Tanhaiyo'n me aa ke sada de gaya koi

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on August 02, 2013, 08:49:04 PM
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Tanhaiyo'n me aa ke sadaa de gaya koi
ek zakhm  aur aaj naya de gaya koi

hayat kiya thi faqat maut ki tamanna thi
phir aaj zindagi ki dua de gaya koi

unke aane se suku'n mujhko mayassar hota
lekin mere zakhmo'n ki dawa de gaya koi

aur tarpyengi bhooli hui yaadein uski
kyon aaj mujhe uska pata de gaya koi

is zulm ka charcha to zamane me rahega
mazloom ko ye kaisi saza de gaya koi

                ............S.M.Mahzar
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2013, 09:24:48 PM »
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bahut khoob......... Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2013, 09:44:09 PM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on August 02, 2013, 08:49:04 PM
Tanhaiyo'n me aa ke sadaa de gaya koi
ek zakhm  aur aaj naya de gaya koi

hayat kiya thi faqat maut ki tamanna thi
phir aaj zindagi ki dua de gaya koi

unke aane se suku'n mujhko mayassar hota
lekin mere zakhmo'n ki dawa de gaya koi

aur tarpyengi bhooli hui yaadein uski
kyon aaj mujhe uska pata de gaya koi

is zulm ka charcha to zamane me rahega
mazloom ko ye kaisi saza de gaya koi

                ............S.M.Mahzar

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«Reply #3 on: August 02, 2013, 10:04:41 PM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on August 02, 2013, 08:49:04 PM
Tanhaiyo'n me aa ke sadaa de gaya koi
ek zakhm  aur aaj naya de gaya koi

hayat kiya thi faqat maut ki tamanna thi
phir aaj zindagi ki dua de gaya koi

unke aane se suku'n mujhko mayassar hota
lekin mere zakhmo'n ki dawa de gaya koi

aur tarpyengi bhooli hui yaadein uski
kyon aaj mujhe uska pata de gaya koi

is zulm ka charcha to zamane me rahega
mazloom ko ye kaisi saza de gaya koi

                ............S.M.Mahzar

wah wah wah mazhar sahab.......!
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«Reply #4 on: August 02, 2013, 10:25:46 PM »
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waah waah waah waah waah Mazhar ji, kyaa kehne , bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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bahut khoob h, Mahzar saheb , bahut achhi ghazal hai . dili mubarakbad.
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«Reply #6 on: August 02, 2013, 10:27:48 PM »
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ab ye kahnaa rau de gayaa koi
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«Reply #7 on: August 02, 2013, 11:09:40 PM »
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waaaaaaaah mazhar sahab bahut bahut bahut hi khooob peshkash rahi. is khoob kalam par hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega...
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Quote from: Miraj. on August 02, 2013, 09:24:48 PM
bahut khoob......... Applause Applause
Miraj saheb,
           Bahut Bahut Shakriya............ 
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        qalb saheb,
                 clapping aur icon_flower ke zariye ki gayi tareef ka shukrguzar hoon................
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«Reply #10 on: August 02, 2013, 11:47:23 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on August 02, 2013, 10:04:41 PM

wah wah wah mazhar sahab.......!
sheba ji,
         bahut bahut shukriya...............
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«Reply #11 on: August 02, 2013, 11:49:23 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 02, 2013, 10:25:46 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah waah Mazhar ji, kyaa kehne , bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
Hriday ji,
          Hriday se aapka shukriya ada karta hoon.........
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«Reply #12 on: August 02, 2013, 11:51:03 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on August 02, 2013, 10:26:38 PM
bahut khoob h, Mahzar saheb , bahut achhi ghazal hai . dili mubarakbad.
F.H.Siddiqui Saheb,
                 behad shukrguzar hoon aapka..............
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Quote from: sksaini4 on August 02, 2013, 10:27:48 PM
ab ye kahnaa rau de gayaa koi
Dr.S.K.Saini Saheb,
              Ghazal ke liye "rau" ataa karne ka bahut bahut shukriya, mamnoon hoon ki aap ne is nacheez ko is laiq samjha..........................
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Quote from: aqsh on August 02, 2013, 11:09:40 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waaaaaaaah mazhar sahab bahut bahut bahut hi khooob peshkash rahi. is khoob kalam par hazaron dili daad qubool kijiyega...
aqsh sahiba,
           aapka behad mamnoon wa mashkoor hoon ki aap ne meri ghazal ki tareef me comment karne ki zahmat gawara farmayi, bahut bahut shukriya.......................
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