Tera hi ziker ,baki reh gaya.......Sahal

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                        Tera hi ziker ,baki reh gaya.......Sahal


Tere pyar ka asar ,baki reh gaya,
Wo adhura safar ,baki reh gaya,

Jis modh pe tanha chhoda tune,
Mera dil bekhaber, wahin reh gaya.

Kaha Do kadam to chalo saath mere,
Zalim muskuraker ‘nahin’ keh gaya.

Rait per banaya tha apna aashiyaan,
Lehron se ulajhker kahin beh gaya.

Jaam-e-ishq sab ko pilaya maine,
afsos Pyasa magar,saaqi reh gaya.

Sar-e-bazm hua tazkera ba-wafaon ka,
“Sahal” ek tera hi ziker ,baki reh gaya.
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2013, 08:13:16 PM »
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Excellant ghazal sahal jee. bahut bahut daad
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                        Tera hi ziker ,baki reh gaya.......Sahal


Tere pyar ka asar ,baki reh gaya,
Wo adhura safar ,baki reh gaya,

Jis modh pe tanha chhoda tune,
Mera dil bekhaber, wahin reh gaya.

Kaha Do kadam to chalo saath mere,
Zalim muskuraker ‘nahin’ keh gaya.

Rait per banaya tha apna aashiyaan,
Lehron se ulajhker kahin beh gaya.

Jaam-e-ishq sab ko pilaya maine,
afsos Pyasa magar,saaqi reh gaya.

Sar-e-bazm hua tazkera ba-wafaon ka,
“Sahal” ek tera hi ziker ,baki reh gaya.





wah wah sahal bahut khoob....!
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Excellant ghazal sahal jee. bahut bahut daad
Thankyou ! suman ji..
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Quote from: Sheba on May 01, 2013, 08:25:25 PM

wah wah sahal bahut khoob....!
Thankyou ! sheba ji
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Quote from: sahal on May 01, 2013, 07:58:24 PM

                        Tera hi ziker ,baki reh gaya.......Sahal


Tere pyar ka asar ,baki reh gaya,
Wo adhura safar ,baki reh gaya,

Jis modh pe tanha chhoda tune,
Mera dil bekhaber, wahin reh gaya.

Kaha Do kadam to chalo saath mere,
Zalim muskuraker ‘nahin’ keh gaya.

Rait per banaya tha apna aashiyaan,
Lehron se ulajhker kahin beh gaya.

Jaam-e-ishq sab ko pilaya maine,
afsos Pyasa magar,saaqi reh gaya.

Sar-e-bazm hua tazkera ba-wafaon ka,
“Sahal” ek tera hi ziker ,baki reh gaya.



waah waah laajawaab,............
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                        Tera hi ziker ,baki reh gaya.......Sahal


Tere pyar ka asar ,baki reh gaya,
Wo adhura safar ,baki reh gaya,

Jis modh pe tanha chhoda tune,
Mera dil bekhaber, wahin reh gaya.

Kaha Do kadam to chalo saath mere,
Zalim muskuraker ‘nahin’ keh gaya.

Rait per banaya tha apna aashiyaan,
Lehron se ulajhker kahin beh gaya.

Jaam-e-ishq sab ko pilaya maine,
afsos Pyasa magar,saaqi reh gaya.

Sar-e-bazm hua tazkera ba-wafaon ka,
“Sahal” ek tera hi ziker ,baki reh gaya.




Very nice composition sahal jee..happy9
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waah waah bahot khob
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Waaaaaaah. bahut khoob ghazal rahi sahal. sabhi ashaar khoob rahe. umda peshkash. bahut bahut mubarak ho...

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Bahut badhiya likha hai sahal jee

acche ehsaas lekar aaye hai aap.
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Quote from: sahal on May 01, 2013, 07:58:24 PM

                        Tera hi ziker ,baki reh gaya.......Sahal


Tere pyar ka asar ,baki reh gaya,
Wo adhura safar ,baki reh gaya,

Jis modh pe tanha chhoda tune,
Mera dil bekhaber, wahin reh gaya.

Kaha Do kadam to chalo saath mere,
Zalim muskuraker ‘nahin’ keh gaya.

Rait per banaya tha apna aashiyaan,
Lehron se ulajhker kahin beh gaya.

Jaam-e-ishq sab ko pilaya maine,
afsos Pyasa magar,saaqi reh gaya.

Sar-e-bazm hua tazkera ba-wafaon ka,
“Sahal” ek tera hi ziker ,baki reh gaya.



Jus One Word
        "BEAUTIFUL"
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«Reply #12 on: May 02, 2013, 01:23:59 AM »
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Laajawab!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Bhai Bahut Khoob.
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Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #14 on: May 02, 2013, 02:45:32 AM »
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Wah Bahut Bahut Khub Sahal hi Applause


Tere pyar ka asar ,baki reh gaya,
Wo adhura safar ,baki reh gaya,

shad o aabaad rahiye

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