TALASH...premdeep

by premdeep on February 18, 2013, 11:53:02 AM
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Na jane kis manjil ki aas me huN
phool Jo khilte nahen,unki talash me huN

Saillab to aakar kayi guzar gye
doobne ka dar nahi,abhi bahav me huN

pehchaan kar har shaqks aage bad gaya
kise anjaan ke rukne ke intezaar me huN

Ehsash,dil,jazbaat,sab kaha chale gaye
lagta hai jism ke baazar me hoon

Tanhaiyaan ap hi chali aati hai milne
roshni ki adat nahi andhakar me huN

Har ek anshu ki apni kahani hai
Raat yuN hi guzar gayi kis bekarari me huN

likhna to tujhpe hi chaha tha bas
kalam chalti nahi pet ki lachari me huN

kisi ka karz hum rakhte nahi kabhi
sab ada kar denge bas abhi mehkhanee me huN
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2013, 12:53:39 PM »
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nice.
first sher pe Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2013, 01:37:51 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2013, 04:55:43 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
WAAH WAAH KYAA KEHNE PREMDEEP JI... BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2013, 07:03:07 PM »
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good
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«Reply #5 on: February 19, 2013, 01:02:53 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #6 on: February 19, 2013, 02:10:03 AM »
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khayaalo ki kamee nahee Applause Applause
Tremendous talent.
thoda sa dhyaan de to..chaar chaand lag jaaye..
keep on writing..
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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2013, 03:10:08 AM »
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bhut khub ji
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