Tamaam raat aik khwaab ke liye tarsaa!

by abdbundeli on June 22, 2016, 06:26:18 AM
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Hazaar baar tere dar pai hoke aayaa huun!
Nahin khule hain par kibaarh, roke aayaa huun!

Aik jaw ki taraf chalaa, to, ru-b-ru paayaa:
Baag hain tere itrayez, khoke aayaa huun!

Tamaam raat aik khwaab ke liye tarsaa:
Kabhi to mujhko lage, ab gayaa bulaayaa huun!

Kabhi bhi, khwaab mein bhi, wo nahin dar par aayaa;
Mujhe to aisaa ab lage hai, main paraayaa huun!

Jaagte raat kat rahi hai aaj bhi meree;
Lag rahaa hai, ki, kisee badduaa kaa saayaa huun!

‘Abd’, lage hai, ki, maange se kuchh nahin miltaa;
Wagarnaa, kyoun nahin main kuchh bhi maang paayaa huun?
- abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: June 22, 2016, 07:24:16 AM »
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bahot bahot khoob...bahot achcha likha Abd ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 22, 2016, 10:41:58 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 22, 2016, 06:26:18 AM
Hazaar baar tere dar pai hoke aayaa huun!
Nahin khule hain par kibaarh, roke aayaa huun!

Aik jaw ki taraf chalaa, to, ru-b-ru paayaa:
Baag hain tere itrayez, khoke aayaa huun!

Tamaam raat aik khwaab ke liye tarsaa:
Kabhi to mujhko lage, ab gayaa bulaayaa huun!

Kabhi bhi, khwaab mein bhi, wo nahin dar par aayaa;
Mujhe to aisaa ab lage hai, main paraayaa huun!

Jaagte raat kat rahi hai aaj bhi meree;
Lag rahaa hai, ki, kisee badduaa kaa saayaa huun!

‘Abd’, lage hai, ki, maange se kuchh nahin miltaa;
Wagarnaa, kyoun nahin main kuchh bhi maang paayaa huun?
- abd bundeli
bahut umdah waah.
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«Reply #4 on: June 23, 2016, 10:14:13 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on June 22, 2016, 06:26:18 AM
Hazaar baar tere dar pai hoke aayaa huun!
Nahin khule hain par kibaarh, roke aayaa huun!

   tere aansoo.on me.n wo dard nahin baaqi shaayad!
   warna hamne pathharo.n ko pighalte dekaa hai icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent!!

Aik jaw ki taraf chalaa, to, ru-b-ru paayaa:
Baag hain tere itrayez, khoke aayaa huun!

icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch :-?nahin samjhi !

Tamaam raat aik khwaab ke liye tarsaa:
Kabhi to mujhko lage, ab gayaa bulaayaa huun!

jab talak neend aur khawaab me.n adaawat rahe gi !
aap ki mehmaannawaazi ki yehi haalat rahe gi icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Kabhi bhi, khwaab mein bhi, wo nahin dar par aayaa;
Mujhe to aisaa ab lage hai, main paraayaa huun!

khawaab me.n main aa jaao.n per tumhe.n neend to aaye icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!


Jaagte raat kat rahi hai aaj bhi meree;
Lag rahaa hai, ki, kisee badduaa kaa saayaa huun!

mohabbat wo shaye hai aansoo.on ka zakhiraa de!
dil ko, dhharkano.n ko jaan ko peeraa9pain) de!! icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent icon_silent

‘Abd’, lage hai, ki, maange se kuchh nahin miltaa;
Wagarnaa, kyoun nahin main kuchh bhi maang paayaa huun?

          seyaasat daa.n se seekh lo!
          badal kar andaaz dekh lo Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!

- abd bundeli



bahut hi achi kavish abd ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2016, 06:50:34 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on June 23, 2016, 10:14:13 PM

bahut hi achi kavish abd ji icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Sheba ji, Bahut dinon ba'ad aapke 'comments' padhne ko mile! Dili shukriyah!
Aik jaw ki taraf chalaa, to, ru-b-ru paayaa:
Baag hain tere itrayez, khoke aayaa huun!
Seedhaa-sa ma'aanee hai:-
While I was moving towards one horizon,I found, in front of me, that your gardens are full of fragrances; (but in place of waiting for your arrival over there) I have moved further losing that (lovely) environment behind!   
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Quote from: Sps on June 22, 2016, 07:24:16 AM
bahot bahot khoob...bahot achcha likha Abd ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, janab!
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on June 22, 2016, 07:56:31 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Hriday ji!
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Quote from: surindarn on June 22, 2016, 10:41:58 PM
bahut umdah waah.
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut-bahut shuriyah, Surindarn ji!
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