Tasveer Dil MeN Saja Lete Hain "Khwahish"

by khwaish on March 07, 2013, 07:55:56 PM
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Yeh Sach Hai Ke Apni Kismat Par Apna Zor Nahi
Par Yuhi Haar Maan jaaye, Dil Itna Kamzor Nahi

          ~~~Khwahish~~~



Tumne Pucha To Nahi Par Hum Bataa Dete Hain
Chot Khaane Wale Aksar Muskuraa Dete Hain

Khamosh  Behte Hue Paani Ke Swabhav Par na Jaa
Zid Par  Aaye To Yeh Kashti Ko Dooba Dete Hain

Asaan Nahi Mohabbat meN Mar Mitna Sanam..!!
Naa Jaane Kaise Parwaane Khud Ko Mita Dete Hain

Rishte Sirf Nibhte Hai Wahaan Jab Dil Se Dil mile
Bhoolne Wale Ek Na Ek Din Sab Kuch Bhoola Dete Hain

Humne Dekhi Hai Yeh Duniya bahut Hi Kareeb Se..!!!!
Chup Rehne Wale Ashq Aankhon MeN Chupa Lete Hain

Usse Bichadkar Ab Barso Beet Gaye Hain "Khwahish"
jab Yaad Aaye uskee, Tasveer Dil MeN Sajaa Lete Hain


          ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 07, 2013, 08:10:11 PM »
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Wow!!! It's awesome!!!! Very Very Emotional!!! Too Good!!! Har ek ashaar khusbsurat aur sachaa hai!!!!




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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2013, 08:18:08 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 07, 2013, 08:28:20 PM »
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Waaaaaaah! Khwaish ji. kya kehne aapki is ghazal ke. bade pyaar ashaar rahe. bahut khoob andaaz e bayani thi . dil se mubarakbad qubool kare.Yeh sher to bahut khoob rahe.

Khamosh Behte Hue Paani Ke Swabhav Par na Jaa
Zid Par Aaye To Yeh Kashti Ko Dooba Dete Hain

Rishte Sirf Nibhte Hai Wahaan Jab Dil Se Dil mile
Bhoolne Wale Ek Na Ek Din Sab Kuch Bhoola Dete Hain

Humne Dekhi Hai Yeh Duniya bahut Hi Kareeb Se..!!!!
Chup Rehne Wale Ashq Aankhon MeN Chupa Lete Hain

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Zabardast Buht umda Buht hi Nice,,,,,,,,,

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«Reply #5 on: March 07, 2013, 08:36:11 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: March 07, 2013, 09:34:44 PM »
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 bahut khoob .
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«Reply #7 on: March 07, 2013, 10:08:12 PM »
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bhut khoob!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: March 07, 2013, 10:12:23 PM »
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वाह बहोत ही उम्दा
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«Reply #9 on: March 07, 2013, 11:34:26 PM »
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Yeh Sach Hai Ke Apni Kismat Par Apna Zor Nahi
Par Yuhi Haar Maan jaaye, Dil Itna Kamzor Nahi

          ~~~Khwahish~~~



Tumne Pucha To Nahi Par Hum Bataa Dete Hain
Chot Khaane Wale Aksar Muskuraa Dete Hain

Khamosh  Behte Hue Paani Ke Swabhav Par na Jaa
Zid Par  Aaye To Yeh Kashti Ko Dooba Dete Hain

Asaan Nahi Mohabbat meN Mar Mitna Sanam..!!
Naa Jaane Kaise Parwaane Khud Ko Mita Dete Hain

Rishte Sirf Nibhte Hai Wahaan Jab Dil Se Dil mile
Bhoolne Wale Ek Na Ek Din Sab Kuch Bhoola Dete Hain

Humne Dekhi Hai Yeh Duniya bahut Hi Kareeb Se..!!!!
Chup Rehne Wale Ashq Aankhon MeN Chupa Lete Hain

Usse Bichadkar Ab Barso Beet Gaye Hain "Khwahish"
jab Yaad Aaye uskee, Tasveer Dil MeN Sajaa Lete Hain


          ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~


2nd sher khoob raha Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: March 07, 2013, 11:49:18 PM »
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Wow!!! It's awesome!!!! Very Very Emotional!!! Too Good!!! Har ek ashaar khusbsurat aur sachaa hai!!!!




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«Reply #11 on: March 08, 2013, 12:08:59 AM »
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waah waah Khwaish sahab
bht bht aur bht umdaa ghazal
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magr last line me Tasveer dil me sajaa lete hain
ya fir
Tasveer dil se lagaa lete hain
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mai thoda sa practicl aur visible sochta hoon Usual Smile

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
god bless u
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«Reply #12 on: March 08, 2013, 02:07:10 AM »
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kya baat hai khwahish ji bahut badhiya... bahut khoob...

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«Reply #13 on: March 08, 2013, 04:23:10 AM »
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waah ustaad.. maan gaye aapko... ek ke baad ek dhamaakedaar peshkash... aajkal kuch alag hi mazaa aataa hai aapka likhaa padhne mein.. sach mein... bahut bahut achchaa lagaa padh ke... aapke andaaz ki baat hi kuch alag hai.... bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne Khwaish ji....!!!

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wah wah
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