Tanhaiyo'n me aa ke sada de gaya koi

by Syed Mohd Mahzar on August 02, 2013, 08:49:04 PM
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«Reply #15 on: August 03, 2013, 12:29:49 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on August 02, 2013, 08:49:04 PM
Tanhaiyo'n me aa ke sadaa de gaya koi
ek zakhm  aur aaj naya de gaya koi

hayat kiya thi faqat maut ki tamanna thi
phir aaj zindagi ki dua de gaya koi

unke aane se suku'n mujhko mayassar hota
lekin mere zakhmo'n ki dawa de gaya koi

aur tarpyengi bhooli hui yaadein uski
kyon aaj mujhe uska pata de gaya koi

is zulm ka charcha to zamane me rahega
charcha is zulm ki to zamaane mein rahegi.
mazloom ko ye kaisi saza de gaya koi

                ............S.M.Mahzar


very nice ,sir
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«Reply #16 on: August 03, 2013, 12:37:37 AM »
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is zulm ka charcha to zamane me rahega
mazloom ko ye kaisi saza de gaya koi

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«Reply #17 on: August 03, 2013, 12:53:43 AM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on August 03, 2013, 12:29:49 AM

very nice ,sir
   marhoom bahayaat saheb,
                        bahut bahut shukriya..........
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«Reply #18 on: August 03, 2013, 12:55:39 AM »
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Quote from: Ram Saraswat on August 03, 2013, 12:37:37 AM
is zulm ka charcha to zamane me rahega
mazloom ko ye kaisi saza de gaya koi

Waah bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause
Ram Saraswat saheb,
             bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaaaaaaa
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«Reply #19 on: August 03, 2013, 12:57:23 AM »
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very nice...
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«Reply #20 on: August 03, 2013, 12:58:51 AM »
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Quote from: Syed Mohd Mahzar on August 02, 2013, 08:49:04 PM
Tanhaiyo'n me aa ke sadaa de gaya koi
ek zakhm  aur aaj naya de gaya koi

hayat kiya thi faqat maut ki tamanna thi
phir aaj zindagi ki dua de gaya koi

unke aane se suku'n mujhko mayassar hota
lekin mere zakhmo'n ki dawa de gaya koi

aur tarpyengi bhooli hui yaadein uski
kyon aaj mujhe uska pata de gaya koi

is zulm ka charcha to zamane me rahega
mazloom ko ye kaisi saza de gaya koi

                ............S.M.Mahzar

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah janaab her sher per ek rau per aisa nahin kar sakta ek rahu hi de sakta hoon Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #21 on: August 03, 2013, 01:09:03 AM »
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«Reply #22 on: August 03, 2013, 03:17:26 AM »
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badhia ehsasaat se saja hua kalaam! daad!
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«Reply #23 on: August 03, 2013, 02:49:54 PM »
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waah waah syed ji bahut khoob.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: August 04, 2013, 03:44:27 PM »
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Quote from: nishi gahlaut on August 03, 2013, 12:57:23 AM
very nice...
nishi gahlaut ji,
                       many many thanks..............
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«Reply #26 on: August 04, 2013, 03:52:00 PM »
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khubsurat behatareen...lajwab gazal mahzar sahbh......har ek sher lajawab.....khubsurat gazal ke liye hazaron dilli daad qabul krrein...
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Quote from: @Kaash on August 03, 2013, 03:17:26 AM
badhia ehsasaat se saja hua kalaam! daad!
Kaash saheb,
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