Tere Aane Se ... ! RADHIKA

by Radhika_2 on March 23, 2011, 08:23:42 AM
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Tere Aane Se Woh Khushi Hui
Chaahate Machal Gai Dabi Hui

Jeetna Aadat Nahi Thi Humari Shayad
Haar Jaate Hai Baazi Jeeti Hui

Uska Parda Ek Bahaana Tha Humse
Nazre UThti Thi Jhuki Hui

Chura Leta Hai Woh Aankh Ka Kajal
Shamaa Bhuj Jaati Hai Phir Jali Hui

Ek Muddat Baad Ye Jana Hamne
Aankhe Uski Bhi Thi Kuch Bhari Hui

Har Siitam Seh Rahi Hai Yu "Radhika"
Soche Kaha Humse Kami Hui
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2011, 09:27:20 AM »
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Quote from: Radhika_2 on March 23, 2011, 08:23:42 AM
Tere Aane Se Woh Khushi Hui
Chaahate Machal Gai Dabi Hui

Jeetna Aadat Nahi Thi Humari Shayad
Haar Jaate Hai Baazi Jeeti Hui

Uska Parda Ek Bahaana Tha Humse
Nazre UThti Thi Jhuki Hui

Chura Leta Hai Woh Aankh Ka Kajal
Shamaa Bhuj Jaati Hai Phir Jali Hui

Ek Muddat Baad Ye Jana Hamne
Aankhe Uski Bhi Thi Kuch Bhari Hui

Har Siitam Seh Rahi Hai Yu "Radhika"
Soche Kaha Humse Kami Hui
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«Reply #2 on: March 23, 2011, 09:34:11 AM »
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Nice poem Radhika ji....... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tera kalaam padh kar wo khushi hui
Kalam meri b likhne ko machal gayi

Haarna tou kabhi seekha he nahi humne
Unki jeet ko bhee haar pehnaaya humne

Sitam kisike sehna he bujdilon ka kaam sakhee
Uljhano se junjh tu karenge sab salaam sakhee

Quote from: Radhika_2 on March 23, 2011, 08:23:42 AM
Tere Aane Se Woh Khushi Hui
Chaahate Machal Gai Dabi Hui

Jeetna Aadat Nahi Thi Humari Shayad
Haar Jaate Hai Baazi Jeeti Hui

Uska Parda Ek Bahaana Tha Humse
Nazre UThti Thi Jhuki Hui

Chura Leta Hai Woh Aankh Ka Kajal
Shamaa Bhuj Jaati Hai Phir Jali Hui

Ek Muddat Baad Ye Jana Hamne
Aankhe Uski Bhi Thi Kuch Bhari Hui

Har Siitam Seh Rahi Hai Yu "Radhika"
Soche Kaha Humse Kami Hui
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«Reply #3 on: March 23, 2011, 11:46:03 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 23, 2011, 12:14:44 PM »
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Quote from: Radhika_2 on March 23, 2011, 08:23:42 AM
Tere Aane Se Woh Khushi Hui
Chaahate Machal Gai Dabi Hui

Jeetna Aadat Nahi Thi Humari Shayad
Haar Jaate Hai Baazi Jeeti Hui

Uska Parda Ek Bahaana Tha Humse
Nazre UThti Thi Jhuki Hui

Chura Leta Hai Woh Aankh Ka Kajal
Shamaa Bhuj Jaati Hai Phir Jali Hui

Ek Muddat Baad Ye Jana Hamne
Aankhe Uski Bhi Thi Kuch Bhari Hui

Har Siitam Seh Rahi Hai Yu "Radhika"
Soche Kaha Humse Kami Hui

ek ek sher dil ko chhuu gaya ... radhika ji ! the best ... !
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«Reply #5 on: March 23, 2011, 12:17:37 PM »
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radhika ji bahut khoob.likhte rahiye.
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«Reply #6 on: March 23, 2011, 12:18:26 PM »
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Fantastic.. Creation... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob likha hai Radikha Ji .. kamaal kita ji !
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«Reply #7 on: March 23, 2011, 12:38:54 PM »
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bht bht khoob radhika ji...
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«Reply #8 on: March 23, 2011, 12:43:27 PM »
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radhika ji jesa aap hamesha likhti he us se kuch alag likha he apne is baar.........bahot khoob........theme bht dilchasp he aur jo words use kiye he wo bhi khoobsurat he.........keep it up ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 23, 2011, 05:19:13 PM »
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Quote from: Radhika_2 on March 23, 2011, 08:23:42 AM
Tere Aane Se Woh Khushi Hui
Chaahate Machal Gai Dabi Hui

Jeetna Aadat Nahi Thi Humari Shayad
Haar Jaate Hai Baazi Jeeti Hui

Uska Parda Ek Bahaana Tha Humse
Nazre UThti Thi Jhuki Hui

Chura Leta Hai Woh Aankh Ka Kajal
Shamaa Bhuj Jaati Hai Phir Jali Hui

Ek Muddat Baad Ye Jana Hamne
Aankhe Uski Bhi Thi Kuch Bhari Hui

Har Siitam Seh Rahi Hai Yu "Radhika"
Soche Kaha Humse Kami Hui

ek ek sher bahut khoob likha hai ... radhika ji !

the best creation .... daad hi daad ji ...... !
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«Reply #10 on: March 23, 2011, 06:01:03 PM »
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radhika ji…radhe radhe Usual Smile
aapki ghazal kya baat kya baat WinkingWinking
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kabhi dil ka shola bhadak uthta hai
kabhi rah jaati hai chingari bhi dabi hui!!

dekh kar mukda unka khil jaati hain kaliyan dil ki
badh jaati hain dhadkane chalne lgti hain saanse bhi ruki hui !!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 23, 2011, 06:40:08 PM »
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Bahut khoob radhika ji..
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«Reply #12 on: March 23, 2011, 08:01:11 PM »
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Radhikaa Jee AadaaB!

Kia kahne Radhikaa jee waah .... bade dino ke baad aapki kisi kalaam par nazar gayi hai... aur yakeen janiye behad khushi huyi.. bahut khoob behad umdaa kalaam kahi hai aapne yeH..

Hume toH yakeeN hi nahi ho raha hai ke yeH kalaam aapne likhi hai ... Usual Smile

         


Quote from: Radhika_2 on March 23, 2011, 08:23:42 AM
Tere Aane Se Woh Khushi Hui
Chaahate Machal Gai Dabi Hui

Waah kia baat hai bahut achcha matla kaha hai.. Daad daad daad           

Jeetna Aadat Nahi Thi Humari Shayad
Haar Jaate Hai Baazi Jeeti Hui

Bahut achcha sher hai daad Usual Smile         

Uska Parda Ek Bahaana Tha Humse
Nazre UThti Thi Jhuki Hui

Behad khoob achcha khayaal hai aur behad sadgi se kaha hai.... Daad Usual Smile
Haan dusre misre meiN aap do takhte badha sakti hai... Usual Smile         

Chura Leta Hai Woh Aankh Ka Kajal
Shamaa Bhuj Jaati Hai Phir Jali Hui

Waah jee waah behad gazab ka sher kaha hai bahut umdaa daad daad daad Usual Smile         

Ek Muddat Baad Ye Jana Hamne
Aankhe Uski Bhi Thi Kuch Bhari Hui

achcha khayaal hai jee daad Usual Smile         

Har Siitam Seh Rahi Hai Yu "Radhika"
Soche Kaha Humse Kami Hui

Bahut khoob bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile
Phir dusre misre meiN aik takhta badha sakti hai aap Usual Smile         


Radhikaa jee aapki is kamyaab koshish par sekdoN daad aur mubarakbad hazir hai..

Likhati rahiye...
Khush O aabaad rahiye... Usual Smile

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile         
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«Reply #13 on: March 24, 2011, 12:52:07 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on March 23, 2011, 09:27:20 AM
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Ji Shukriya ... rachnaa ko pasand karne kaa !!
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«Reply #14 on: March 24, 2011, 03:01:12 PM »
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Uska Parda Ek Bahaana Tha Humse
Nazre UThti Thi Jhuki Hui

Chura Leta Hai Woh Aankh Ka Kajal
Shamaa Bhuj Jaati Hai Phir Jali Hui

Ek Muddat Baad Ye Jana Hamne
Aankhe Uski Bhi Thi Kuch Bhari Hui

Good One ... Radhika Ji !
Very Touching ... Good Expression ... dil se daad ... Clapping Smiley
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