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TamannaayeN Hazaar Rakhte HaiN
KyoN Hum Dil Biimaar Rakhte HaiN ...
Zaraa bhii Wafaa Ki Ummeed Nahi
Jin Pe Hum Aitabaar Rakhte HaiN ...
Jo ToDkar Rishtaa Aage Nikal Gaye
Unke Liye Dil Beqaraar Rakhte HaiN ...
Jo Chhup Ke KhiDkii Se Dekhte HaiN
Woh Bhii Humse Pyaar Rakhte HaiN ...
Ranjiish Laakh Sahii Shikwaa Koi NahiN
Unke Saath Dostii Barqaraar Rakhte HaiN ...
Laut Kar Aanaa Kabhi Paas "Naresh" Ke
AankhoN MeN Hum Intezaar Rakhte HaiN ...
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2011, 02:56:17 PM » |
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Bahut umda naresh ji...
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2011, 03:12:34 PM » |
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umda se bhi umda he ye to...........
bahot hi khusurat khayal pesh kiye he apne naresh ji........
muje is ppoetry me sabse aacha apke words ka selection laga........sabhi me bahot hi aache lafj use karte he aap per isme kuch khaas hi lage.........
ese hi hum sabko khobsurat poetry sunate rahiyega....
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«Reply #3 on: February 26, 2011, 03:45:17 PM » |
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jo chupp ke khidki se dekhte he-----
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naresh ji aapke har ek sher kamaal ke hain lekin mere faltu dimaag me upar likha ek sher khatak gay.
aapke baaki ke sabhi sher jo ehsaas dete hain ye unme fit nhi bethta. ye khumaariyat sher hai aur aapki ghazal ke baaki sher kuch dard aur bewafai batate hai.
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par bahut khubsurat si ghazal aapki dil khus hota hai aapki ghazlo se.
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meri baat buri lage to naad maafi ka haqdaar hai
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: February 27, 2011, 05:12:35 AM » |
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bhut khub naresh ji
lekin mera bhi wahi sawal hia jo nirala ji ka hai
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«Reply #7 on: February 27, 2011, 08:44:23 AM » |
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TamannaayeN Hazaar Rakhte HaiN
KyoN Hum Dil Biimaar Rakhte HaiN ...
Zaraa bhii Wafaa Ki Ummeed Nahi
Jin Pe Hum Aitabaar Rakhte HaiN ...
Jo ToDkar Rishtaa Aage Nikal Gaye
Unke Liye Dil Beqaraar Rakhte HaiN ...
Jo Chhup Ke KhiDkii Se Dekhte HaiN
Woh Bhii Humse Pyaar Rakhte HaiN ...
Ranjiish Laakh Sahii Shikwaa Koi NahiN
Unke Saath Dostii Barqaraar Rakhte HaiN ...
Laut Kar Aanaa Kabhi Paas "Naresh" Ke
AankhoN MeN Hum Intezaar Rakhte HaiN ...
bahut khoob anshu ji |
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Anshumali
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«Reply #9 on: February 27, 2011, 06:18:33 PM » |
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Bahut umda naresh ji...
Broken Ji ! aapke humeshaa saath aur hauslaa afzaai kaa bahut bahut shukriya ... khush rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #10 on: February 27, 2011, 06:25:39 PM » |
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umda se bhi umda he ye to...........
bahot hi khusurat khayal pesh kiye he apne naresh ji........
muje is ppoetry me sabse aacha apke words ka selection laga........sabhi me bahot hi aache lafj use karte he aap per isme kuch khaas hi lage.........
ese hi hum sabko khobsurat poetry sunate rahiyega....
Matrix Ji ! aapka koshish ko pasand karne ... hauslaa afzaai aur nawaazish kaa bahut bahut shukriyaa ... khush rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... ! |
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«Reply #11 on: February 28, 2011, 06:10:48 AM » |
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«Reply #12 on: February 28, 2011, 07:34:20 AM » |
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jo chupp ke khidki se dekhte he-----
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naresh ji aapke har ek sher kamaal ke hain lekin mere faltu dimaag me upar likha ek sher khatak gay.
aapke baaki ke sabhi sher jo ehsaas dete hain ye unme fit nhi bethta. ye khumaariyat sher hai aur aapki ghazal ke baaki sher kuch dard aur bewafai batate hai.
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par bahut khubsurat si ghazal aapki dil khus hota hai aapki ghazlo se.
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meri baat buri lage to naad maafi ka haqdaar hai
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thanx
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aisaa kuch nahi ...... har ashaar ke aapni story hai ... nirala ji ! aapki pasandegi aur daad kaa bahut bahut shukriya ...... !!!!!!! |
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«Reply #13 on: February 28, 2011, 12:04:47 PM » |
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BAhut Khub Naresh Ji  Rishi Ji ... aapki taareef kaa bahut bahut shukriya ... !!!!!! |
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«Reply #14 on: February 28, 2011, 03:22:42 PM » |
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bhut khub naresh ji
lekin mera bhi wahi sawal hia jo nirala ji ka hai
Aisa kuch nahi hai ... har sher ki apni story hai ... aapke saath kaa bahut bahut shukriya ... khush rahen ... ! duaaoN ke saath ... ! |
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