aur Dard dono hi Bikhre hue hain..!! Waqai Behad Khubsoorat aur Touching Gazal hai....... Bahut Bahut Khoooooob talat Ji.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karen.......   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**

Theek kaha Vicky..ye dard bhi hai aur mohabbat bhi......Thanks so much for always reading and appreciating my work...Thanks a lot Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: July 09, 2009, 08:11:04 AM »
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Quote from: qadeertoopchii on July 06, 2009, 07:07:52 PM
subhan allah talat bahen kya pakiza ahesasat ko piroya gaya .. bahoth qoob tarif ke liye alfaz shayad kam pad jayen !! waise ghazal ka har ashar beshqimti hai magar ghazal maqta pori ghazalpe savar hai .. bahoth qoob u desrve to be the best shayara at yoindia .. apki ghazal har maqte me maujodgi dekhane ke liye shukriya !! apko shayad acha lag raha hoga hai na !! khush raho abaad raho !!


Qadeertoopchi

Bohot bohot shukriya Qadere Bhai...aap ki zarra nawazi hai jo aapne ye izzat bakshi mujhe....shukrguzar hoon apki.
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«Reply #27 on: July 09, 2009, 01:55:30 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on July 06, 2009, 10:22:24 PM
mashallah talat bhut khoob har sher daad ka haqdaar aur kam daad nhi blki bhut khaas tour par aapki ghazal ke pehle teen shero.n ne bhut hi khoobsurat sama banda hai. god bless u hamesha aise hi likhti rahiye

Aslam Ji, humesha aap isi tarah apne khoobsurat alfaaz se hausla badhate hain....Thanks so much for always reading and my work and for the encouragement...Bohot bohot shukriya  notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #28 on: July 09, 2009, 02:05:38 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on July 07, 2009, 12:18:16 AM
Achhi ghazal hai celmira ji, bohot umda likha hai aap ne..

Tah-e-dil se shukriya Sayyid...yunhi nazr-e-karam banaye rakhiyega Usual Smile
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«Reply #29 on: July 09, 2009, 07:55:35 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on July 07, 2009, 04:30:54 AM
Celmira Ji... Bahut khoobsurat likha hai! Beautiful Creation! Applause

Thanks so much Deepati   icon_flower
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