Taza ghazal Jalees Sherwani ki

by wordsmith on March 02, 2009, 12:13:57 PM

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wordsmith

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Mehfil ke members ke liye ek ghazal pesh hai.
arz hai..k

Aayeene mai^n dekha chehra!
Aisa kab thha mera chehra!

Har chehre mai^n aib nikala !
Khud bhi dekho apna chehra!

Terhee merhee chand lakeere^n!
Duniya daari wala chehra!

Jis chehre par dard likha ho!
Hoga bas wo sachcha chehra!

Saara dard bhula deta hai!
Har bachche ka hansta chehra!

Shaam dhale wo bik jaata hai!
Laali poder wala chehra!

Please give your views.
Jalees Sherwani


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Talat

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Re: Taza ghazal Jalees Sherwani ki

«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2009, 12:25:23 PM »

Bohot hi Khoob Jalees Sherwani Sahab..... Applause


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sanya310

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Re: Taza ghazal Jalees Sherwani ki

«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2009, 12:28:10 PM »

Nice one Jalees ji..


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addicted

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Re: Taza ghazal Jalees Sherwani ki

«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2009, 12:51:54 PM »

achaa likhaa hai Jalees Sherwani shahab


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sajid_ghayel

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Re: Taza ghazal Jalees Sherwani ki

«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2009, 03:14:49 PM »

Subhan_allah jitni tareef ki jaye kam hain Jalees saheb kasam khuda ki maza aa gaya waise to har sher khoob hain par 4th and last sher to bas kya kehne


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pandit

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Re: Taza ghazal Jalees Sherwani ki

«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2009, 04:29:57 PM »

Quote from: wordsmith on March 02, 2009, 12:13:57 PM

Great wordsmith..............


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Roja

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Re: Taza ghazal Jalees Sherwani ki

«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2009, 04:45:47 PM »

Nice 1 wordsmith


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chitralsony

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Re: Taza ghazal Jalees Sherwani ki

«Reply #7 on: March 02, 2009, 05:42:17 PM »

nice one


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Mursleen saqi

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Re: Taza ghazal Jalees Sherwani ki

«Reply #8 on: May 27, 2013, 04:15:56 PM »

Last sher bahut acha hai bahut khoob


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ghayal_shayar

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Re: Taza ghazal Jalees Sherwani ki

«Reply #9 on: May 27, 2013, 05:27:10 PM »

wah bahut khoob ghazal hai, matla to bas kamaal ka hi hai.... saaheb darkhwast hai aapse, ki bazm ko fir se apni kalam ka mezbaan ban.ne ka mauka dijiye...


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Taza ghazal Jalees Sherwani ki

«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2014, 06:16:49 AM »

Aadaab Janab ...!

Waah janab kia kahne waah bahut umda kalaam kahi hai aapne ...l
4th sher aur aakhri sher behad laajawaab rahe...
Is khoobsurat peshkash par humari hazaaroN daad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye ... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye ...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...

Khuda Hafez ...