TASSVUR

by jugnu on August 05, 2005, 08:43:46 AM
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JAB TASSVUR MERA CHUPKE SE TUJHE CHHOO AAYE,
APNI HAR SAANS SE MUJHKO TERI KHUSBOO AAYE !

MASHGALA AB HAI MERA CHAAND KO TAKTE REHNA-2,
RAAT BHAR CHAIN NA TUJH BN KISI PELHOO AAYE !

GHANTIYAN BAJANE LAGEN HIZAR KE SANATTE MEIN-2,
GUNGUNATA HUA AISE MAIN AGAR TU AAYE !

JAB KABHI GARDISHEN-DOURAN NE SATAYA MUJKO-2,
MERE ZANIB TERE PHELE HUE BAAJU AAYE !

JAB TASSVUR MERA CHUPKE SE TUJHE CHHOO AAYE-2,
APNI HAR SAANS SE MUJHKO TERI KHUSBOO AAYE ! (N/M)
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Aman_rahi
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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2005, 09:14:31 AM »
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Ghulam ali sahab ki gayi hui gazal....mere dil ke aziz hai.....

Shukriya Jugnu ji ise post karne ke liye....
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arzoo22
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«Reply #2 on: September 12, 2005, 09:10:02 PM »
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AMAZING ghazal...i like that soo much

Tassavur  me challe aate,tumhara kya jaata.
tumhara parda rehta ,  hamme deedar hojata

take care jugnu
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jugnu
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«Reply #3 on: September 13, 2005, 08:51:57 AM »
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thanks Aarzoo Ji

rahte hain jo hamare tassvurr mein sada
woh aayen humse milne yeh zaroori to nahin
uthte hain lakhon hath khuda ke dar pe
aarzoo sabki poori ho yeh zaroori to nahin !
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«Reply #4 on: September 13, 2005, 08:22:05 PM »
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ur welcome Jugnu
and UWOW..boht achi likha, especially last line,,just kidding :D  ..
Pura shayr boht  pasand aya  mujhe...
keep writing ok Usual Smile

dua me yaad rakhna
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«Reply #5 on: September 14, 2005, 09:38:19 AM »
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Thanx once again Arzoo ji,

yaad mein unki is kadar khoye,
vajood apna hum bhool gaye,
woh kahte hain dua mein yaad rakhna,
hum andaaz dua ka bhool gaye !
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«Reply #6 on: September 15, 2005, 10:43:37 PM »
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Thanx once again Arzoo ji,

yaad mein unki is kadar khoye,
vajood apna hum bhool gaye,
woh kahte hain dua mein yaad rakhna,
hum andaaz dua ka bhool gaye !


WOOOOWWW Amazing..... ab kuch meri taraf se bhi jugnu ji  Usual Smile
 
Wo kho gaye hamari yaad me kuch istarha,
na hosh raha na wo khud raha.
Ab kese maangu unkeliye dua,
jinki duao ke sahare mera ashiaana raha...
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jugnu
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«Reply #7 on: September 16, 2005, 11:14:54 AM »
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laajawab kar diya aapne, sach badi acchi wording hai "wonderfull"
(kuch koshish humne bhi ki hai)

giri bijali ashiane pe mere iska gam nahin humen,
dehkate sholon ki unpe bhi aayi aacnh hum seh na sake,
gawara thi badi shiddat se unki rusvaiyan humen,
unki aankhon se jo chalka vo pyar hum seh na sake !
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natural
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«Reply #8 on: September 16, 2005, 12:50:51 PM »
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laajawab kar diya aapne, sach badi acchi wording hai "wonderfull"
(kuch koshish humne bhi ki hai)

giri bijali ashiane pe mere iska gam nahin humen,
dehkate sholon ki unpe bhi aayi aacnh hum seh na sake,
gawara thi badi shiddat se unki rusvaiyan humen,
unki aankhon se jo chalka vo pyar hum seh na sake !

Wow........ Achha likha hai.................  Usual Smile
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arzoo22
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«Reply #9 on: September 17, 2005, 10:10:07 PM »
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hmmmmmmmmmmmm Puzzled !
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arzoo22
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«Reply #10 on: October 05, 2005, 09:38:27 PM »
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Aankho ko intizaar ki adat nahi rahi.............
shayad hamme unse mohabbat nahi rahi.........
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«Reply #11 on: October 19, 2005, 08:56:32 PM »
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tujhe pane se zindagi ki intiha hoti,
isliye zindagi mein tujhe paa na saka.
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