Tar Batar Hone Ke Baad / तर-बतर होने के बाद.......Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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आँसुओं से अपना दामन तर-बतर होने के बाद
खुश्क होता है हवाओं को ख़बर होने के बाद
 
ये हमारी बेबसी है या मुक़द्दर का सितम
क़ैद होकर रह गए बे-बालो-पर होने के बाद
 
अहले महफ़िल ने तो की थी हमसे फरमाइश बहुत
गीत कोई कैसे गाते नौहागर होने के बाद
 
लिखने वाले ने कुछ ऐसी दास्ताने-ग़म लिखी
पढ़ने वाले रो पड़े दिल पर असर होने के बाद
 
सुब्ह दम सूरज की किरनो का असर भी खूब है
दर्दे-दिल कुछ कम हुआ है रात भर होने के बाद
 
खुश हुआ दिल उन लबों पर इक तबस्सुम देखकर
लौट आयीं फिर से खुशियाँ चश्म तर होने के बाद

हो गया जीने का सामाँ मिल गई मंज़िल 'रक़ीब'
दर तेरा पाया जबीं ने दर-बदर होने के बाद

--- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

aaNnsuoN se apna daaman tar-batar hone ke baad
khusk hota hai hawaaoN ko khabar hone ke baad
 
ye hamaaree bebasee hai ya muqaddar ka sitam
qaid hokar rah gaye be-baalo-par hone ke baad

ahle mahfil ne to kee thee hamse farmaaish bahut
geet koyee kaise gaate nauhagar hone ke baad

likhne waale ne kuchh aaisee daastaane-gam likhee
padhne waale ro pade dil par asar hone ke baad

subh dam sooraj ki kirno ka asar bhi khoob hai
dared-dil kuchh kam hua hai raat bhar hone ke baad
 
khush hua dil un laboN par ik tabassum dekhkar
laut aayeeN fir se khushiyaaN chashm tar hone ke baad

ho gaya jeene ka saamaaN mil gayee manzil ‘Raqeeb’
dar tera paaya jabeeN ne dar-badar hone ke baad

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’
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«Reply #1 on: November 22, 2014, 07:10:46 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on November 22, 2014, 06:14:32 AM

आँसुओं से अपना दामन तर-बतर होने के बाद
खुश्क होता है हवाओं को ख़बर होने के बाद
 
ये हमारी बेबसी है या मुक़द्दर का सितम
क़ैद होकर रह गए बे-बालो-पर होने के बाद
 
अहले महफ़िल ने तो की थी हमसे फरमाइश बहुत
गीत कोई कैसे गाते नौहागर होने के बाद
 
लिखने वाले ने कुछ ऐसी दास्ताने-ग़म लिखी
पढ़ने वाले रो पड़े दिल पर असर होने के बाद
 
सुब्ह दम सूरज की किरनो का असर भी खूब है
दर्दे-दिल कुछ कम हुआ है रात भर होने के बाद
 
खुश हुआ दिल उन लबों पर इक तबस्सुम देखकर
लौट आयीं फिर से खुशियाँ चश्म तर होने के बाद

हो गया जीने का सामाँ मिल गई मंज़िल 'रक़ीब'
दर तेरा पाया जबीं ने दर-बदर होने के बाद

--- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

aaNnsuoN se apna daaman tar-batar hone ke baad
khusk hota hai hawaaoN ko khabar hone ke baad
 
ye hamaaree bebasee hai ya muqaddar ka sitam
qaid hokar rah gaye be-baalo-par hone ke baad

ahle mahfil ne to kee thee hamse farmaaish bahut
geet koyee kaise gaate nauhagar hone ke baad

likhne waale ne kuchh aaisee daastaane-gam likhee
padhne waale ro pade dil par asar hone ke baad

subh dam sooraj ki kirno ka asar bhi khoob hai
dared-dil kuchh kam hua hai raat bhar hone ke baad
 
khush hua dil un laboN par ik tabassum dekhkar
laut aayeeN fir se khushiyaaN chashm tar hone ke baad

ho gaya jeene ka saamaaN mil gayee manzil ‘Raqeeb’
dar tera paaya jabeeN ne dar-badar hone ke baad

--- Satish Shukla ‘Raqeeb’




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bahut khub satishji........
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Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya ..... QALB SAHAB .....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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bahut khub satishji........

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya ..... mann.mann Sahab / Sahiba ....Raqeeb Lucknowi
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah sir laajawaab, bahut achhi ghazal kahi hai, dheroN daad aur ek Rau.
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Nihaayat khoobsurat Shukla Sahib,dheron daad.
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behad khoobsoorat waah waah satish ji

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WAH KYA ACHCHI GHAZAL HAI,KITNE ACHCHE SHEIR HAIN
KAHTA HAI SHEIR AISE SHAIR BAAHUNAR HONE KE BAAD.

RAQEEB BHAI, MUBARAKBAD.              SHAHID HASAN 'SHAHID'
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Bahut shukriya ...... Raqeeb
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Khubsurat ghazal, wah waah

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WAH KYA ACHCHI GHAZAL HAI,KITNE ACHCHE SHEIR HAIN
KAHTA HAI SHEIR AISE SHAIR BAAHUNAR HONE KE BAAD.

RAQEEB BHAI, MUBARAKBAD.              SHAHID HASAN 'SHAHID'

Nazre inaayat aur hausala afzai ka bahut shukriya Mohtaram Shahid Hasan Sahib ...... Raqeeb Lucknowi
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